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Writing Quality: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Updating Stability:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Story Development:🌟🌟🌟 Character Design:🌟🌟🌟 World Background:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 The start is somewhat confusing. It's POV, grammar and not specifying who's who makes it confusing. The writing is so so. It's structures makes it hard to read and is very confusing and mistakes here and there but in Webnovel standards, it's decent. The story because forced at chapter 8-10. The plot at the start is bad. The story is basically being carried by deus ex machina. But I'm waiting for the plot to continue because this is interesting even with the flaws. I'm waiting for it to age like wine.
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meh, I was expecting stone system designing and a wishfully novel when it was mentioned that the guy creates systems. but he's a weak trash mob level loser.
First of all, I know, I should nitpick some grammar stuff here but no. I don't care, it was readable, and the MC seemed like a genuinely interesting person, one with hopes and dreams and weaknesses - which is why his new power seems to be in good hands. And I don't want to throw around spoilers or anything but I really REALLY enjoyed the logistics of disaster response here. Perhaps it's nerdy to get excited about that stuff but I'm glad the author showed us how the world in this novel works before giving us even more info of the MC. My favorite part has got to be the worldbuilding.
This novel is a high quality story. You can feel that it was that great. You'll get hooked up on it by just reading the prologue. The last line in the prologue is the coolest. Keep it up and Good luck on your writing journey!!
this is actually awesome, ngl.. very well written and very well describe for the characters. tho, i do warn anyone who will read this review, i only read the first chapter and i can say that it is already good.. but i need more from the chapters.. more emotion from the MC.
This story really one of the best story i have ever read. Good job author. Also, I as an author learned alot from your work. Keep on writing
The realism of this novel is what kept me reading through the confusing system sections. Once I got past that, the story became gripping. I am genuinely interested in how this man is going to survive the apocalypse so please continue to upload. Best of luck with this novel, author!
The synopsis really did not do justice to the story. This story is amazing. I can't believe what was I even doing till now that I did not read it. The plot is Great and MC is fascinating. I really enjoyed reading it. Good work author. This story is fabulous
I found the subject and its approach to be very interesting and compelling. It was a bit too early from the first chapters to get a good sense of the MC but even so we can still see glimpses of his personality. The mystery revolving around his existence in the new world is also very captivating and makes me want to read more. The author did a good job with the descriptions as well and the bloody scenes are so well-written. I think this is a very good read and can't wait to see how it continues. Keep up the good work author! 🥰
Novel well written, strong and solid works background, intriguing plot and spot on character design. The story is suspense filled and a worthwhile read. I definitely recommend.
How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked! Keep it up author.
If I'm honest the idea is pretty good, ms the plot is just really messy, combine that with the grammar being not that great (but still a lot better then mtl) and around chapter 10 I have zero clue what is happening, perhaps if I were to reread it I could puzzle it out but it's just written in a rather confusing way. For example it says he finally got back the memories he lost in a chapter, however it was never mentioned that he lost his memories?
Writing Quality: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 Updating Stability:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 Story Development:🌟🌟🌟 Character Design:🌟🌟🌟 World Background:🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 The start is somewhat confusing. It's POV, grammar and not specifying who's who makes it confusing. The writing is so so. It's structures makes it hard to read and is very confusing and mistakes here and there but in Webnovel standards, it's decent. The story because forced at chapter 8-10. The plot at the start is bad. The story is basically being carried by deus ex machina. But I'm waiting for the plot to continue because this is interesting even with the flaws. I'm waiting for it to age like wine.
Spoiler enthüllen meh, I was expecting stone system designing and a wishfully novel when it was mentioned that the guy creates systems. but he's a weak trash mob level loser.
First of all, I know, I should nitpick some grammar stuff here but no. I don't care, it was readable, and the MC seemed like a genuinely interesting person, one with hopes and dreams and weaknesses - which is why his new power seems to be in good hands. And I don't want to throw around spoilers or anything but I really REALLY enjoyed the logistics of disaster response here. Perhaps it's nerdy to get excited about that stuff but I'm glad the author showed us how the world in this novel works before giving us even more info of the MC. My favorite part has got to be the worldbuilding.
This novel is a high quality story. You can feel that it was that great. You'll get hooked up on it by just reading the prologue. The last line in the prologue is the coolest. Keep it up and Good luck on your writing journey!!
this is actually awesome, ngl.. very well written and very well describe for the characters. tho, i do warn anyone who will read this review, i only read the first chapter and i can say that it is already good.. but i need more from the chapters.. more emotion from the MC.
This story really one of the best story i have ever read. Good job author. Also, I as an author learned alot from your work. Keep on writing
The realism of this novel is what kept me reading through the confusing system sections. Once I got past that, the story became gripping. I am genuinely interested in how this man is going to survive the apocalypse so please continue to upload. Best of luck with this novel, author!
The synopsis really did not do justice to the story. This story is amazing. I can't believe what was I even doing till now that I did not read it. The plot is Great and MC is fascinating. I really enjoyed reading it. Good work author. This story is fabulous
I found the subject and its approach to be very interesting and compelling. It was a bit too early from the first chapters to get a good sense of the MC but even so we can still see glimpses of his personality. The mystery revolving around his existence in the new world is also very captivating and makes me want to read more. The author did a good job with the descriptions as well and the bloody scenes are so well-written. I think this is a very good read and can't wait to see how it continues. Keep up the good work author! 🥰
Novel well written, strong and solid works background, intriguing plot and spot on character design. The story is suspense filled and a worthwhile read. I definitely recommend.
How could I not give this story five stars?! this is incredibly written. I felt like I was really there, becoming entranced in the story. if you're looking for a novel written like a professional, then this is it people! just read the first chapter and you'll be hooked! Keep it up author.
If I'm honest the idea is pretty good, ms the plot is just really messy, combine that with the grammar being not that great (but still a lot better then mtl) and around chapter 10 I have zero clue what is happening, perhaps if I were to reread it I could puzzle it out but it's just written in a rather confusing way. For example it says he finally got back the memories he lost in a chapter, however it was never mentioned that he lost his memories?