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Although I haven't read too much of the story, I hope the mc doesn't lose his kingdom or something of the sort later on. Its just so cliched now, the weak to strong stories.
Please update this!! been done with the strongest guild master and been currently reading the rebirth of max as a vampire god. however, I kind of like this story more
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I'm fine with the character and story in fact I'm loving it but it's only 1 chapter per week and it's a very slow roll and since I'm guessing you want this story to be relatively long for what it's worth the current pace is going to bore the people who want to keep reading in response causing them to drop the book please make a new chapter at least 3 times a week because at this pace it's going to die out
I only do this for the chillax event........ I only do this for the chillax event........ I only do this for the chillax event........ I only do this for the chillax event........
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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
I've read almost all chapters now and currently am at chapter 111. I finally decided to do a review, since I have some things to criticize. And although I wanna point out those mistakes and let it look like I don't like the story, I definitely recommend it. 1. Writing Quality (3 stars): I hesitated, because I actually wanted to give this 2 stars, but decided on 3 stars at last. Firstly, I hope I'm speaking here for other readers too, I want to point out the arrangement of special characters. The author writes for example xxx , xxx. I think this somehow breaks the "flow" I'm in when I'm reading. I'd rather have it like xxx, xxx, since there's no gap between the first word and the comma. When he's introducing new cities and rivers, etc., he writes ' xxx '. I think that it's the same as before and should be 'xxx'. It's a similar case with the direct speech, as he places gaps between the word the : and the " and the next word. I think it should be written xxx: "xxx. Secondly, there's a thing I've recently noticed which is that the author capitalized the word ill in the middle of the sentence. Sometimes even names are written in completely lowercase letters. Thirdly, the overall grammar is a bit bad and I sometimes need to correct it myself, because otherwise I wouldn't understand what it means. 2. Story Development (4 stars): I like the development of the various characters, since it's pretty solid. However, I believe that the author made it unrealistic. Ronan, having a 9 star talent, should be much more capable than his brother Percy who has a 6.5 star talent. Ronan has the best talent one can possess and can't reach Percy. Though I can understand the fact that Percy wants to be stronger than Ronan as long as possible, the latter also pushes himself, because he wants to surpass the former. Another thing is that while Ronan was inside the cave of penance, Percy didn't train and as they both meet they're suddenly the same level? For me, the most powerful talent should be much more superior to a 6.5 one. 3. Character Design (5 stars): Though the explanation on how the characters look isn't really that detailed, I don't have any complaints. 4. Updating Stability (4 stars): He regularly upholds his stability, but sometimes doesn't upload a chapter. Though that is indeed the case, I can understand his struggle and don't blame him. 5. World background (5 stars): The world background is being told by the author and I got no complaints about it. It probably is the best category here and is very detailed compared to them. I hope my opinion helps others and was interesting to read. Before I tell you goodbye, let me say it again: I do recommend this book despite all these "mistakes".
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this book is amazing! i recommemd everyone who likes such books to read it, the character design is VERY good, the pacing is spot on, the story is also perfect, and the updating stability consistent, in short, i recommend it a lot.
Me after spending 100 coins on the book and giving it a Golden ticket. My coins: 0 Do I have to say more. It's a really nice book and was worthy of the stuff.
Let me just say your in for an experience. The story drags you in and won't let you go. As this is expected from a top 10 book author. and everything author-chan said is very true. so I recommend u read it
I am so glad I decided to read this book honestly I might have overlooked this book if I had not recognized the author and boy am I glad I did the plot, storyline, and characters are all top of the line
Good story Personally the story seems immature but itbis this immaturity which gives it its ‘uniqueness’ Please dont decrease the wuality and please do not drop it I like the fact that the character development is based in arrogance cos it seems he has still not learnt from his brother’s advice(i kinda like the attitude he shows sometimes though) Wonderful story
First 7 chapters and I'm in love with this novel. .. .. .. .. keep it up! can't wait for it to release the chapters fast. .. .. .. .. .. .. 👍🏻👍🏻🙂🙂🙂
Bro why are chapter stoped from uploading but love from India anyway bro keep up I know you must have a reson is it because of the contract with wb ..
it a good story from what I have read till now the world building is great and in this story you see how the character of mc is built from birth, which to be honest helps you to relate to the mc this novel has a lot of potential maybe better than the outher's other novel ,but in the end it all depends on him, only one problem that update status is not that good but other than that a good read
Fantastic story writing love from indian🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳 bro make it in trending 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 and plz mass realse to 50 chapter to make it recommend by webnovel on front opening
Reviewing this at 15 chapters that are out so far.. I don’t write reviews unless this novel is good, that being said this is my second real review. To start the whole ‘cultivation’ system is pretty unique in my opinion and I’m excited to see how it works throughout the rest of the novel. I also like how the characters are explained and fleshed out so far and world building can’t really be considered very much but so far we have somewhat of a good background of the empire the Draco family rules as well as the powers within. I’m really looking forward to this novel to take off with more chapters and have high expectations for this novel so far. Keep up the good work author, thank you!
I like the story, the Author is also the solid 3rd of my personal Favourites when it comes to books. I really enjoy reading his works and this one ist just awesome the Granddad and Father of the MC are complete Madman and I love it. Great Job done. I can only recommend reading both his books.
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it is good till chapter 12, especially the bond between the brothers. Need more chaps to get an overall view of this novel. Hope to get 2 chaps a day.😂
This book while still in the early stages (12 chapter at this time) has incredible potential. We haven’t even seen much of the MC yet and I’m already extremly excited about this novel. I have read the others other work and am expecting great things from this novel as well and so far it looks like it will deliver. The story seems incredibly interesting, all the elements are added in good amounts without any being excessive. There are a little slips with the update stability however this is just because it’s in the early stages and its only ever one day at a time. The early chapters also do a great job at setting the pace for the rest of the story and already have some great world building. Would definetly reccomend giving this book a try!
Ten chapters in and I‘m already hooked. As expected of the author of rebirth of the strongest guild master, this is already a masterpiece. I hope he continues to write this. I’m really looking forward for future chapters.
The author has put a lot of effort into this book. Loved all the chapters so far had a different approach than most of the novels, it's a must read for all looking for something new.
so far i realy like this novel and I love your other novel as well I hope later he developes the cursed power fjdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdndjckdbs
I used to be a fan of Indian mythology and I like where the story is going so far . Hope this one will break the records of your other one on Webnovel.
I’m writing this before I start reading but from the previous book I have read by the author the quality of this book will be outstanding. I hope that people will check out his other book after reading this one.
What can i say author is fire and his other work is fire so this novel must be fire I hope you all give both author novel a try before then decide if you don't like it or not don't be like this people who look at one chapter or 2 then stop give it a try in tell 20+ chapter
As an author i don't do self reviews. I did not do it even for my other top 10 novel , but i am going to have to do one for this. This is my dream project , I can confidently say it will be the best story you ever read. Soo here is what you can expect from this book : 1) No cheats , but OP MC through natural talent 2) Side characters that matter 3) A solid world building 4) No fillers 5) No cliche romance or brainless female characters. 6) A IMMERSIVE STORY If you guys have the patience to read this review and were looking for a good webnovel to read , then this is what you were looking for!
gotta be honest Ronan Phoenix had a good ring to it, Ronan Draco just doesn't provide that same ring, still like the opening though. need more words for review
Great story, but the author just abandoned the story. About halfway through the story, he starts threatening to abandon it if it doesn’t start seeing more success.
Although I haven't read too much of the story, I hope the mc doesn't lose his kingdom or something of the sort later on. Its just so cliched now, the weak to strong stories.
Please update this!! been done with the strongest guild master and been currently reading the rebirth of max as a vampire god. however, I kind of like this story more
Spoiler enthüllen I'm fine with the character and story in fact I'm loving it but it's only 1 chapter per week and it's a very slow roll and since I'm guessing you want this story to be relatively long for what it's worth the current pace is going to bore the people who want to keep reading in response causing them to drop the book please make a new chapter at least 3 times a week because at this pace it's going to die out
I only do this for the chillax event........ I only do this for the chillax event........ I only do this for the chillax event........ I only do this for the chillax event........
Spoiler enthüllen 1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
I've read almost all chapters now and currently am at chapter 111. I finally decided to do a review, since I have some things to criticize. And although I wanna point out those mistakes and let it look like I don't like the story, I definitely recommend it. 1. Writing Quality (3 stars): I hesitated, because I actually wanted to give this 2 stars, but decided on 3 stars at last. Firstly, I hope I'm speaking here for other readers too, I want to point out the arrangement of special characters. The author writes for example xxx , xxx. I think this somehow breaks the "flow" I'm in when I'm reading. I'd rather have it like xxx, xxx, since there's no gap between the first word and the comma. When he's introducing new cities and rivers, etc., he writes ' xxx '. I think that it's the same as before and should be 'xxx'. It's a similar case with the direct speech, as he places gaps between the word the : and the " and the next word. I think it should be written xxx: "xxx. Secondly, there's a thing I've recently noticed which is that the author capitalized the word ill in the middle of the sentence. Sometimes even names are written in completely lowercase letters. Thirdly, the overall grammar is a bit bad and I sometimes need to correct it myself, because otherwise I wouldn't understand what it means. 2. Story Development (4 stars): I like the development of the various characters, since it's pretty solid. However, I believe that the author made it unrealistic. Ronan, having a 9 star talent, should be much more capable than his brother Percy who has a 6.5 star talent. Ronan has the best talent one can possess and can't reach Percy. Though I can understand the fact that Percy wants to be stronger than Ronan as long as possible, the latter also pushes himself, because he wants to surpass the former. Another thing is that while Ronan was inside the cave of penance, Percy didn't train and as they both meet they're suddenly the same level? For me, the most powerful talent should be much more superior to a 6.5 one. 3. Character Design (5 stars): Though the explanation on how the characters look isn't really that detailed, I don't have any complaints. 4. Updating Stability (4 stars): He regularly upholds his stability, but sometimes doesn't upload a chapter. Though that is indeed the case, I can understand his struggle and don't blame him. 5. World background (5 stars): The world background is being told by the author and I got no complaints about it. It probably is the best category here and is very detailed compared to them. I hope my opinion helps others and was interesting to read. Before I tell you goodbye, let me say it again: I do recommend this book despite all these "mistakes".
Spoiler enthüllen this book is amazing! i recommemd everyone who likes such books to read it, the character design is VERY good, the pacing is spot on, the story is also perfect, and the updating stability consistent, in short, i recommend it a lot.
Me after spending 100 coins on the book and giving it a Golden ticket. My coins: 0 Do I have to say more. It's a really nice book and was worthy of the stuff.
Let me just say your in for an experience. The story drags you in and won't let you go. As this is expected from a top 10 book author. and everything author-chan said is very true. so I recommend u read it
I am so glad I decided to read this book honestly I might have overlooked this book if I had not recognized the author and boy am I glad I did the plot, storyline, and characters are all top of the line
Good story Personally the story seems immature but itbis this immaturity which gives it its ‘uniqueness’ Please dont decrease the wuality and please do not drop it I like the fact that the character development is based in arrogance cos it seems he has still not learnt from his brother’s advice(i kinda like the attitude he shows sometimes though) Wonderful story
First 7 chapters and I'm in love with this novel. .. .. .. .. keep it up! can't wait for it to release the chapters fast. .. .. .. .. .. .. 👍🏻👍🏻🙂🙂🙂
Bro why are chapter stoped from uploading but love from India anyway bro keep up I know you must have a reson is it because of the contract with wb ..
it a good story from what I have read till now the world building is great and in this story you see how the character of mc is built from birth, which to be honest helps you to relate to the mc this novel has a lot of potential maybe better than the outher's other novel ,but in the end it all depends on him, only one problem that update status is not that good but other than that a good read
Fantastic story writing love from indian🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳 bro make it in trending 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 and plz mass realse to 50 chapter to make it recommend by webnovel on front opening
Reviewing this at 15 chapters that are out so far.. I don’t write reviews unless this novel is good, that being said this is my second real review. To start the whole ‘cultivation’ system is pretty unique in my opinion and I’m excited to see how it works throughout the rest of the novel. I also like how the characters are explained and fleshed out so far and world building can’t really be considered very much but so far we have somewhat of a good background of the empire the Draco family rules as well as the powers within. I’m really looking forward to this novel to take off with more chapters and have high expectations for this novel so far. Keep up the good work author, thank you!
I like the story, the Author is also the solid 3rd of my personal Favourites when it comes to books. I really enjoy reading his works and this one ist just awesome the Granddad and Father of the MC are complete Madman and I love it. Great Job done. I can only recommend reading both his books.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it is good till chapter 12, especially the bond between the brothers. Need more chaps to get an overall view of this novel. Hope to get 2 chaps a day.😂
This book while still in the early stages (12 chapter at this time) has incredible potential. We haven’t even seen much of the MC yet and I’m already extremly excited about this novel. I have read the others other work and am expecting great things from this novel as well and so far it looks like it will deliver. The story seems incredibly interesting, all the elements are added in good amounts without any being excessive. There are a little slips with the update stability however this is just because it’s in the early stages and its only ever one day at a time. The early chapters also do a great job at setting the pace for the rest of the story and already have some great world building. Would definetly reccomend giving this book a try!
Ten chapters in and I‘m already hooked. As expected of the author of rebirth of the strongest guild master, this is already a masterpiece. I hope he continues to write this. I’m really looking forward for future chapters.
The author has put a lot of effort into this book. Loved all the chapters so far had a different approach than most of the novels, it's a must read for all looking for something new.
so far i realy like this novel and I love your other novel as well I hope later he developes the cursed power fjdhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdndjckdbs
I used to be a fan of Indian mythology and I like where the story is going so far . Hope this one will break the records of your other one on Webnovel.
I’m writing this before I start reading but from the previous book I have read by the author the quality of this book will be outstanding. I hope that people will check out his other book after reading this one.
What can i say author is fire and his other work is fire so this novel must be fire I hope you all give both author novel a try before then decide if you don't like it or not don't be like this people who look at one chapter or 2 then stop give it a try in tell 20+ chapter
As an author i don't do self reviews. I did not do it even for my other top 10 novel , but i am going to have to do one for this. This is my dream project , I can confidently say it will be the best story you ever read. Soo here is what you can expect from this book : 1) No cheats , but OP MC through natural talent 2) Side characters that matter 3) A solid world building 4) No fillers 5) No cliche romance or brainless female characters. 6) A IMMERSIVE STORY If you guys have the patience to read this review and were looking for a good webnovel to read , then this is what you were looking for!
gotta be honest Ronan Phoenix had a good ring to it, Ronan Draco just doesn't provide that same ring, still like the opening though. need more words for review
Great story, but the author just abandoned the story. About halfway through the story, he starts threatening to abandon it if it doesn’t start seeing more success.