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I would give better review if author would get get back to writing I hope to see more updates soon honestly
awesome storyline! I find world and character development very unique and exciting! I hope the author will continue writing and updating this wonderful story!
This is a pretty good story. The power system felt refreshing and the story was decent. Hope author comes and updates book cause this story has alot potential to be great.
I've just binged through the whole novel and was relieved that the author came back to updating it, but through he said about daily updates, there were none for the last month. Will you update it soon?
I'm so glad you're back. This is one of my top 10 most favorite webnovels of all time and when updates stopped, I was heartbroken. I felt revived when I saw you came back. Be well, and keep up the good work :)
Y DID U STOP?? TH8S BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD I JUST WITH HE COULD FIND MORE CORES LIKE THE FIRST ONE LIKE A PHOENIX OR DRAGON OR EVEN LIKE A HUGE WOLF KING THIS WAS HE CAN HAVE SOMETHING TO FLY ON OR RIDE BUT THEY ALSO TRAIN HIM IN THE ELEMENTS THAT THEY USE SO HE CAN BECOME STONGER AND FOR TECHNIQUES HE CAN FIND THE BOOKS OR HAVE PEOPLE TEACHING SOME SECRET TECHNIQUES LIKE OLD ANCIENT TECHNIQUES THAT A LOT OF PEOPLE CAN'T FIGURE OUT TO USE THEM BUT HE CAN.... THAT WOULD BE AWESOME.... IM STILL 8N THE EARLY STAGE OF THE BOOK BUT O REALLY LIKE IT!!!
Great Series. It's one of the few books I enjoy on this app. I hope the author returns to it at some point. [img=recommend]
I hope you come back and take responsibility for your actions, you we out to the store for milk two months ago! .................................. 5/5 stars for novel
This story is amazing. I really really hope the author doesn’t drop it and comes back. Come back Author-san you are loved and missed dearly
Story is very good but updating stability is almost non existent The character development is also excellent All that’ left is the pace cuz when you eventually release the chapters, it’ gonna require a rereading
Buenas tardes Will you continue to continue this novel or will you leave it since it makes me a good plot and a growth of power supported not by fate. when can we expect new chapters? Thanks a lot
I really love this novel enjoy the characters and the story and just everythin❤️ although the release schedule is a bit disappointing because ever since I started reading 3 days ago I’m at 180 and no updates have happened so it kinda worries me. I hope we can keep the 7 a week schedule or maybe even 10 but I won’t push it as authors have lives outside writing. Keep up the great work I think this novel can reach the Top 20 or more especially if you go back and fix any grammatical errors as I know for some people it’s a turn off. Your errors are pretty easy to resolve compared to most I’ve seen
Im on chapter 31, and im still confused about the power level of this story. sometime author compare characters with how much core they have, sometime with on what infusion the character is. and i know on the comments that author refuse to make a whole chapter explaining power levels of his story, and here i am confused.
I've really enjoyed this story so far hope it keeps updating in the future. Also is there a discord for this story or the author as a whole?
The first chapter reminded me of "Quanzhi Fanshi or Versatile Mage", because of the storyline about aether and lightning and life core as healing magic.
finally a book with an intelligent MC. story developmrnt is great and i hope the quality of this book stay as high as it is [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author of this books does well with his descriptions and feelings. I greatly appreciate the way he has built up the relationships of the main characters. I realize there is only one main character but his relationships make you understand that the leading ladies are just as important. I hope to keep reading their adventures.
I really like this story, I feel really immersed and the grammar, world building, and characters are all good and I can't really find anything to criticise about.
Amazing novel, deserves all the attention in the world. The author has a tendency towards redundancy, but overall the prose keeps me interested and invested into the story. The characters all have great chemistry, the world building is executed very well, and the power system really shines. Although, some of the explanations can become hard to follow. There’s also some weird typos, I’d recommend giving your chapters a look over before you post. Even if you don’t catch all the typos you’ll find the major ones. Keep up the good work, you have something really special here.
Overall, this is the most excited I’ve been for a story in a while. The only thing I did not rate a 5/5 is the update stability as there are some story’s with slightly better uploads but they reduce quality. Definitely excited for the future
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Amazing novel, inspired me to write my own. Would definitely recommend reading it, has amazing world building and a very interesting characters.
Great story but there are some words missing in sentences or typo problems. Recommend using Grammarly (a internet app for writing). It's free
I would give better review if author would get get back to writing I hope to see more updates soon honestly
awesome storyline! I find world and character development very unique and exciting! I hope the author will continue writing and updating this wonderful story!
This is a pretty good story. The power system felt refreshing and the story was decent. Hope author comes and updates book cause this story has alot potential to be great.
I've just binged through the whole novel and was relieved that the author came back to updating it, but through he said about daily updates, there were none for the last month. Will you update it soon?
I'm so glad you're back. This is one of my top 10 most favorite webnovels of all time and when updates stopped, I was heartbroken. I felt revived when I saw you came back. Be well, and keep up the good work :)
Y DID U STOP?? TH8S BOOK IS PRETTY GOOD I JUST WITH HE COULD FIND MORE CORES LIKE THE FIRST ONE LIKE A PHOENIX OR DRAGON OR EVEN LIKE A HUGE WOLF KING THIS WAS HE CAN HAVE SOMETHING TO FLY ON OR RIDE BUT THEY ALSO TRAIN HIM IN THE ELEMENTS THAT THEY USE SO HE CAN BECOME STONGER AND FOR TECHNIQUES HE CAN FIND THE BOOKS OR HAVE PEOPLE TEACHING SOME SECRET TECHNIQUES LIKE OLD ANCIENT TECHNIQUES THAT A LOT OF PEOPLE CAN'T FIGURE OUT TO USE THEM BUT HE CAN.... THAT WOULD BE AWESOME.... IM STILL 8N THE EARLY STAGE OF THE BOOK BUT O REALLY LIKE IT!!!
Great Series. It's one of the few books I enjoy on this app. I hope the author returns to it at some point. [img=recommend]
I hope you come back and take responsibility for your actions, you we out to the store for milk two months ago! .................................. 5/5 stars for novel
This story is amazing. I really really hope the author doesn’t drop it and comes back. Come back Author-san you are loved and missed dearly
Story is very good but updating stability is almost non existent The character development is also excellent All that’ left is the pace cuz when you eventually release the chapters, it’ gonna require a rereading
Buenas tardes Will you continue to continue this novel or will you leave it since it makes me a good plot and a growth of power supported not by fate. when can we expect new chapters? Thanks a lot
I really love this novel enjoy the characters and the story and just everythin❤️ although the release schedule is a bit disappointing because ever since I started reading 3 days ago I’m at 180 and no updates have happened so it kinda worries me. I hope we can keep the 7 a week schedule or maybe even 10 but I won’t push it as authors have lives outside writing. Keep up the great work I think this novel can reach the Top 20 or more especially if you go back and fix any grammatical errors as I know for some people it’s a turn off. Your errors are pretty easy to resolve compared to most I’ve seen
Im on chapter 31, and im still confused about the power level of this story. sometime author compare characters with how much core they have, sometime with on what infusion the character is. and i know on the comments that author refuse to make a whole chapter explaining power levels of his story, and here i am confused.
I've really enjoyed this story so far hope it keeps updating in the future. Also is there a discord for this story or the author as a whole?
The first chapter reminded me of "Quanzhi Fanshi or Versatile Mage", because of the storyline about aether and lightning and life core as healing magic.
finally a book with an intelligent MC. story developmrnt is great and i hope the quality of this book stay as high as it is [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The author of this books does well with his descriptions and feelings. I greatly appreciate the way he has built up the relationships of the main characters. I realize there is only one main character but his relationships make you understand that the leading ladies are just as important. I hope to keep reading their adventures.
I really like this story, I feel really immersed and the grammar, world building, and characters are all good and I can't really find anything to criticise about.
Amazing novel, deserves all the attention in the world. The author has a tendency towards redundancy, but overall the prose keeps me interested and invested into the story. The characters all have great chemistry, the world building is executed very well, and the power system really shines. Although, some of the explanations can become hard to follow. There’s also some weird typos, I’d recommend giving your chapters a look over before you post. Even if you don’t catch all the typos you’ll find the major ones. Keep up the good work, you have something really special here.
Overall, this is the most excited I’ve been for a story in a while. The only thing I did not rate a 5/5 is the update stability as there are some story’s with slightly better uploads but they reduce quality. Definitely excited for the future
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Amazing novel, inspired me to write my own. Would definitely recommend reading it, has amazing world building and a very interesting characters.
Great story but there are some words missing in sentences or typo problems. Recommend using Grammarly (a internet app for writing). It's free
I love this book I hope the author is doing well ❤️