Alien Evolution System

LV 13

John_Doever

Random review from the author here mostly to tell readers more of what to expect. This novel is a concept of mine that I wrote when I was starting out as a writer a while back when I wrote mostly to just test things out, but lately, now that I've started to write longer works, I've gotten a creative itch to try to pick this back up. So, without further ado, what to expect from the get go that I feel makes this novel concept a little more unique: System/LitRPG/Evolution- I'll be honest and say I always had a kind of issue with the system genre in that most of the time, many novels have MCs that have a system that seems completely out of place with the established setting which exists solely as a means to make the MC stronger. I wanted to give the 'system' of this novel a more natural feel to it, and as a result, it is simply the evolutionary/upgrading process that the MC, a nonhuman, constantly evolving alien creature much like the zerg from starcraft, uses to consume and evolve with. Which brings me to another point: Non-human MC- I have already written a non-human MC novel on this website, but the more I write it, the more I realize I could have explored the concept a whole lot more instead of having a character that was human at core. Here, the MC is completely inhuman, an alien monster that was bred in a cocoon and meant only to destroy and consume. As a result, it is cold, ruthless, and inhuman in many ways. I do plan on developing this MC's character so that it does not stay the same forever, but I will keep the core of its character as being fundamentally inhuman. It will never, as a result, become human for any extended period of time. That was a long read, but hopefully that was informative. Once again, thanks for reading, and though I hope you as a reader enjoy my writing, I can totally understand if it is not to your liking as well.

LV 11

Daoist_Rubeno

Extraordinary good monster evolution story quickly becoming THE Best one of its genre I have ever read and I read a lot. Characters are best part of the novel. Worldbuilding is setup since beginning. Storyline offers many mysteries and connections even between old world and fantasy one. I don't want to write more. Just read it. It's my fav already.

LV 12

Riccy

When I first read the synopsis and the so-called 'Doever Writing Quality Guarantee', I was taken aback. This author has quite the confidence, borderline arrogance, to publicly state such a thing, and in a synopsis no less! But as I read this novel, and got immersed in it, I realized that such confidence was not unsubstantiated. The grammar, vocabulary, lack of plot holes, and great immersive storytelling made me slowly fall in love. I see most of the novels on this platform as fast food. Most are just cheap and quickly made, just to scratch the itch of the reader and nothing more. This novel is like Five Guys. This is some gourmet burger stuff. I think about it even in my sleep. Like the Author's review says, the system element in this novel fits perfectly in the story's settings. Everything so far makes sense. All the potential questions I've had were answered, and I leave every chapter feeling happy and fulfilled. Every chapter fills me with wondrous world-building and I am oftentimes awed by how big the world is and I am often excited by the prospect of our scary alien friend assimilating it all into the Collective. The chapters are also nice and long. Like Lord of the Mysteries long. It's a huge treat compared to the average novel where they just give the minimum amount of words necessary to make Webnovel and the algorithm happy. My only worry is that this author has another large novel that he's working on. It's currently on hold for this novel because he wants to win the competition. Because of the high word count and the effort that goes into maintaining such a quality of work, I am often scared by the idea that the frequency of chapters will fall. Especially when he inevitably resumes working on his other novel. In conclusion, TL;DR, read this novel, cherish it, and treat it like you would treat your cute 2D anime waifu. With love. I love this novel almost as much as I love her.... almost.

LV 13

0Nami_Yami0

I remember reading this story back when the author was going by Flambe. It's just as amazing as it was back then if not better. The MC is a type of xenomorph who ends up stranded in your typical fantasy world which drew me in instantly. I'm looking forward to seeing how it evolves and adapts. Keep up the great work.

LV 12

spooklyduck

it's very refreshing, usually when we have a nonhuman MC they love humans and try to become one again and dislike killing them but this one wants to kill everything on the planet.

LV 1

SoulStar_2686

Why isn't new chapter comming????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Did something happen to author???????????????????

LV 12

HaiCopper

So far this story has been to the same standard as previous Doever works; super well written! Currently the story is only beginning so there's not much to critique fairly, but this truly does create a more "plausible" and as far as I am aware, unique, take on the Evolution LITRPG genre so far. Will edit/make a new review once the story has progressed further and their is more content to review!

LV 11

Miguelll

I keep it short and simple: - most interesting/best non-human MC I have ever seen - no plot holes found until now - excellent worldbuilding (direct and background) - consistent daily updates (even with bonus chapters) - well thought out power system that gives the author much room for creativity in fights - every major character is more then enough fleshed out to care about in conclusion: pls read this if you haven't yet

LV 11

Yom125

very entertaining. it has had me at the edge of my seat wanting more and more. I love the perspective of it. sci-fi meets medival fantasy and magic blended together perfectly. Looking forward to how the story develops further. Keep up the amazing job!

LV 1

DaoistEg4G6w

The perfect world building and the best non-human MC, i really hate when other non-human MC somehow take Human form and lose the taste of non-human genre, the only problem I have is that there's to many unnecessary and boring development.

LV 15

Lestda

A extremely good novel that was abandoned for the Author, what a f shame, the constancy of ppl nowadays is lacking in many ways, yet another for of lacking appears... 😢 sad.

LV 2

Ashen_Blaze

By far one of if not the best novel on this website, currently the author is working on another novel so don't be scared, if you think he is abandoning this novel he isn't, he's just busy working on his other novel.

LV 14

DeadBite

Great book, Is a joy to read,one best books i have read one this site just hopes it stay free so every can injoy the this master piece of a book

LV 3

I_am_fucked

I am the bone of my exp, Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood, I've created over thousand useless reviews, Unknown to death, nor known to life, Have withstood my pain to write many comments, Yet those hands will never hold anything, Thus, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works

LV 12

Abby2636

Hallo! I just have to say I've previously read their work. The book its called Level 100 Farmer and I apsolutly love how they write. That's actually the reason I decided to read their other work. I actually have already read all they've posted so far on the other book so I wanted to read this one. But I haven't started reading this one yet I have faith though that this will also captivate me to spend all my time to read this one also. I plan to read their other stories also after this one. So, if your having trouble chosing to read this one or not I assure you that this will be interesting to you. That's saying if you do indeed enjoy slow burners like they said before hand or well typed. And that's Good Day.

LV 4

Blek_Penther

test 1 test 2 test 3 test 4 test 5 test 6 test 7 test 8 test 9 test 10 test 11 test 12 test 13 test 14 test 15 test 16 test 17 test 18 test 19 test 20 okay wifi back This novel is awesome :]

LV 4

Blek_Penther

I've read until chapter 12 so far and the book is extremely satisfying to read. The story is unique and feels like a well-thought story, and having seen others centred around being sent to the magic world, this one has different, better vibes. It is unlike the cliche boring stories you don't look at. It's a unique story and it's fun to read. Keep it up, author!

LV 4

THANATOS_

Coming back here once again, i can still say that this has been an amazing read thus far.But there has been no news from the author for a while now and I'm sharing to worry something happened to them. I hope they are okay and that they know we are still waiting for him and the continuation of his amazing works, if he ever plans on it.

LV 1

Diety_2004

A Great Piece of Art. What else do you expect me to say? Especially, the writing is too beautiful, I mean I wanna drown in it. I really wish to write a fragment of your vocabularies style writing. I really love it.

LV 10

kazwerth

This book seemed very unassuming but surprised me in the best ways and almost sucked the soles off my boots with the way it flatters my taste in reading. It does go a bit too much into information for my own personal tastes, but it doesn't escape the story for too long before you're sucked back in and latching onto the mc's carapace for the ride. I do love the matter-of-factly attitude of the mc and although every story crowns it's mc as the final survivor, I'm still gripping the edge of the seat with an iron grip of my clenched cheeks and awaiting the outcome of our beloved mc. Thank you Author for going through the pain of your mind uterus and giving birth to this beautiful story