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It isn’t the greatest but it is still a top tier read. Especially one of the one piece ffs that isn’t abandoned or dropped. It is somewhat fast paced and short story but a great read nonetheless.
I like it honestly, one of the most well written fanfiction of One piece, the quality of writing is good, the development of the story is good and the post important thing is that there's no Hareem, just one green eyed female as a romance subject which is also good. thank you Mr. author for this novel.
Brilliant for a relatively short read. Loved the new ways that the powers of the one piece world were used.
sorry had to drop the story is well written and the MC is great but i am not reading a ff for the OCs lead femal is an OC it was well written OC but i just dont like them in a ff
It's amazing!! I was able to understand it quickly due to its writing style and able to picture it out of my mind perfectly, (just me though) although a bit other than that it's great.
I stopped reading at chapter 10 not because the story's bad or the writing quality is terrible. The story is actually actually good (so far atleast). I was just hoping for Canon One Piece characters to play important roles in the MC's life such as being the Love Interest. The Female OC is a well-written character so far with some tragic backstory so if you don't mind OC's being the Love Interest then I recommend this.
THANK YOU FOR THE NOVEL 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Loved the story. Excellent ending and character development of the main character. Loved the story. Excellent ending and character development of the main character. Loved the story. Excellent ending and character development of the main character.
Great Story. Loved It ! ....................................................................................................................
This was a fun quick read. The ending was a little rushed and lacking but i was satisfied. Which is saying something because most endings suck.
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Muy buena historia lamentablemente un poco corta pero valió mucho la pena. La recomiendo a todos aquellos fanáticos de fanfictions de One piece.
Excellent work. His characters are at all times consistent with their premises and goals. The way the MC manages to increase his power is really engaging, as well as very fluid. Well, English is my second language, so I can't express myself better. I really enjoyed it.
Man this book is so good the twists, the turns, it is nothing short of a master piece. The only thing I am sad about is that it is over already.
I absolutely love this fanfic..................👍 And I hope author update his other fanfics more frequently...🤞🤞 Also author good luck with your naruto fanfic.....Hope you have time now with that fanfic.....🤞🤞🤞
This story is very lovely and the ending ties all of the pieces together into a nice finish, but the end was rushed, and his power grew so fast with not much character development for others besides mc.
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Foi muito bom acompanhar esse romance até o fim, pena q tinha pouca história e menos capítulos, espero q vc faça um outro romance tão bom quanto esse. Obrigado por esse romance✌
I'm not really good at reviews but here's my opinion.. A good story, I'm surprised as to how it's not one of the popular op ff's out there. Writing quality is good, got some occasional wrong words but nobody's perfect right? Story development top notch I really like how the story goes and the pacing is good. character design, amazing, the mc's a loner, smart, cold?, ruthless(to those who stand in his way) ugh just read it I promise its good and oh uhh character development's top notch too and pretty realistic(for me though) And for the mc's love interest/fm(ina) some readers don't like her reasons being' she's a raped oc or whatnot and being the reader wanting to have a original character in op to be with mc, but In my opinion it's good cuz u know its on the mc's decision of who he loves but I don't care anyway I'm from the no harem sect and I came here not for the romance so yeah and there's plenty of 'romance with cannon characters ff' out there so just read some. And ina being a raped fm I think its reasonable cuz author is obviously writing in a more realistic way and I love that. World background auto 5 bruh it's op and like how the author writes in a more realistic pov
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Well good story but story update is slow like other fanfic of same author hope author will update this story regularly but story is very good
chapter 23 and the storyline "THE BEST"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
There's no way i can give you less than five stars. Your grammar, story telling, update consistency, and characters have all been amazing so far. And from what I've read, you can take a one piece fanfic in many directions. So this should be good. Gonna just go through all of your stories and read them all.
More and more ,this novel is vers amazing (sorry for my english ,i'm french) More and more ,More and more ,More and more ,MoreMore and more , and more ,
Nice short read. Enjoyed it. quite nice to see an ending instead of being dropped.
It isn’t the greatest but it is still a top tier read. Especially one of the one piece ffs that isn’t abandoned or dropped. It is somewhat fast paced and short story but a great read nonetheless.
I like it honestly, one of the most well written fanfiction of One piece, the quality of writing is good, the development of the story is good and the post important thing is that there's no Hareem, just one green eyed female as a romance subject which is also good. thank you Mr. author for this novel.
Brilliant for a relatively short read. Loved the new ways that the powers of the one piece world were used.
sorry had to drop the story is well written and the MC is great but i am not reading a ff for the OCs lead femal is an OC it was well written OC but i just dont like them in a ff
It's amazing!! I was able to understand it quickly due to its writing style and able to picture it out of my mind perfectly, (just me though) although a bit other than that it's great.
I stopped reading at chapter 10 not because the story's bad or the writing quality is terrible. The story is actually actually good (so far atleast). I was just hoping for Canon One Piece characters to play important roles in the MC's life such as being the Love Interest. The Female OC is a well-written character so far with some tragic backstory so if you don't mind OC's being the Love Interest then I recommend this.
THANK YOU FOR THE NOVEL 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Loved the story. Excellent ending and character development of the main character. Loved the story. Excellent ending and character development of the main character. Loved the story. Excellent ending and character development of the main character.
Great Story. Loved It ! ....................................................................................................................
This was a fun quick read. The ending was a little rushed and lacking but i was satisfied. Which is saying something because most endings suck.
Spoiler enthüllen Muy buena historia lamentablemente un poco corta pero valió mucho la pena. La recomiendo a todos aquellos fanáticos de fanfictions de One piece.
Excellent work. His characters are at all times consistent with their premises and goals. The way the MC manages to increase his power is really engaging, as well as very fluid. Well, English is my second language, so I can't express myself better. I really enjoyed it.
Man this book is so good the twists, the turns, it is nothing short of a master piece. The only thing I am sad about is that it is over already.
I absolutely love this fanfic..................👍 And I hope author update his other fanfics more frequently...🤞🤞 Also author good luck with your naruto fanfic.....Hope you have time now with that fanfic.....🤞🤞🤞
This story is very lovely and the ending ties all of the pieces together into a nice finish, but the end was rushed, and his power grew so fast with not much character development for others besides mc.
Spoiler enthüllen Foi muito bom acompanhar esse romance até o fim, pena q tinha pouca história e menos capítulos, espero q vc faça um outro romance tão bom quanto esse. Obrigado por esse romance✌
I'm not really good at reviews but here's my opinion.. A good story, I'm surprised as to how it's not one of the popular op ff's out there. Writing quality is good, got some occasional wrong words but nobody's perfect right? Story development top notch I really like how the story goes and the pacing is good. character design, amazing, the mc's a loner, smart, cold?, ruthless(to those who stand in his way) ugh just read it I promise its good and oh uhh character development's top notch too and pretty realistic(for me though) And for the mc's love interest/fm(ina) some readers don't like her reasons being' she's a raped oc or whatnot and being the reader wanting to have a original character in op to be with mc, but In my opinion it's good cuz u know its on the mc's decision of who he loves but I don't care anyway I'm from the no harem sect and I came here not for the romance so yeah and there's plenty of 'romance with cannon characters ff' out there so just read some. And ina being a raped fm I think its reasonable cuz author is obviously writing in a more realistic way and I love that. World background auto 5 bruh it's op and like how the author writes in a more realistic pov
Gramatically, top notch!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Well good story but story update is slow like other fanfic of same author hope author will update this story regularly but story is very good
chapter 23 and the storyline "THE BEST"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
There's no way i can give you less than five stars. Your grammar, story telling, update consistency, and characters have all been amazing so far. And from what I've read, you can take a one piece fanfic in many directions. So this should be good. Gonna just go through all of your stories and read them all.
More and more ,this novel is vers amazing (sorry for my english ,i'm french) More and more ,More and more ,More and more ,MoreMore and more , and more ,
Nice short read. Enjoyed it. quite nice to see an ending instead of being dropped.