129Rezensionen
4.28
- Qualität des Schreibens
- Veröffentlichungsstabilität
- Geschichtenentwicklung
- Charakter-Design
- Welthintergrund
Teilen Sie Ihre Gedanken mit anderen
Schreiben Sie eine Rezension
This novel definetly not bad and not that good, not bad for the romance and not much drama just for romance. Something i dont like is MC think himself as an extra and dont wana get in trouble cus he is an extra. Hmm, for mc personalty he is definetly good guy he will save stranger if has the power to do so and can come out alive. Biggest problem i have from MC is he kinda idiot IMO not because he do anything stupid, it just MC cannot realize something as novel reader himself. That is that i can conclude in 30 chapter. Hope author receive this kindly
The best thing you could ever read that’s all I have to say the novel does the rest
The initial chapters were below average and felt like the author was new to writing a novel. There was a severe lack of explanations and buildups and so many unresolved plot points. But later on, the quality improved and the recent chapters are of much higher quality. I am looking forward to future chapters.
I will make an honest evaluation: This is a novel with a well-known style, a boy who reincarnates in the body of a background character from a novel he read and blah blah blah. As far as I have read, it was enjoyable, but nothing too extravagant; it's something to pass the time. For future readers, it's worth mentioning that the novel is not perfect. The dialogues are quite simple and there is no plot or anything that excites the reader (at least from what I have read). But there is a good side: the novel is straightforward and without much beating around the bush, so we see the MC quickly developing in strength and romantically as well, since the author makes it clear who the MC's love interest will be, and they start dating in the early chapters. From my point of view, this was a good thing, as it breaks the tradition of most novels where the MC only gets into a relationship in the final chapters, so this earned it a positive point. In the end, my rating is a 6.5. The reading is pleasant and the chapters draw you to the next one. For those who want a simple and straightforward read, it's a good choice.
Spoiler enthüllen
It's not bad lots of grammar mistakes, also really childish. Many mistakes with the power system. Because 100 points on every stat is supposively the strenght of a peak rank A but then Link somehow is at the same level as him. Also when he surpasses the 100 threshold with his concentration ability which means some of his stats go to 140 he still can't even touch a rank S kind of confusing.
Spoiler enthüllen
enjoyable so far chapter 30. I've always enjoyed transmigration stories but it's nice to see one with butterfly effects
Spoiler enthüllen
Unfortunately, I arrived hopeful and left disappointed. I know it's fast paced, but I didn't think it would be a report. without any emotion, the mc arrives at the location as if he were cutting vegetables, in a completely direct way, without any suspense and then quickly returns to the same location, without arousing any emotion in the reader. Instead of wanting to keep reading, you just want to skip it all and go straight to the end. as the protagonist, which makes the story very monotonous to read.
can you change the characters pics?☺️☺️ ultimatety Rio pls this novel is soo good that I can't stop reading it 🤣 i recommend you read because this is masterpiece 😁😉
Honestly, good concept and good story. But in my opinion, it is too unbearable to write at the end of each line who is speaking. It completely breaks the immersion. I tried to put up with it, but it makes me cranky every time I read it. I understand that it may be difficult for the author to make it clear who is speaking, but this is lazy writing, and it was certainly not a good solution for me. Furthermore, if I did not know who was speaking, I would find out only at the end of the line. How could immersion be good then? But seeing as how few people mention it, maybe it's just me. It's sad to stop reading a good story because of things like that, although it's not perfect, I quite like the concept, and I've always liked this genre, but well... Good luck to the author!
Story gave me chills on chapter 27 i like the main heroine i wished they made the main character of the novel Fade more evil and perverted but that is just temporary fulfillment a good and would probably ruin the story later on
honestly the novel was decent just how the grammar is my god made me want to commit a hate crime
I will start with the good then the bad. ------------ Good: A very entertaining read. I enjoyed the story all the way. I would recommend anyone thinking of reading this to give it a try. I won't go too much into why it's good, just read other reviews for that. --------------- Bad: There are mainly 4 problems with this story: 1- Author had no vision for how the story would turn out and the process, only the concept/premise at the start was deliberate. This style of going impromptu and seeing where this goes without setting any short term goals nor long term goals for the story just makes it hollow. Author is following the whims of readers, If readers wanted skill he'll give skill. Problem here is that this causes plot holes and author has to add author notes to explain them and then along the chapters more plot holes appear and author again gives plausible explanations and we fall into a rabbit hole. Events or things that happened in past chapters aren't properly remembered in future chapters by auther. In future chapters when it's mentioned that this event happened, if you go back to that event then you find that it's wrong. Author didn't remember it right, so these future chapters will be built on a false memory. 2- Author thoughts and pauses to story throughout chapters. You can tell author is new to writing since author has to explain in brackets why things happen and gives info dumps regularly, author didn't set the rules of the world beforehand, so he comes up with plausible explanations for world rules or events as the story goes. Honestly it just takes me out of the immersion in the story. 3- Characters have bad character design. Only Lia and Riya stayed true to their design, but others not so. How? At the start, every character is shown with his personality clear, an arrogant guy, a narcissist guy, an emotionless guy, a sadistic guy, and so on. The problem comes when we progress in the story, without any gradual changes, they suddenly display weird characteristics and everyone acts as if they were like that from the start. and don't tell me that's love working its magic. Love influences but doesn't change the core personality of someone. especially when that love was there long before the changes, for example, A sadistic guy that's used to being at the top of the world with everyone respecting him like the king that didn't talk much suddenly is a meathead and acts like a puppy and doesn't mind others not respecting him, If it's gradual then I'd understand, but it happened in one chapter. Same goes for Liam, he was the quiet type and smart and calculating, but then suddenly he teases and says stuff only friends of years would say. It just feels author is making them all turn out to be that silly friend group with no prior indication, these changes happen suddenly. No character development. just some lines explain that, like "you've already told me that more than 50 times in our last few hangouts", the process of a character changing is important, but we don't get to see that. 4- Author forgot the purpose of this story, we rarely see MC as extra and the protagonist is left unlucky and forgotten. Now MC is a bonafide Protagonist, he's the center of the world, I don't mind that, but what I do mind is breaking the premise that the original protagonist has the heavens luck by his side but is trash, he's now rarely seen and when seen he's got nothing, no harem and no power. don't say MC stole his powers, protagonist has exp based system where he can power up without other cheats. 5- Author feels to me like a weeb that lived watching anime and is writing based on his knowledge from anime, so myth, facts, historical events, character traits and personalities are built upon the cliche from anime. Same is happening here, it feels like characters are based on fictional friend groups (like avengers) they joke around mid fight and are childish while they are mid fight, this only happens in anime or marvel movies to add comedy with light hearted banter. Romance just just feels skewed, all the relationships I see here are built on banter. Guy teases girl, girl gets mad but blush. While it's sweet and wholesome reading the scenes, it gets tiring when all relationships here are built on banter.
I dropped it. why, cuz female lead is tsudere, and I hate tsuderes. No grudges author, this is just my personal review. Like bruh, if you like someone, why must you (face attitude) antagonize the person. I feel tsuderes are just self centered narcissistic people who don't know how to express their interest or feelings for someone and don't give that "I love her regardless " ," she's kinda cute with that angry face" b**lsh*t. It make me cringe
The grammar really holds this work back he describes the lake in one of the non privileged chapters as this lake is beautiful because it is beautiful. They have had chances to change it but they haven't even when a reader points it out for them to learn. Expressions are used wrong in places with added letters on words that don't need them like (this is an example) grasses where it would be grass there are also unnecessary words where they don't need to be like 'a trash' where it should be trash. Needs a revamp and it would be pretty good. I don't remember it being so bad when it first came out but maybe my memory is too foggy
Spoiler enthüllen
It is the best reincarnation academy story, if you have read other stories like authors pov or any extra or villain story ... then you will surely like this one ... you all are missing out on this masterpeice ... why doesn't this story has higher rating ... its so good ... like I don't that much like other academy novels ... but this one has something special that keeps me glued to this story ... like it has everything that I like ... like this story was made for me ... I am very happy with this story author san ... ❤️ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] And it also has great update speed 👍
itz really good ,rather than making the mc weak you made him strong without using cheat . it's good and keeps you entertained but i hope mc will show some emotions rather than been cold. I like how the proganist is a coward and makes you laugh but think he is not needed in this story anymore
finally I have found the perfect novel for me it is great everything except fighting scenes but it is the best novel in this troupe
Ok, so I will be completely honest. I have only read up to chapter eight, but there were so many things to say that I couldn't resist the urge to write a review. Pros It is an interesting take on "I reincarnated as an extra." Cons First things first, the content is too packed. The first eight chapters alone could be stretched to sixteen, and the story would probably be better for it. In the first or second chapter, the protagonist steals a cheat and then decides he is going to steal another one tomorrow; then it just cuts to the scene of him stealing the cheat again. This could have been executed much better (in my opinion) if the protagonist said that and there was a line saying, He slept, then he makes preparations and goes to the second cheat. The second problem is a lack of descriptions except for the protagonist (correct me if I am wrong). All the other characters have only been described with the word beautiful; there's no description of their hair, skin, or eye colour; no mention of their height or bearing; just a complete lack of descriptions. Thirdly, no fights. Look, I am not some battle maniac who thinks no action = bad, but like when Roi went to the dungeons, you just said he killed 16 monsters in an hour or half an hour? rather than that, it would have been (again, in my opinion) much better if you had instead described him fighting the first monster, then said he proceeded to hunt X more in X time, and on the topic of monsters, you also completely fail to describe the monsters. Even the boss monster is only called "boss monster." You don't necessarily need to describe it like "a gigantic bear coated in red fur with menacing black eyes." You could just say huge bear or monster bear and we would get it, but just saying monster is unacceptable. You don't have to describe things all that vividly. Just say something similar to a prompt like silver wolves. You don't necessarily have to describe the wolf. Just give us something and our imagination will fill in the rest. Fourth dialogue tag I don't know if you think "_" said Roi or '_' thought Roi was distracting, but it really isn't. It's almost invisible when done like that, and it's certainly a lot better than adding (character name) because (I might be wrong on the reasons) we have been trained to just ignore those dialogue tags, but putting () distracts us (it distracts me at least).So if you did it because you thought putting "said Fade" would be bad, then it was not, but if it wasn't because of anything similar to what I just said, then you can take it with a grain of salt. Now to conclude this sizeable review. I don't mean to tear you apart and say your work is bad and you should give up. I just thought I saw the writing of a novice, so I wanted to give you some tips and hopefully help you learn or realise at least one thing. That's why, in every criticism, I try to offer tips on how to solve it every time I point out a flaw. I am sorry if I made you feel bad or made you think I was just hating, and I hope the story improves as it goes along. - Slothzzs Slacking Off
Pretty bad grammar not to the point where I can't understand, still pretty bad. Writing of the novel in itself. Well first chapter "describes room" never shows any thoughts of the main character and then big boy says "transmigration is real?!" Make it make sense, if you've improved your English or if you are still going with the novel think of editing it[img=Out of it]
i have yet to read anything, but the fact that this in no a harem instantly makes this a 5star story
Nice work keep working hard on it , i support you for 👍 and You have nice picture in the cover really like it ❤️
.............................................................................................................................................................................. :) ..............................................................................................................................
Amazing nove ... would like more of rios stealing session ... they are getting lesser and lesser .... ................................................. ...................
Spoiler enthüllen
Except for a bit of grammar mistakes here and there, this novel is an absolute gem. It has solid world building and is one of the best character development I have ever seen. Even the female leads have a clear purpose and are very likeable. Read at least till ch 60 to understand the awesomeness of this gem
best novel ..................................................................................................................................
This novel definetly not bad and not that good, not bad for the romance and not much drama just for romance. Something i dont like is MC think himself as an extra and dont wana get in trouble cus he is an extra. Hmm, for mc personalty he is definetly good guy he will save stranger if has the power to do so and can come out alive. Biggest problem i have from MC is he kinda idiot IMO not because he do anything stupid, it just MC cannot realize something as novel reader himself. That is that i can conclude in 30 chapter. Hope author receive this kindly
The best thing you could ever read that’s all I have to say the novel does the rest
The initial chapters were below average and felt like the author was new to writing a novel. There was a severe lack of explanations and buildups and so many unresolved plot points. But later on, the quality improved and the recent chapters are of much higher quality. I am looking forward to future chapters.
I will make an honest evaluation: This is a novel with a well-known style, a boy who reincarnates in the body of a background character from a novel he read and blah blah blah. As far as I have read, it was enjoyable, but nothing too extravagant; it's something to pass the time. For future readers, it's worth mentioning that the novel is not perfect. The dialogues are quite simple and there is no plot or anything that excites the reader (at least from what I have read). But there is a good side: the novel is straightforward and without much beating around the bush, so we see the MC quickly developing in strength and romantically as well, since the author makes it clear who the MC's love interest will be, and they start dating in the early chapters. From my point of view, this was a good thing, as it breaks the tradition of most novels where the MC only gets into a relationship in the final chapters, so this earned it a positive point. In the end, my rating is a 6.5. The reading is pleasant and the chapters draw you to the next one. For those who want a simple and straightforward read, it's a good choice.
Spoiler enthüllen It's not bad lots of grammar mistakes, also really childish. Many mistakes with the power system. Because 100 points on every stat is supposively the strenght of a peak rank A but then Link somehow is at the same level as him. Also when he surpasses the 100 threshold with his concentration ability which means some of his stats go to 140 he still can't even touch a rank S kind of confusing.
Spoiler enthüllen enjoyable so far chapter 30. I've always enjoyed transmigration stories but it's nice to see one with butterfly effects
Spoiler enthüllen Unfortunately, I arrived hopeful and left disappointed. I know it's fast paced, but I didn't think it would be a report. without any emotion, the mc arrives at the location as if he were cutting vegetables, in a completely direct way, without any suspense and then quickly returns to the same location, without arousing any emotion in the reader. Instead of wanting to keep reading, you just want to skip it all and go straight to the end. as the protagonist, which makes the story very monotonous to read.
can you change the characters pics?☺️☺️ ultimatety Rio pls this novel is soo good that I can't stop reading it 🤣 i recommend you read because this is masterpiece 😁😉
Honestly, good concept and good story. But in my opinion, it is too unbearable to write at the end of each line who is speaking. It completely breaks the immersion. I tried to put up with it, but it makes me cranky every time I read it. I understand that it may be difficult for the author to make it clear who is speaking, but this is lazy writing, and it was certainly not a good solution for me. Furthermore, if I did not know who was speaking, I would find out only at the end of the line. How could immersion be good then? But seeing as how few people mention it, maybe it's just me. It's sad to stop reading a good story because of things like that, although it's not perfect, I quite like the concept, and I've always liked this genre, but well... Good luck to the author!
Story gave me chills on chapter 27 i like the main heroine i wished they made the main character of the novel Fade more evil and perverted but that is just temporary fulfillment a good and would probably ruin the story later on
honestly the novel was decent just how the grammar is my god made me want to commit a hate crime
I will start with the good then the bad. ------------ Good: A very entertaining read. I enjoyed the story all the way. I would recommend anyone thinking of reading this to give it a try. I won't go too much into why it's good, just read other reviews for that. --------------- Bad: There are mainly 4 problems with this story: 1- Author had no vision for how the story would turn out and the process, only the concept/premise at the start was deliberate. This style of going impromptu and seeing where this goes without setting any short term goals nor long term goals for the story just makes it hollow. Author is following the whims of readers, If readers wanted skill he'll give skill. Problem here is that this causes plot holes and author has to add author notes to explain them and then along the chapters more plot holes appear and author again gives plausible explanations and we fall into a rabbit hole. Events or things that happened in past chapters aren't properly remembered in future chapters by auther. In future chapters when it's mentioned that this event happened, if you go back to that event then you find that it's wrong. Author didn't remember it right, so these future chapters will be built on a false memory. 2- Author thoughts and pauses to story throughout chapters. You can tell author is new to writing since author has to explain in brackets why things happen and gives info dumps regularly, author didn't set the rules of the world beforehand, so he comes up with plausible explanations for world rules or events as the story goes. Honestly it just takes me out of the immersion in the story. 3- Characters have bad character design. Only Lia and Riya stayed true to their design, but others not so. How? At the start, every character is shown with his personality clear, an arrogant guy, a narcissist guy, an emotionless guy, a sadistic guy, and so on. The problem comes when we progress in the story, without any gradual changes, they suddenly display weird characteristics and everyone acts as if they were like that from the start. and don't tell me that's love working its magic. Love influences but doesn't change the core personality of someone. especially when that love was there long before the changes, for example, A sadistic guy that's used to being at the top of the world with everyone respecting him like the king that didn't talk much suddenly is a meathead and acts like a puppy and doesn't mind others not respecting him, If it's gradual then I'd understand, but it happened in one chapter. Same goes for Liam, he was the quiet type and smart and calculating, but then suddenly he teases and says stuff only friends of years would say. It just feels author is making them all turn out to be that silly friend group with no prior indication, these changes happen suddenly. No character development. just some lines explain that, like "you've already told me that more than 50 times in our last few hangouts", the process of a character changing is important, but we don't get to see that. 4- Author forgot the purpose of this story, we rarely see MC as extra and the protagonist is left unlucky and forgotten. Now MC is a bonafide Protagonist, he's the center of the world, I don't mind that, but what I do mind is breaking the premise that the original protagonist has the heavens luck by his side but is trash, he's now rarely seen and when seen he's got nothing, no harem and no power. don't say MC stole his powers, protagonist has exp based system where he can power up without other cheats. 5- Author feels to me like a weeb that lived watching anime and is writing based on his knowledge from anime, so myth, facts, historical events, character traits and personalities are built upon the cliche from anime. Same is happening here, it feels like characters are based on fictional friend groups (like avengers) they joke around mid fight and are childish while they are mid fight, this only happens in anime or marvel movies to add comedy with light hearted banter. Romance just just feels skewed, all the relationships I see here are built on banter. Guy teases girl, girl gets mad but blush. While it's sweet and wholesome reading the scenes, it gets tiring when all relationships here are built on banter.
I dropped it. why, cuz female lead is tsudere, and I hate tsuderes. No grudges author, this is just my personal review. Like bruh, if you like someone, why must you (face attitude) antagonize the person. I feel tsuderes are just self centered narcissistic people who don't know how to express their interest or feelings for someone and don't give that "I love her regardless " ," she's kinda cute with that angry face" b**lsh*t. It make me cringe
The grammar really holds this work back he describes the lake in one of the non privileged chapters as this lake is beautiful because it is beautiful. They have had chances to change it but they haven't even when a reader points it out for them to learn. Expressions are used wrong in places with added letters on words that don't need them like (this is an example) grasses where it would be grass there are also unnecessary words where they don't need to be like 'a trash' where it should be trash. Needs a revamp and it would be pretty good. I don't remember it being so bad when it first came out but maybe my memory is too foggy
Spoiler enthüllen It is the best reincarnation academy story, if you have read other stories like authors pov or any extra or villain story ... then you will surely like this one ... you all are missing out on this masterpeice ... why doesn't this story has higher rating ... its so good ... like I don't that much like other academy novels ... but this one has something special that keeps me glued to this story ... like it has everything that I like ... like this story was made for me ... I am very happy with this story author san ... ❤️ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] And it also has great update speed 👍
itz really good ,rather than making the mc weak you made him strong without using cheat . it's good and keeps you entertained but i hope mc will show some emotions rather than been cold. I like how the proganist is a coward and makes you laugh but think he is not needed in this story anymore
finally I have found the perfect novel for me it is great everything except fighting scenes but it is the best novel in this troupe
Ok, so I will be completely honest. I have only read up to chapter eight, but there were so many things to say that I couldn't resist the urge to write a review. Pros It is an interesting take on "I reincarnated as an extra." Cons First things first, the content is too packed. The first eight chapters alone could be stretched to sixteen, and the story would probably be better for it. In the first or second chapter, the protagonist steals a cheat and then decides he is going to steal another one tomorrow; then it just cuts to the scene of him stealing the cheat again. This could have been executed much better (in my opinion) if the protagonist said that and there was a line saying, He slept, then he makes preparations and goes to the second cheat. The second problem is a lack of descriptions except for the protagonist (correct me if I am wrong). All the other characters have only been described with the word beautiful; there's no description of their hair, skin, or eye colour; no mention of their height or bearing; just a complete lack of descriptions. Thirdly, no fights. Look, I am not some battle maniac who thinks no action = bad, but like when Roi went to the dungeons, you just said he killed 16 monsters in an hour or half an hour? rather than that, it would have been (again, in my opinion) much better if you had instead described him fighting the first monster, then said he proceeded to hunt X more in X time, and on the topic of monsters, you also completely fail to describe the monsters. Even the boss monster is only called "boss monster." You don't necessarily need to describe it like "a gigantic bear coated in red fur with menacing black eyes." You could just say huge bear or monster bear and we would get it, but just saying monster is unacceptable. You don't have to describe things all that vividly. Just say something similar to a prompt like silver wolves. You don't necessarily have to describe the wolf. Just give us something and our imagination will fill in the rest. Fourth dialogue tag I don't know if you think "_" said Roi or '_' thought Roi was distracting, but it really isn't. It's almost invisible when done like that, and it's certainly a lot better than adding (character name) because (I might be wrong on the reasons) we have been trained to just ignore those dialogue tags, but putting () distracts us (it distracts me at least).So if you did it because you thought putting "said Fade" would be bad, then it was not, but if it wasn't because of anything similar to what I just said, then you can take it with a grain of salt. Now to conclude this sizeable review. I don't mean to tear you apart and say your work is bad and you should give up. I just thought I saw the writing of a novice, so I wanted to give you some tips and hopefully help you learn or realise at least one thing. That's why, in every criticism, I try to offer tips on how to solve it every time I point out a flaw. I am sorry if I made you feel bad or made you think I was just hating, and I hope the story improves as it goes along. - Slothzzs Slacking Off
Pretty bad grammar not to the point where I can't understand, still pretty bad. Writing of the novel in itself. Well first chapter "describes room" never shows any thoughts of the main character and then big boy says "transmigration is real?!" Make it make sense, if you've improved your English or if you are still going with the novel think of editing it[img=Out of it]
i have yet to read anything, but the fact that this in no a harem instantly makes this a 5star story
Nice work keep working hard on it , i support you for 👍 and You have nice picture in the cover really like it ❤️
.............................................................................................................................................................................. :) ..............................................................................................................................
Amazing nove ... would like more of rios stealing session ... they are getting lesser and lesser .... ................................................. ...................
Spoiler enthüllen Except for a bit of grammar mistakes here and there, this novel is an absolute gem. It has solid world building and is one of the best character development I have ever seen. Even the female leads have a clear purpose and are very likeable. Read at least till ch 60 to understand the awesomeness of this gem
best novel ..................................................................................................................................