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Kurogami Ichiro was desperate because he couldn't achieve what he wanted when he once started his martial arts path at age of 8!

35 Years he spent training and honing his martial arts, but he always felt like he was born in the wrong era...

And fate played its tricks and Ichiro lost his life while saving a young girl's life and no matter how much he trained his martial arts.

He couldn't escape from death.

But.. his story didn't end there...

He reincarnated to a different world where martial arts and people with strength are targets of admiration...

Can Ichiro finally reach his dream while having the assistance of the Martial Arts System?

Martial Arts System seemed simple at first... But Ichiro will slowly find out...

That the Martial Arts System is far from simple.
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Alekzi
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Shameless review once again~ I am not english speaking native, so some grammar mistakes is to be expected, but i am sure you guys will be able to understand my writing. Also No harem! Yay anyway i hope you guys enjoy my book!

3yr
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RingoBrown

- Simp paradise. He meets a girl online, 5 mins. later he gives her 10 million dollars after listening to her sob story. MC was a martial arts master with 40+ years of experience. He reincarnates into a 15 year old and acts like a 12 year old. His 40+ years of maturity and knowledge vanishes. He speaks with inexperience and naïveté. The earlier chapters are filled with plotholes. The author tries his best to cover them up later in the story but it causes inconsistencies in the plot moving forward. The outline of the story is decent enough for me to have stuck around for as long as I did, but the plot development and inconsistencies just ruins it for me. If you’re into annoying MC’s who bully their bestfriend and is a MAJOR simp, then this book is for you.

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3yr
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Alekzi
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Author Update - I have looked at my previous chapters until 40, and I gotta admit that some parts were slightly amateurish and badly written, but chapters from 40 start getting better, I promise. I have written quite a lot of drafts, up to 70 chapter already and it keeps increasing and a lot of interesting things are happening in the life of Ichiro, even I, as a writer I am honestly surprised of the things I wrote and I think most of you will enjoy it, so please read at least up to 50, because a lot of interesting things start happening after it, and if you still don't like the novel, then you should prob it because this novel isn't probably for your taste then. Thanks for readind and I hope you will enjoy.

3yr
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Freelancerok

I expected something better from a hero who was in the past the strongest in his world and who clearly survived his period of maturity. But how wrong I was when the main character behaves almost like all the heroes of issekai. Of course, they explained to us a little that he was changing, but why didn't he want to control it? And he behaves like a rag with his first acquaintance Lucas, maybe many people see friendship this way? I see it's different and it's difficult for me to read such an attitude. In short, I personally do not like this book yet. (The review was done using Google).

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3yr
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Suzynany

Small review right here, I think this book is amazing, yeah first 40 chaps shows Author's inexperience, but it obviously becomes better, and after 50 chaps it is amazing to read. Good job Author!

3yr
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vkg313

I went out of my way to write a full review for this story, because I felt like it had a lot of potential, decent plot idea, and the author can improve significantly. Writing Quality is a bit disappointing. "Show, don't tell" is a cornerstone of writing. There are lots of explanations for everything with info dumps, instead of a slow but steady discovery. Various descriptions are awkward many times as well. In addition, there are a number of typos. I honestly just expect more from a premium novel. Author updates regularly, which is great. Story development feels pretty basic. Nothing groundbreaking or new. There's a system. Someone has transmigrated. Theres a tournament arc. Etc. It doesn't pull me in because I feel like I've seen it all before. For a world that is being invaded, it doesn't feel like it at all. Everyone seems too casual about it all. Normal people just living their lives casually when the world is falling apart around them. We had a global pandemic where people were dying from covid, and things changed everywhere. I can't imagine monsters invading, and people just acting like martial arts are just "sports" anymore. You give little to no impression about how society has changed from this. Character design is a little boring. I wish that there was a little more character development. Everyone other than the MC feels a bit two dimensional. Even the MC sometimes feels a bit boring. I don't know how you plan to bring character growth to the MC either since he was already an adult, and he is doing the same thing he was doing in his previous life. There needs to be personal growth for the characters, otherwise you result in a Xianxia novel where everyone is rigid and unreasonable. World background also got 3 stars because there is nothing new about a world being invaded by monsters.

3yr
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SundanceKid

A great novel that was given up on too early. It seemed like the author listened to readers comments a bit too much and went back and rewrote chapters which changed future paths he had already visualized. While it's good to learn from mistakes and try to make fans happy, don't ever let them change your novel midway through. This will change the way the author writes the rest of the novel even if it's subconsciously, which in this case seemed to wilt his enthusiasm for this one, which ended up causing it to get dropped suddenly. Don't get me wrong, I enjoy White Online, but my personal opinion and a few of my buddies who've read both agree that Martial Arts Master was overall a better read and had even greater potential if it wasn't dropped. I hope that someday in the future the author either continues on, or rewrites the novel and does what he imagines without other's changing his views. Either way, I'm enjoying the reread I'm doing.

2yr
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Paulo_D_Manoel

man,this story is kinda stupid,the people in this are not believable, I got a couple of laughs here and there,but the world building doesn't make sense.

3yr
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NICE_MAN

Literally mind numbingly awful. This novel is made for 12 yearold non native English speakers. The author obviously does not get out of the house much because it because 100% clear by chapter 35 they have no experience with normal human interactions. The MC meets with the first real female character and immediately just shouts at her “shut up thot.” If you like incel prepubescent outdated humor with absolutely horrible writing quality and beyond generic plot, this is the novel for you!

2yr
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DZsTheOnlyWay

i was rlly loving it, and just when i was about to purchase the privileges, i opened the chapter 174.. and droped... that was the worst decision i ever saw of an author.. im rlly rlly sad about it and if i could i wold just complain in everysingle fckng chapter trying to change your mind, but i wont use my fastpasses and coins in smthing so stupid. 5 stars until chapter 174, 0 stars after it, i will just give a 2,5

3yr
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Xudima

The story is pretty cool. If I had to point out one problem, it would be the fact that the dialogue between the characters are a lil bit forced, but it's alright... also please give more updates the cliffhangers are literally causing me immense mental, physical, and astral pain.

3yr
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Dhruv_Adlakha

this is great to read but sadly author du...mped it ... i hope he will restart this.............................................................

2yr
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BlackFlamer

I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works

3yr
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NoZoner

Still in my heart number 1 don't care what people say. hope you return soon. .....................................................................

2yr
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Lulu50023

My first Review I understand that this is the Author's first novel and said that the first 40 chapters might be a bit rough. After Reading 9 chapters I was getting really annoyed about how many grammatical and spelling mistakes I could find. The Author doesn't use the words "The" and "a". For example: captian instead of The captian young man instead of a or the young man said... Gorilla said:"" instead of The gorilla said:"" Furthemore the Author switches from 1st person to 3r person wich is getting me really confused. I had high hopes for this novel. Author! I don't know if correcting the chapters is very time consuming but please fix them so people can enjoy this novel it's not like you have to correct the tiniest mistake just the noticable ones.

3yr
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Almighty_Chaos

quite disappointed in the author he doesn't even have the guts to write what he wanted......changing the story midway because of a suggestion quite a good story though...but the author👎 nothing serious tho

2yr
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Eugene_Zuev

It some personal dislike but first guy recive quest to some push-ups and so on, he have no trained body at all but he with his will do 100 of them somehow(it even written that 20 push-ups was his limit that get him weak arms) why not 10000 in the first time if his will only matter ? But it not worst thing, he trained and got some stats growed passively, and after one training he finished quest and got rewarded he got some stat points and he spend it all, why? Man have 15 years of new life experience that he spent By playing games he does not ask about drowbacks of it, will it limit stat growing in the furure or some of that thigs, btw man know about novels with and systems from previous life so he must think of it first. Is he stupid or just have some brain damage or he can not think about future grow idk. As i said probably personal dislike, i think mc is stupid.

3yr
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Lx_Xotic

Still one of my favourite books hopefully the author can write a part 2.

6mth
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skyknight249424

I really loved the story and got hooked to this one.... until I read the last chapter... i was looking forward to his tournaments and how all the four kings came to be know as true kings as stated by author. was this tournament the point in story where they got their names recognized ??? other characters of secret geniuses and the whole story about the craziest man alive will he be of any help to ichiro or not .... i guess these are all unanswered questions i am left with. I hope to see the 2nd volume soon, and hopefully you find the motivation to write it. also greatly anticipated ichiro vs arkenthym.

1yr
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cMoto
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SPOILER: This is only part one of a novel that has yet to be fiinished. After reading the author's final comments at the end of the novel, I can now understand while it was lacking in many areas. I liked the MC who wasn't OP and lived the morally gray area. It think the MAS was extremely under utilized and, too me, barely mattered in the MC's journey unlike most related novels. The lack of closure is also disappointing but I underrstand the author's reason. For a 1st novel, it was a decent start. I definitely liked the author's White Online novel much better. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.

2yr
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Chapter 432: End of First. 2 years ago

Volumen 1 : Middle School.

  1. 1
    Prologue 3 years ago
  2. 2
    New Life 3 years ago
  3. 3
    School 3 years ago
  4. 4
    Martial Arts Club 3 years ago
  5. 5
    Random Box 3 years ago
  6. 6
    Match 3 years ago
  7. 7
    Body Improvement 3 years ago
  8. 8
    Representative 3 years ago
  9. 9
    Anger. 3 years ago
  10. 10
    Iron Style 3 years ago
  11. 11
    Police Station 3 years ago
  12. 12
    Warehouse 3 years ago
  13. 13
    Kaboom 3 years ago
  14. 14
    No regrets 3 years ago
  15. 15
    Time Attack 3 years ago
  16. 16
    Slych's Speed VS. Ichiro's Lance 3 years ago
  17. 17
    Round of 128 3 years ago
  18. 18
    Ichiro's Turn 3 years ago
  19. 19
    Island of Death 3 years ago
  20. 20
    Match Up 3 years ago
  21. 21
    Mind-Body 3 years ago
  22. 22
    Close Quarters Combat 3 years ago
  23. 23
    Warnings 3 years ago
  24. 24
    Indestructible. 3 years ago
  25. 25
    Weird Trio 3 years ago
  26. 26
    Tomahawk Axe. 3 years ago
  27. 27
    Operation Start! 3 years ago
  28. 28
    Footage 3 years ago
  29. 29
    I will handle it. 3 years ago
  30. 30
    First Step. 3 years ago
  31. 31
    Team Vs. Team 3 years ago
  32. 32
    Armya Vs. Highland 3 years ago
  33. 33
    Done Playing Around? 3 years ago
  34. 34
    Lucas' Betrayal! 3 years ago
  35. 35
    Analyze. 3 years ago
  36. 36
    Impact. 3 years ago
  37. 37
    Painkillers! 3 years ago
  38. 38
    So it begins.. 3 years ago
  39. 39
    Lightning Fast. 3 years ago
  40. 40
    Prelude to Chaos. 3 years ago
  41. 41
    New Quest. 3 years ago
  42. 42
    Winner Is... 3 years ago
  43. 43
    Military Enforcement Department. 3 years ago
  44. 44
    Harmful. 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Confession. 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Phone Call. 3 years ago
  47. 47
    Advanced. 3 years ago
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    Death? Overrated. 3 years ago
  49. 49
    Smash. 3 years ago
  50. 50
    Sleepless Night Part 1. 3 years ago
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    Sleepless Night Part 2. 3 years ago
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    Emperor Arkenthym. 3 years ago
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    Alone in the Darkness... 3 years ago
  54. 54
    Martial Artists Vs. Rankless Ones. 3 years ago
  55. 55
    The Ones Who Are Hiding In The Dark. 3 years ago
  56. 56
    A Person Who Wields Limitless Talent. 3 years ago
  57. 57
    Do You Believe In Miracles? 3 years ago
  58. 58
    Miracle Of The North, Barren Wasteland Shall Turn Into Oasis! 3 years ago
  59. 59
    Goodbye Ramu! 3 years ago
  60. 60
    Dirty Mouth Ichiro. 3 years ago
  61. 61
    Reward. 3 years ago
  62. 62
    Gaming. 3 years ago
  63. 63
    NightButterfly. 3 years ago
  64. 64
    Guilty. 3 years ago
  65. 65
    Experiencing Memories Part 1. 3 years ago
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    Experiencing Memories Part 2. 3 years ago
  67. 67
    Experiencing Memories Part 3. 3 years ago
  68. 68
    My Revenge... Part 1. 3 years ago
  69. 69
    My Revenge... Part 2. 3 years ago
  70. 70
    My Revenge... Part 3. 3 years ago
  71. 71
    My Revenge... Part 4. 3 years ago
  72. 72
    [Bonus chapter]My Revenge... Part 5. 3 years ago
  73. 73
    My Revenge... Part 6. 3 years ago
  74. 74
    Killing Blow Unleashed! 3 years ago
  75. 75
    100 Is The Limit? 3 years ago
  76. 76
    Predator. 3 years ago
  77. 77
    Book of Etiquette. 3 years ago
  78. 78
    Mythical Hero - KingOfGames! 3 years ago
  79. 79
    Hunt the Giant Spider Arachny! 3 years ago
  80. 80
    Azura 3 years ago
  81. 81
    Azura's Investigation. 3 years ago
  82. 82
    Ichiro and the System. 3 years ago
  83. 83
    1 Vs. 10 3 years ago
  84. 84
    Ichiro Vs. Lucas. 3 years ago
  85. 85
    Proposition. 3 years ago
  86. 86
    Swords. 3 years ago
  87. 87
    Genius. 3 years ago
  88. 88
    Vision. 3 years ago
  89. 89
    Kurogami Ichiro - Martial God. 3 years ago
  90. 90
    Martial Ranking Test. 3 years ago
  91. 91
    Beast Exterminator. 3 years ago
  92. 92
    Kurogami Ichiro's Legacy - Iron Style Unlocked! 3 years ago
  93. 93
    The Mansion. 3 years ago
  94. 94
    Second Step. 3 years ago
  95. 95
    Two School's Meet. 3 years ago
  96. 96
    Hiding (R-18) 3 years ago
  97. 97
    Next Destination. 3 years ago

Volumen 2 : High School

  1. 98
    S-Rank Recruit! 3 years ago
  2. 99
    Cafe. 3 years ago
  3. 100
    Storytime. 3 years ago
  4. 101
    Michael - Sariel - Ichiro - Rafael. 3 years ago
  5. 102
    Nervous, and Excited. 3 years ago
  6. 103
    Lovely Date Part 1. 3 years ago
  7. 104
    Lovely Date Part 2. 3 years ago
  8. 105
    Family Part 1. 3 years ago
  9. 106
    Family Part 2. 3 years ago
  10. 107
    End of the Date. 3 years ago
  11. 108
    Supreme Lottery. 3 years ago
  12. 109
    Makeover. 3 years ago
  13. 110
    Demonic Healing Vs. Twisting Souls and Bones. 3 years ago
  14. 111
    Speech. 3 years ago
  15. 112
    Shock. 3 years ago
  16. 113
    Competitive. 3 years ago
  17. 114
    Practice Match Part 1. 3 years ago
  18. 115
    Practice Match Part 2. 3 years ago
  19. 116
    Sariel's Power. 3 years ago
  20. 117
    Confessed. 3 years ago
  21. 118
    Richard. 3 years ago
  22. 119
    Snowland. 3 years ago
  23. 120
    Illusion. 3 years ago
  24. 121
    Avery. 3 years ago
  25. 122
    Beast Among Men. 3 years ago
  26. 123
    Battle Royale. 3 years ago
  27. 124
    Two Protagonists. 3 years ago
  28. 125
    Kurogami Residence. 3 years ago
  29. 126
    Shameless! 3 years ago
  30. 127
    Weakest King. 3 years ago
  31. 128
    Eleventh Match. 3 years ago
  32. 129
    Dislocated. 3 years ago
  33. 130
    Sariel's Perfect Throw. 3 years ago
  34. 131
    Lovesickness. 3 years ago
  35. 132
    Liam's Show of Power. 3 years ago
  36. 133
    Michael's Defense. 3 years ago
  37. 134
    Michael Vs. Ben. 3 years ago
  38. 135
    Who won? 3 years ago
  39. 136
    Medical Bay. 3 years ago
  40. 137
    Erik Vs. Seiji. 3 years ago
  41. 138
    Avery Vs. Liam. 3 years ago
  42. 139
    Iron Destruction of Madness. 3 years ago
  43. 140
    Surgery. 3 years ago
  44. 141
    Countdown. 3 years ago
  45. 142
    Garden. 3 years ago
  46. 143
    Sunlove. 3 years ago
  47. 144
    Iron Style's Ultimate Technique! 3 years ago
  48. 145
    Avery Vs. Sariel. 3 years ago
  49. 146
    Sariel's Edge! 3 years ago
  50. 147
    Moon. 3 years ago
  51. 148
    Avery Vs. Ichiro. 3 years ago
  52. 149
    Moon's Revenge. 3 years ago
  53. 150
    Vibrations. 3 years ago
  54. 151
    Bloodline. 3 years ago
  55. 152
    Time Limit. 3 years ago
  56. 153
    Juro Style. 3 years ago
  57. 154
    Winner. 3 years ago
  58. 155
    Fanbase. 3 years ago
  59. 156
    National TV. 3 years ago
  60. 157
    Wang Lei. 3 years ago
  61. 158
    The Reigning Kings. 3 years ago
  62. 159
    Yandere. 3 years ago
  63. 160
    Lord, Lone, Ares. 3 years ago
  64. 161
    Pray. 3 years ago
  65. 162
    Sauron and Ariel. 3 years ago
  66. 163
    Night Tournament. 3 years ago
  67. 164
    Rosenword. 3 years ago
  68. 165
    Arena. 3 years ago
  69. 166
    Undying. 3 years ago
  70. 167
    Book of Etiquette Reappears! 3 years ago
  71. 168
    Dragon. 3 years ago
  72. 169
    Sword Waves. 3 years ago
  73. 170
    Heated Discussion. 3 years ago
  74. 171
    Climbing. 3 years ago
  75. 172
    Ichiro's Impossible Feat. 3 years ago
  76. 173
    Myra. 3 years ago
  77. 174
    Ariel. 3 years ago
  78. 175
    Dream. 3 years ago
  79. 176
    Returning to School. 3 years ago
  80. 177
    Alena's Sister's Family. 3 years ago
  81. 178
    Ron and the Dwarf. 3 years ago
  82. 179
    Azura's Anger. 3 years ago
  83. 180
    King Vs. The World (1) 3 years ago
  84. 181
    King Vs. The World (2) 3 years ago
  85. 182
    King Vs. The World (3) 3 years ago
  86. 183
    King Vs. The World (4) 3 years ago
  87. 184
    King Vs. The World (5) 3 years ago
  88. 185
    King Vs. World (6) 3 years ago
  89. 186
    Frozen Island. 3 years ago
  90. 187
    Fortress. 3 years ago
  91. 188
    Encounter with Unknown. 3 years ago
  92. 189
    Threat. 3 years ago
  93. 190
    Poor. 3 years ago
  94. 191
    Sky, Gone, Dark, Beasts. 3 years ago
  95. 192
    Cave, Campfire, Meat, Beasts. 3 years ago
  96. 193
    Center of the Island. 3 years ago
  97. 194
    The Test. 3 years ago
  98. 195
    Beast Detector. 3 years ago
  99. 196
    Prime Kurogami Ichiro. 3 years ago
  100. 197
    Martial Commander. 3 years ago
  101. 198
    The Temple. 3 years ago
  102. 199
    Borderline Yandere. 3 years ago
  103. 200
    Blacksmithing. 3 years ago
  104. 201
    Smithy. 3 years ago
  105. 202
    Slayer. 3 years ago
  106. 203
    End of Battle of Countries. 3 years ago
  107. 204
    Underworld Tournament Begins! 3 years ago
  108. 205
    Darkland. 3 years ago
  109. 206
    Second Grandmaster. 3 years ago
  110. 207
    Death Sentence. 3 years ago
  111. 208
    Group A. 3 years ago
  112. 209
    Roy and Daniel. 3 years ago
  113. 210
    True Darkness. 3 years ago
  114. 211
    Satisfied? 3 years ago
  115. 212
    Emma Lovesoul. 3 years ago
  116. 213
    Lock. 3 years ago
  117. 214
    Final Group. 3 years ago
  118. 215
    Saying. 3 years ago
  119. 216
    Quote. 3 years ago
  120. 217
    Six Figures. 3 years ago
  121. 218
    Azura's Training. 3 years ago
  122. 219
    Final Battle Royale. 3 years ago
  123. 220
    One Vs. Three. 3 years ago
  124. 221
    Copy. 3 years ago
  125. 222
    Illusionary. 3 years ago
  126. 223
    Forwards! 3 years ago
  127. 224
    Back. 3 years ago
  128. 225
    Return. 3 years ago
  129. 226
    Truth. 3 years ago
  130. 227
    Shower. 3 years ago
  131. 228
    Yandere? 3 years ago
  132. 229
    Ichiro The Assassin. 3 years ago
  133. 230
    Threatening. 3 years ago
  134. 231
    Unknown Entity. 3 years ago
  135. 232
    Party (1) 3 years ago
  136. 233
    Party (2) 3 years ago
  137. 234
    Party (3) 3 years ago
  138. 235
    Party (4) 3 years ago
  139. 236
    Unfamiliar Battle! 3 years ago
  140. 237
    Strings No More. 3 years ago
  141. 238
    Fifth Page. 3 years ago
  142. 239
    Preparing. 3 years ago
  143. 240
    Rules and Format. 3 years ago
  144. 241
    Locked. 3 years ago
  145. 242
    Arkenthym's Suffering. 3 years ago
  146. 243
    Different Erik. 3 years ago
  147. 244
    Sword Vs. Gun. 3 years ago
  148. 245
    Cloudy Vision. 3 years ago
  149. 246
    Secret Room. 3 years ago
  150. 247
    Stay away from crazy. 3 years ago
  151. 248
    Acting. 3 years ago
  152. 249
    Three Young Men. 3 years ago
  153. 250
    King Figures. 3 years ago
  154. 251
    Crazy Nature. 3 years ago
  155. 252
    Crazy Darc. 3 years ago
  156. 253
    WinNer Is mE! 3 years ago
  157. 254
    Elina's and Kira's Ulterior Motives. 3 years ago
  158. 255
    Yumi's Plan. 3 years ago
  159. 256
    Deathmatch. 3 years ago
  160. 257
    Mistake. 3 years ago
  161. 258
    Entertainment. 3 years ago
  162. 259
    Darkness of a Beast. 3 years ago
  163. 260
    Humanoid Beast. 3 years ago
  164. 261
    Difficult Fight. 3 years ago
  165. 262
    Two Remaining. 3 years ago
  166. 263
    Hidden Possibilites. 3 years ago
  167. 264
    Ichiro's Power Trait! 3 years ago
  168. 265
    Exhaustion. 3 years ago
  169. 266
    Return to the Light. 3 years ago
  170. 267
    Spearless. 3 years ago
  171. 268
    The End of the Underworld Tournament. 3 years ago
  172. 269
    Second Remover. 3 years ago
  173. 270
    Departure. 3 years ago
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    New Neighborhood. 3 years ago
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    Research... 3 years ago
  176. 273
    Stats. 3 years ago
  177. 274
    Soul of Spearless. 3 years ago
  178. 275
    Terrifying Slash. 3 years ago
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    Movie. 3 years ago
  180. 277
    Star Restaurant. 3 years ago
  181. 278
    Deux. 3 years ago
  182. 279
    True Softness (R-18) 3 years ago
  183. 280
    Night (R-18) 3 years ago
  184. 281
    Rumors about Ichiro. 3 years ago
  185. 282
    Legend! 3 years ago
  186. 283
    Animals. 3 years ago
  187. 284
    Laugh. 3 years ago
  188. 285
    Battle against Martial King! 3 years ago
  189. 286
    Battle against Strong! 3 years ago
  190. 287
    Pain that comes. 3 years ago
  191. 288
    Unhappy Second-years. 3 years ago
  192. 289
    Iron Style's Change. 3 years ago
  193. 290
    True Iron Style! 3 years ago
  194. 291
    Story of a young boy. 2 years ago
  195. 292
    Damio. 2 years ago
  196. 293
    Lightning Dragon's Cry of Battle! 2 years ago
  197. 294
    Mind-Body-Technique Realm. 2 years ago
  198. 295
    Enlightenment. 2 years ago
  199. 296
    Lance of Nightmare. 2 years ago
  200. 297
    Brutal Training. 2 years ago
  201. 298
    Bonfire. 2 years ago
  202. 299
    Ichiro's Most Hated Technique - Suicide! 2 years ago
  203. 300
    Martial Arts of Earth! 2 years ago
  204. 301
    Divinity. 2 years ago
  205. 302
    Story of the past. 2 years ago
  206. 303
    Lightning Dragon Shall Ascend To The Heavens! 2 years ago
  207. 304
    Supreme Leader of The Ones Who Are Hiding In The Dark. 2 years ago
  208. 305
    Death and Destruction. 2 years ago
  209. 306
    Ichiro Vs. The Ones Who Are Hiding In The Dark. 2 years ago
  210. 307
    Aether's Journey. 2 years ago
  211. 308
    Lightning Dragon's Sovereignty! 2 years ago
  212. 309
    Fraction of Spearless' Power! 2 years ago
  213. 310
    Dragon of Nine Heavens. 2 years ago
  214. 311
    Genocide. 2 years ago
  215. 312
    Death isn't the end... It is only the beginning. 2 years ago
  216. 313
    Strong Enough. 2 years ago
  217. 314
    Death of... 2 years ago
  218. 315
    Monster... 2 years ago
  219. 316
    Two Martial Kings Vs. Martial Commander Youth. 2 years ago
  220. 317
    Humanity's Hope. 2 years ago
  221. 318
    Abyss' Last Stand. 2 years ago
  222. 319
    King of Island of Death. 2 years ago
  223. 320
    Life-Signal Pearl Watchmen. 2 years ago
  224. 321
    Martial King Realm. 2 years ago
  225. 322
    Metal Style! 2 years ago
  226. 323
    Death. 2 years ago
  227. 324
    Ichiro Vs. Death. 2 years ago
  228. 325
    Expert Martial Arts System. 2 years ago
  229. 326
    News of Death. 2 years ago
  230. 327
    Bittersweet. 2 years ago
  231. 328
    Death of a Titan. 2 years ago
  232. 329
    Leaving Fang's School of Martial Arts. 2 years ago
  233. 330
    Journey of Kurogami Ichiro. 2 years ago
  234. 331
    High School of Rich. 2 years ago
  235. 332
    Youth Competition. 2 years ago
  236. 333
    It's Ichiro. 2 years ago
  237. 334
    Arya's Team Representatives. 2 years ago
  238. 335
    Unable to Contact. 2 years ago
  239. 336
    Third Step. 2 years ago
  240. 337
    Damio's Team. 2 years ago
  241. 338
    Arya Vs. Damio. 2 years ago
  242. 339
    Not so Barbaric. 2 years ago
  243. 340
    One Palm, One Defeat. 2 years ago
  244. 341
    Unfriendly. 2 years ago
  245. 342
    Wolf and Dog. 2 years ago
  246. 343
    Broken Down Hotel. 2 years ago
  247. 344
    Dangerous plot? 2 years ago
  248. 345
    Communication Center. 2 years ago
  249. 346
    We are f#cked. 2 years ago
  250. 347
    Death Goes By The Name of Hypersonic Missiles. 2 years ago
  251. 348
    Iron Kick's Ultimate Might. 2 years ago
  252. 349
    Majestic Government. 2 years ago
  253. 350
    Azura's Force. 2 years ago
  254. 351
    Glaze and Land. 2 years ago
  255. 352
    High Might. 2 years ago
  256. 353
    Arriving at Glazeland. 2 years ago
  257. 354
    Journey Through Snow and Ocean. 2 years ago
  258. 355
    Departure of the Legend. 2 years ago
  259. 356
    Road. 2 years ago
  260. 357
    Nature's Challenge. 2 years ago
  261. 358
    Meeting at the Shack. 2 years ago
  262. 359
    Reunion. 2 years ago
  263. 360
    Glazeland's Finest. 2 years ago
  264. 361
    Returning. 2 years ago
  265. 362
    Disbanded. 2 years ago
  266. 363
    Lie Detector. 2 years ago
  267. 364
    Truthworthy Ichiro? 2 years ago
  268. 365
    The Test. 2 years ago
  269. 366
    Contender Of The Test. 2 years ago
  270. 367
    Old Enemy. 2 years ago
  271. 368
    The Test Is About To Begin! 2 years ago
  272. 369
    Temple of Grandmasters. 2 years ago
  273. 370
    Empyrean. 2 years ago
  274. 371
    Patience. 2 years ago
  275. 372
    Lord's Residence. 2 years ago
  276. 373
    Chosen Ones. 2 years ago
  277. 374
    Horse Stance. 2 years ago
  278. 375
    Budesonide. 2 years ago
  279. 376
    Disciple Hao. 2 years ago
  280. 377
    Yai and Kai. 2 years ago
  281. 378
    Silver Ring. 2 years ago
  282. 379
    Ring Hunt. 2 years ago
  283. 380
    Royal Style. 2 years ago
  284. 381
    Unsuccessful Disciples. 2 years ago
  285. 382
    Talent Stealer. 2 years ago
  286. 383
    Three Young Women Met With Avery. 2 years ago
  287. 384
    Chosen Ones Vs. Mutated Beasts. 2 years ago
  288. 385
    Deadly Beast. 2 years ago
  289. 386
    Secret Geniuses. 2 years ago
  290. 387
    True Iron Style, High Might! 2 years ago
  291. 388
    High Human's Might. 2 years ago
  292. 389
    Geniuses Vs. Deadly Beast. 2 years ago
  293. 390
    Crazy Girl. 2 years ago
  294. 391
    Six Qualified. 2 years ago
  295. 392
    The Sixteen. 2 years ago
  296. 393
    Packing (R-18) 2 years ago
  297. 394
    CRASH. 2 years ago
  298. 395
    Out of Coldland. 2 years ago
  299. 396
    Back to Irio. 2 years ago
  300. 397
    Pride of Irio. 2 years ago
  301. 398
    Ichiro's Return. 2 years ago
  302. 399
    Ichiro Hasn't Changed. 2 years ago
  303. 400
    Christmas Church. 2 years ago
  304. 401
    Heart and Soul. 2 years ago
  305. 402
    Photo. 2 years ago
  306. 403
    Ichiro's Rank. 2 years ago
  307. 404
    Creation of Iron Style. 2 years ago
  308. 405
    Irio's Heart. 2 years ago
  309. 406
    Training. 2 years ago
  310. 407
    True Iron Style, Completed! 2 years ago
  311. 408
    Martial Arts Rank Test. 2 years ago
  312. 409
    Police Commissioner, Marshall. 2 years ago
  313. 410
    True Iron Style Vs. Police Style. 2 years ago
  314. 411
    Marshall's Suffering. 2 years ago
  315. 412
    Ichiro Is Rich! 2 years ago
  316. 413
    Advi. 2 years ago
  317. 414
    Infiltration. 2 years ago
  318. 415
    Masked Assailant. 2 years ago
  319. 416
    Monster Puppet. 2 years ago
  320. 417
    Red Light. 2 years ago
  321. 418
    Uninjurable. 2 years ago
  322. 419
    Battle of Laser Techniques. 2 years ago
  323. 420
    The Craziest Man Alive. 2 years ago
  324. 421
    Armless. 2 years ago
  325. 422
    Destroyed Puppet. 2 years ago
  326. 423
    Police Commissioner's Truth Out. 2 years ago
  327. 424
    Curing Wounds. 2 years ago
  328. 425
    True Iron Style Dojo. 2 years ago
  329. 426
    Marshall's Escape. 2 years ago
  330. 427
    General Baramount. 2 years ago
  331. 428
    Ichiro's Birthday - Age 17. 2 years ago
  332. 429
    Rematch after year. 2 years ago
  333. 430
    Amanda's Reveal. 2 years ago
  334. 431
    Warehouse Battle. 2 years ago
  335. 432
    End of First. 2 years ago
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