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Фанфик мне понравился. Главный герой тоже зашёл. Он не ссыкло и не бесхребетный мудак, правда остальные персонажи так себе . Почти не раскрыты, ну кроме ся цинь юэ , но это все равно лучше подавляющего большинства других историй. Спасибо автору.
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I give a five star and hope the mc has a super massive harem in atg and please add sif in marvel harem...well, I would also like to see the captain karen marvel to be ****** yk the thing
I don't really want to curse, so I will just simply say: it isn't great. I understand that writing isn't easy, but try to at least check things on wiki, because that could really improve quality.
OOOOH YEAH!!! CAMMA FAKIN LET'S GOOO BABE!!! man I was just reading 'my fulfilling life ' for the unknown th time...that thing was a masterpiece...and here the mc comes again . I mainly am reading for the atg and marvel...I haven't read the novel yet but this is just my type of novel and I love the theme. well I will end this review here and add more after reading ☺️ ..ANDDD!! AUTHOR don't disappoint us dropping the novel please ...the masterpiece novels like 'my taboo system' , 'my fulfilling life' , ' true god's successor' , ' Incubus system' , ' customized sysytem in the multiverse' etc... have been dropped while some r taking a break or hitaus which is basically dropped all this broke my heart... please u don't drop 💧
not the best but a good start for a newbie...I have hopes for your future writing...I have noticed your way of writing is interesting...I am surprised you haven't dropped this fic like the many others...consistency matters even if you right badly...take care author...Next time develop your story well instead of rushing to make MC op from the start
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This is a great fanfic and the storyline is very interesting. I hope the sequel will be more interesting and good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter
I like the fact that mc is not a wuss like the most mc's after they get power but despite all that intelligence and such he still let's emotions get the best of him like she went after qinyue simply because of man pride the fact that she looked down on him made him feel bad or how after he acquired his body he directly said to the op goddess "you want a piece of this?" I think it's a negative and the novel will be probably more about collecting women rather than the story or the grind but i respect that and still with that many things can be done
Saya suka alur ceritanya dan sikap MC . Yang tidak mengumpulkan para gadis seperti pokemon yang dimilikinya... Meskipun mesum,tapi MC ini jujur dan merubah perilaku dan persepsi pemahaman tentang wanita yang dimilikinya.... Pokoknya bagus karyanya.. Saya dukung anda author sama 😂
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Not my cup of tea . After all when you write a novel/fanfic or whatever you need to have a contracdition/struggle to make a climax point somewhere in the story . When you go IM OP SINCE CHAP 1 route the story just lost an interisting point or a thing that make a reader feel like this novel is not bland after all who can be his opponent ? , can he be anything else other than MR.IMPOWERFUL ? , what is his point or goal ? or is it just gonna take a trash xian xia/chinese novel route where his opponent is a clown with no IQ existing just to faceslapping ? . I dont know i read like 10 chap and i dont see an interesting thing that make me want to continued reading this anymore .
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the mc is Op but thoughtful and does not act without reason, he does not think with his lower part. he is calculating but not without emotion. He is not a bloodthirsty murderer but does not mind killing if necessary. He does however try bloodshed as much as possible as he finds he does not need to get his hands dirty. I'm French so the English Grammar is not my thing but if it is readable for me I think it is sufficiently readable for any normal English .😅
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Sigh, I thought it will be good. I don't like the Mc, his actions, decisions, etc. It's quite dumb MC you know. He had a parallel thinking and boosted brain capacity but all his actions are unsatisfactory for me. I don't know is this an antihero mc. I just frustrated everytime I read the MC's action.
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I really liked the change in attitude the MC had in the last few chapters and it deserves the praise that you can take criticism into consideration and improve your writing, it's your first novel so no one should blame you for that. Also, the fact that you will only take a maximum of 4 girls from each world raises my expectations a lot, we all want to see sweet interactions and go deeper into their personalities and history, I read in another review that you wanted to create OP characters to counterbalance the MC, personally, I don't recommend it as it's not to anyone's liking.
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Somehow I think MC is forcing things too much, for example, in season 10, on the same day she met Qingyue, she went and declared herself her future husband. It makes me feel as if Qingyue is being blackmailed by her mother to sell herself to him.
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I give a five star and hope the mc has a super massive harem in atg and please add sif in marvel harem...well, I would also like to see the captain karen marvel to be ****** yk the thing
I don't really want to curse, so I will just simply say: it isn't great. I understand that writing isn't easy, but try to at least check things on wiki, because that could really improve quality.
OOOOH YEAH!!! CAMMA FAKIN LET'S GOOO BABE!!! man I was just reading 'my fulfilling life ' for the unknown th time...that thing was a masterpiece...and here the mc comes again . I mainly am reading for the atg and marvel...I haven't read the novel yet but this is just my type of novel and I love the theme. well I will end this review here and add more after reading ☺️ ..ANDDD!! AUTHOR don't disappoint us dropping the novel please ...the masterpiece novels like 'my taboo system' , 'my fulfilling life' , ' true god's successor' , ' Incubus system' , ' customized sysytem in the multiverse' etc... have been dropped while some r taking a break or hitaus which is basically dropped all this broke my heart... please u don't drop 💧
not the best but a good start for a newbie...I have hopes for your future writing...I have noticed your way of writing is interesting...I am surprised you haven't dropped this fic like the many others...consistency matters even if you right badly...take care author...Next time develop your story well instead of rushing to make MC op from the start
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This is a great fanfic and the storyline is very interesting. I hope the sequel will be more interesting and good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter
I like the fact that mc is not a wuss like the most mc's after they get power but despite all that intelligence and such he still let's emotions get the best of him like she went after qinyue simply because of man pride the fact that she looked down on him made him feel bad or how after he acquired his body he directly said to the op goddess "you want a piece of this?" I think it's a negative and the novel will be probably more about collecting women rather than the story or the grind but i respect that and still with that many things can be done
Saya suka alur ceritanya dan sikap MC . Yang tidak mengumpulkan para gadis seperti pokemon yang dimilikinya... Meskipun mesum,tapi MC ini jujur dan merubah perilaku dan persepsi pemahaman tentang wanita yang dimilikinya.... Pokoknya bagus karyanya.. Saya dukung anda author sama 😂
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Not my cup of tea . After all when you write a novel/fanfic or whatever you need to have a contracdition/struggle to make a climax point somewhere in the story . When you go IM OP SINCE CHAP 1 route the story just lost an interisting point or a thing that make a reader feel like this novel is not bland after all who can be his opponent ? , can he be anything else other than MR.IMPOWERFUL ? , what is his point or goal ? or is it just gonna take a trash xian xia/chinese novel route where his opponent is a clown with no IQ existing just to faceslapping ? . I dont know i read like 10 chap and i dont see an interesting thing that make me want to continued reading this anymore .
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the mc is Op but thoughtful and does not act without reason, he does not think with his lower part. he is calculating but not without emotion. He is not a bloodthirsty murderer but does not mind killing if necessary. He does however try bloodshed as much as possible as he finds he does not need to get his hands dirty. I'm French so the English Grammar is not my thing but if it is readable for me I think it is sufficiently readable for any normal English .😅
Muy bueno ++++++++++++?????? ++++++++++++++++++++? +++? +??? ++++++++? +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++???? ++? +? +??????? ++? ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Spoiler enthüllen Sigh, I thought it will be good. I don't like the Mc, his actions, decisions, etc. It's quite dumb MC you know. He had a parallel thinking and boosted brain capacity but all his actions are unsatisfactory for me. I don't know is this an antihero mc. I just frustrated everytime I read the MC's action.
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I really liked the change in attitude the MC had in the last few chapters and it deserves the praise that you can take criticism into consideration and improve your writing, it's your first novel so no one should blame you for that. Also, the fact that you will only take a maximum of 4 girls from each world raises my expectations a lot, we all want to see sweet interactions and go deeper into their personalities and history, I read in another review that you wanted to create OP characters to counterbalance the MC, personally, I don't recommend it as it's not to anyone's liking.
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Somehow I think MC is forcing things too much, for example, in season 10, on the same day she met Qingyue, she went and declared herself her future husband. It makes me feel as if Qingyue is being blackmailed by her mother to sell herself to him.
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