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Instant 5* can't believe I came upon this gem when I'm on my way to FL novels. Mc is selfish but caring toward his loved ones. If you are tired of harem novels (like I am) this novel is for you. The romance is progress very quickly so you don't need to wait 100+ chapters, best thing in this novel is that they also show side character relationships (I know some harem novels have that too but they always end up being overshadowed by Mc and his harem). Ps:I'm bad at reviews, anyway xD do your best author!! I absolutely love this novel and I hope you will continue until the very end (I'll be here with you 😊)
The blurb is a lie. Rio is not the main character, Link is. The favoritism is so blatant and for some odd reason, the author seems confused that we call him out on it. I will say that he has done a fantastic job of making Rio an extra not only in the novel world but also his reincarnated one as well. I would say the author is cooking something extraordinary for Rio, but I no longer trust him. I was astonished he won at the competition, though I side eye him that he only did that so the readers don’t stage a mass protest. Grammar leaves a lot to be desired, the earlier chapters are atrocious and I urge the author to edit those chapters. This is a character driven book so 6/5 for bringing so many characters to life. World building is great and the romance is cute without being full of dramatic misunderstandings. Despite my frustration with Rio always getting the short end of the stick and Link being the real Mc, I do like the novel and can’t wait to see how the story develops. One particular plot I’m waiting on is Kira, I have my suspicions about her so I can’t wait to see if I’m right. If you can get past the grammar, I believe you will find the novel enjoyable. Good job author.
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It's a pretty decent and light story that stays interesting, I spent about $40 US on coins to read up to around ch180. At that point I just had to stop. I can't pay over 100$ on a single webnovel.
I genuinely enjoy the story, but the frequent authorial commentary can be distracting. I prefer novels with a more serious tone, as it helps me feel fully immersed in the narrative and more emotionally invested in the characters and their journeys. That said, I really like the protagonist so far. I just wish the story leaned more into seriousness or drama, allowing the characters’ actions to have deeper consequences. Of course, if the author’s intent is to keep things lighthearted, that’s understandable but I can’t help feeling that the story has so much potential to shine as a more traditional, dramatic work rather than a comedic one.
Disclaimer: I've only read the first 31st (free) chapters. I don't mind it being cliche, but everything is bland. The writing is one of, if not, the main issue. I would suggest the author add more structure going forward because right now, it is a mess: the sentence structures and tenses are all over the place, author notes are added in the middle of the chapters (more on that later) and the narration is basic, at best. The pacing does not let you immerse yourself in the novel because the reader is simply flown from one point of interest to another with barely some background info on what is happening as a whole, and the rest is time skipped. Finally, the most infuriating thing about this novel are the author's notes in the middle of the chapters. Not even speaking about the 4th wall, the notes explaining what the few lines before implied are the worst, removing fluidity of an already tedious read.
honesly in a way it's garbage ,there's no character development or any proper interactions with characters ,scenarios? it's just stupid so far after reading till chapter 60
Novel is really good.but rio doesn't seem to be the protagonist.link seemed like a protagonist with his background, skills and character.the story's flow depicted link as the protagonist.Also author just kill fade.
anyone who wants to beat fade then congratulations and reply on this for hor to beat him and to destroy his harem by cancellation of his protection of heavens by summoning a new villain 'heaven destroyer' or 'fate destroyer' ☠️☠️ make this top review so that author has to do it.......
The novel is amazing, the world building is very good and isn't a masses like other novels, the power system is good and interesting, I love the fact that there more the one male lead any giving them their own development and backstory, love the comedy and joke between the characters and their bond
Peak......................................................................................................................................................................................................Peak.
It’s pretty good, there is just way too many useless chapters. The author will mark some of them as filler but not all of them. I found myself skipping around chapters because it felt like some chapters were just drawn out explanations or had no contribution to the development of the plot.
im only at chap 110 but here's my opinion the novel is not that good , its very cliche and cringe , the author sounds like a 15yo , there is no major plot or anything, its just mid, below mid tbh ,
I dislike how often the author feels the need to write his thoughts inside the chapters. There's 4th wall and there's this.. whatever this is. Makes the novel feel cheap and unimersive. Also the way he portrays the original feels very sloppy, like I get it usually in this genre they make the original mc look hypocritical etc. but this is just levels bellow of how it should be done, just sloppy work, make the plot make sense? Like I get it you intentionally want to show that it doesn't make sense but you missed the mark along the way. 2.8 rating and I am being slightly generous. Waste of time
The rating could have been more but your writing style needs some improvement, 1. Improve your vocabulary a bit as the the story is good the plot is good too, and please stop with the inner monologue every chapter or keep it for twists in situation so that viewers can understand what may have happened behind the scenes, because it makes the Male Lead look a bit Chuunibyou in my opinion to be honest, And if you are going to add the monologue in normal situations for humour , you should keep it to a minimum because too much can take the fun out of it 2. You don't need to add who said the dialogues in brackets at the end of every dialogue ,you can just say at the start who started the conversation and keep it going from there. 3. There are a bit of grammatical mistakes which could be improved upon. Well its up to you if you decide to add these changes or if you already have because I am around 30 chapters in the story, well, if you did the changes already, good! Thanks for the novel!
The writing and delivery is terrible, starts with the academy life without even describing what sort of classes were happening or what sort of training the mc is doing. Not to mention the numerous grammatical errors in each chapter. Read it if you're here just for the edgy mc trope.
The world, background characters, main characters and other things are extremely good I will rate it 8 of 10. Keep writing more of this and why not make rio and link the strongest and make rio more motivated to be the strongest sword of the world and make him the death God or something with his sword intent to kill alverto
so here is a thing I am following this novel from the start whatever anybody has to say author Mann I loved you......well I kinda already told you [img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep up the work and Mann I need your more work,more novels don't stop well it might be Selfish but I really like to read tour work.i really dont care about any grammatical mistakes what I care is story and you got that the besttttt well love you again author ❤️ I hope you see your lovers 😃 [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a shitty novel, no training montage avg talent - steals cheat - boom unlimited talent avg stats -1 month later boom E+ , 4 month later D+, 15 days later boom C Man common Mc is edge Lord, he shows no feeling in particular , does not do anything to stop harem Lord and mc casually does saving the villainess, act like no big deal when he literally has no frnd after I dunno half a year , talk to no one else does not help anyone else This is a god dam straight bad novel
worth your time & money 👍👍 & don't get angry author since u might get diabetes when they are together ❤
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The story itself is interesting, and I appreciate the secondary characters. The only problem is the writing, the way the author tells the story doesn't convey any emotion to the reader. If I had to give a compliment, it would be for the humor.
we hate fade. we love rio. we love lia *heart emoji* *heart emoji* *heart emoji*
Honestly, this is one of the few stories i keep on a standby. most of the good ones i read felt like the plot took forever to move, this story isnt that too fast passed to be honest. The World building is great. The majority of my questions about the world are pretty much answered now, but i just hope Rio and the crew takes awhile LIKE 50 ish chapters until they get to S rank(but tbh considering that rio and link are already at the peak of A rank makes it hmmm hard to do unless breaking through is not so hard like how the elven prince did it, and maybe the privilege chaps already have them At rank S idk.)like fr i get that the cast is talented af and i get that they'll blaze through the lower ranks cus its "within the limit of their race" so a hard time to break through would be a good change of pace. maybe flesh out the current first years more cus i found them very interesting, But totes. only gripe about it is the few grammar mistakes, its not so bad. but i'll just deduct a star for the writing quality tl:dr the fast pacing AINT TOO FAST, minor grammar mistakes(altho probably already fixed, but to lazy to backread all the chaps). and overall a good story, with some good world building
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Your stories are really too good I've read both of your work and they are the best...To bad I can't pay for locked chapters,if not I'd probably use my entire fortune . Just keep up the good work
Well I am reading this novel from beginning till now and honestly in beginning it was normal but from second year arc I should say literally it is one of my most favourite novel * There are many fun scenes * Character development is good * MC doesn't hides his powers * story development is great it is getting interesting * tournament arc was one of the best and rio price and entrance ceremony gave goosebumps literally his given nickname and announcements dialogue was best. I only regret the ending of Zack he was fun person
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If weren’t for the abhorrent misspelling and grammatical errors, it would be a decent read, but still kinda tough to enjoy the actual story cause the author will info dump you almost every third paragraph. Which feels like it is on purpose to raise the word count so the chapter cost more coins. For a first time writer the author isn’t the worst i’ve seen and it is somewhat still enjoyable but very taxing to read, because all the author does is word spaghetti. Which means most of the time the author has a hard time trying to figure out what to say, so sometimes the chapter is 75% an info dump. The pacing or flow could use a bit more work. Action scenes are alright but needs a lot more work, but to be fair writing good action scenes is hard. Author you just need to plan a bit more on the build up to the climax. Plot could also use a bit more fleshing out with a clear path forward.
best novel ..................................................................................................................................
So, here's the author's shameless review, in short, the world-building in the novel is based on a modern world with awakened people our mc transmigrates into this world and becomes an extra. I will do my best to ensure that a regular update is done🤔. Thank you🙂
Instant 5* can't believe I came upon this gem when I'm on my way to FL novels. Mc is selfish but caring toward his loved ones. If you are tired of harem novels (like I am) this novel is for you. The romance is progress very quickly so you don't need to wait 100+ chapters, best thing in this novel is that they also show side character relationships (I know some harem novels have that too but they always end up being overshadowed by Mc and his harem). Ps:I'm bad at reviews, anyway xD do your best author!! I absolutely love this novel and I hope you will continue until the very end (I'll be here with you 😊)
The blurb is a lie. Rio is not the main character, Link is. The favoritism is so blatant and for some odd reason, the author seems confused that we call him out on it. I will say that he has done a fantastic job of making Rio an extra not only in the novel world but also his reincarnated one as well. I would say the author is cooking something extraordinary for Rio, but I no longer trust him. I was astonished he won at the competition, though I side eye him that he only did that so the readers don’t stage a mass protest. Grammar leaves a lot to be desired, the earlier chapters are atrocious and I urge the author to edit those chapters. This is a character driven book so 6/5 for bringing so many characters to life. World building is great and the romance is cute without being full of dramatic misunderstandings. Despite my frustration with Rio always getting the short end of the stick and Link being the real Mc, I do like the novel and can’t wait to see how the story develops. One particular plot I’m waiting on is Kira, I have my suspicions about her so I can’t wait to see if I’m right. If you can get past the grammar, I believe you will find the novel enjoyable. Good job author.
Spoiler enthüllen It's a pretty decent and light story that stays interesting, I spent about $40 US on coins to read up to around ch180. At that point I just had to stop. I can't pay over 100$ on a single webnovel.
I genuinely enjoy the story, but the frequent authorial commentary can be distracting. I prefer novels with a more serious tone, as it helps me feel fully immersed in the narrative and more emotionally invested in the characters and their journeys. That said, I really like the protagonist so far. I just wish the story leaned more into seriousness or drama, allowing the characters’ actions to have deeper consequences. Of course, if the author’s intent is to keep things lighthearted, that’s understandable but I can’t help feeling that the story has so much potential to shine as a more traditional, dramatic work rather than a comedic one.
Disclaimer: I've only read the first 31st (free) chapters. I don't mind it being cliche, but everything is bland. The writing is one of, if not, the main issue. I would suggest the author add more structure going forward because right now, it is a mess: the sentence structures and tenses are all over the place, author notes are added in the middle of the chapters (more on that later) and the narration is basic, at best. The pacing does not let you immerse yourself in the novel because the reader is simply flown from one point of interest to another with barely some background info on what is happening as a whole, and the rest is time skipped. Finally, the most infuriating thing about this novel are the author's notes in the middle of the chapters. Not even speaking about the 4th wall, the notes explaining what the few lines before implied are the worst, removing fluidity of an already tedious read.
honesly in a way it's garbage ,there's no character development or any proper interactions with characters ,scenarios? it's just stupid so far after reading till chapter 60
Novel is really good.but rio doesn't seem to be the protagonist.link seemed like a protagonist with his background, skills and character.the story's flow depicted link as the protagonist.Also author just kill fade.
anyone who wants to beat fade then congratulations and reply on this for hor to beat him and to destroy his harem by cancellation of his protection of heavens by summoning a new villain 'heaven destroyer' or 'fate destroyer' ☠️☠️ make this top review so that author has to do it.......
The novel is amazing, the world building is very good and isn't a masses like other novels, the power system is good and interesting, I love the fact that there more the one male lead any giving them their own development and backstory, love the comedy and joke between the characters and their bond
Peak......................................................................................................................................................................................................Peak.
It’s pretty good, there is just way too many useless chapters. The author will mark some of them as filler but not all of them. I found myself skipping around chapters because it felt like some chapters were just drawn out explanations or had no contribution to the development of the plot.
im only at chap 110 but here's my opinion the novel is not that good , its very cliche and cringe , the author sounds like a 15yo , there is no major plot or anything, its just mid, below mid tbh ,
I dislike how often the author feels the need to write his thoughts inside the chapters. There's 4th wall and there's this.. whatever this is. Makes the novel feel cheap and unimersive. Also the way he portrays the original feels very sloppy, like I get it usually in this genre they make the original mc look hypocritical etc. but this is just levels bellow of how it should be done, just sloppy work, make the plot make sense? Like I get it you intentionally want to show that it doesn't make sense but you missed the mark along the way. 2.8 rating and I am being slightly generous. Waste of time
The rating could have been more but your writing style needs some improvement, 1. Improve your vocabulary a bit as the the story is good the plot is good too, and please stop with the inner monologue every chapter or keep it for twists in situation so that viewers can understand what may have happened behind the scenes, because it makes the Male Lead look a bit Chuunibyou in my opinion to be honest, And if you are going to add the monologue in normal situations for humour , you should keep it to a minimum because too much can take the fun out of it 2. You don't need to add who said the dialogues in brackets at the end of every dialogue ,you can just say at the start who started the conversation and keep it going from there. 3. There are a bit of grammatical mistakes which could be improved upon. Well its up to you if you decide to add these changes or if you already have because I am around 30 chapters in the story, well, if you did the changes already, good! Thanks for the novel!
The writing and delivery is terrible, starts with the academy life without even describing what sort of classes were happening or what sort of training the mc is doing. Not to mention the numerous grammatical errors in each chapter. Read it if you're here just for the edgy mc trope.
The world, background characters, main characters and other things are extremely good I will rate it 8 of 10. Keep writing more of this and why not make rio and link the strongest and make rio more motivated to be the strongest sword of the world and make him the death God or something with his sword intent to kill alverto
so here is a thing I am following this novel from the start whatever anybody has to say author Mann I loved you......well I kinda already told you [img=recommend][img=recommend] please keep up the work and Mann I need your more work,more novels don't stop well it might be Selfish but I really like to read tour work.i really dont care about any grammatical mistakes what I care is story and you got that the besttttt well love you again author ❤️ I hope you see your lovers 😃 [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a shitty novel, no training montage avg talent - steals cheat - boom unlimited talent avg stats -1 month later boom E+ , 4 month later D+, 15 days later boom C Man common Mc is edge Lord, he shows no feeling in particular , does not do anything to stop harem Lord and mc casually does saving the villainess, act like no big deal when he literally has no frnd after I dunno half a year , talk to no one else does not help anyone else This is a god dam straight bad novel
worth your time & money 👍👍 & don't get angry author since u might get diabetes when they are together ❤
Spoiler enthüllen The story itself is interesting, and I appreciate the secondary characters. The only problem is the writing, the way the author tells the story doesn't convey any emotion to the reader. If I had to give a compliment, it would be for the humor.
we hate fade. we love rio. we love lia *heart emoji* *heart emoji* *heart emoji*
Honestly, this is one of the few stories i keep on a standby. most of the good ones i read felt like the plot took forever to move, this story isnt that too fast passed to be honest. The World building is great. The majority of my questions about the world are pretty much answered now, but i just hope Rio and the crew takes awhile LIKE 50 ish chapters until they get to S rank(but tbh considering that rio and link are already at the peak of A rank makes it hmmm hard to do unless breaking through is not so hard like how the elven prince did it, and maybe the privilege chaps already have them At rank S idk.)like fr i get that the cast is talented af and i get that they'll blaze through the lower ranks cus its "within the limit of their race" so a hard time to break through would be a good change of pace. maybe flesh out the current first years more cus i found them very interesting, But totes. only gripe about it is the few grammar mistakes, its not so bad. but i'll just deduct a star for the writing quality tl:dr the fast pacing AINT TOO FAST, minor grammar mistakes(altho probably already fixed, but to lazy to backread all the chaps). and overall a good story, with some good world building
Spoiler enthüllen Your stories are really too good I've read both of your work and they are the best...To bad I can't pay for locked chapters,if not I'd probably use my entire fortune . Just keep up the good work
Well I am reading this novel from beginning till now and honestly in beginning it was normal but from second year arc I should say literally it is one of my most favourite novel * There are many fun scenes * Character development is good * MC doesn't hides his powers * story development is great it is getting interesting * tournament arc was one of the best and rio price and entrance ceremony gave goosebumps literally his given nickname and announcements dialogue was best. I only regret the ending of Zack he was fun person
Spoiler enthüllen If weren’t for the abhorrent misspelling and grammatical errors, it would be a decent read, but still kinda tough to enjoy the actual story cause the author will info dump you almost every third paragraph. Which feels like it is on purpose to raise the word count so the chapter cost more coins. For a first time writer the author isn’t the worst i’ve seen and it is somewhat still enjoyable but very taxing to read, because all the author does is word spaghetti. Which means most of the time the author has a hard time trying to figure out what to say, so sometimes the chapter is 75% an info dump. The pacing or flow could use a bit more work. Action scenes are alright but needs a lot more work, but to be fair writing good action scenes is hard. Author you just need to plan a bit more on the build up to the climax. Plot could also use a bit more fleshing out with a clear path forward.
best novel ..................................................................................................................................
So, here's the author's shameless review, in short, the world-building in the novel is based on a modern world with awakened people our mc transmigrates into this world and becomes an extra. I will do my best to ensure that a regular update is done🤔. Thank you🙂