*her companions
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
Fantasy · Elyon
too bad it wasn't O'Doyle..
"Student Arthur Doyle greets Professor Constantine!"
Fantasy · Esenel
Valentina isn't there?
"C-c-countess..." The word came out trembling, malformed, from the vampires' lips. The fear was palpable, an overwhelming presence that seemed to take over the atmosphere. Valentina Scarlet, the Countess, raised an eyebrow, assessing the beings in front of her with a mix of disdain and annoyance.
Fantasy · Katanexy
*Fortis Dud
Before Fortus Rud, the owners of this painting had been ordinary people.
Fantasy · Elyon
These are flowing just as well as the first chapters. Keep it up. Keep in mind that Harem does not mean orgy, threesome, ect. Keep the scenes to what you are comfortable with, and they should keep flowing easily.
I think it was well done. The initial play was well written and thought out. Both individuals are new, so a super screw fest wouldn't have been realistic. I do hope that more indepth chapters happen, however, they are not necessary if they flow like these two did.
*Anastasia? Aina is out cold.
Leonel stripped himself down as Aina prepared.
Fantasy · Awespec
*Ancestor
They were the various skills of the dragon and Vampire Ancestorm
Urban · Dark_Crow1111
*he slashed
He didn't have to wait for him to arrive before she slashed his sword at him.
Urban · Dark_Crow1111
*her comrades stupid autocorrect
System's POV
Fantasy · Elyon