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I dont have a strong oppinion on The story itself, but The magic system is vary fleshed out.
I like the story what mostly irked me was the ending chapter. I enjoyed the way the story progressed from beginning to end but I felt myself just wanting a bit more at the end.
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it was a pretty good FF, it had a good main character, a decent plot, and a fine character development.
Es la primera vez que leí un fanfic de Percy Jackson y me llevé una grata sorpresa, tiene una buena traducción y una gramática fluida, lo que destaca de esta novela es el sentido de humor del MC 😆 diablos no paraba de reírme 😂🤣 lo recomiendo jajaja 🤙🏻
I like your stories… but I found that I don’t like this story as much as your other stuff. Your other stories were a perfect balance of humour and plot. This however, felt and read like one big joke that never hit its punchline.
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It handled story progression well even doe the power leveling is very fast but stayed on track. The jokes are really good and fit into the character.
I read to the 111 chapter. I like the story, though it feels vague in some spots, dragged out in others, and I feel like the Mc got a bit dumber a few times. he randomly became a Roman god, and it was only mentioned once so far. and the thing that irritates me the most and many readers so far is the fact we can't guess who's Mc's father is. The author keeps edging use on that. also I'm a little upset Mc and Loki didn't become friends but that's just me. beyond this the story is actually nice it just stopped being my cup of tea
Absolutely mental the ending hit me like a truck. There are plenty of grammatical errors but they aren't very noticeable so you can ignore that. There character descriptions are lacking in both detail and being there. The crossovers were unexpected but not that bad. And no the ending is not truck-kun
I’m up to ch. 30 at the moment, I’m so fascinated by this fanfic, it has me shocked, absorbed, excited, hysterical and amazed how it is so well connected with its origin in a twisted circumstance that brings it together. The MC is 11 right? The Demi-Titan has why more character and personality then the origin story MC & Co-MC! The fanfic has an unexpected pov of the MC i always feel like I’m see through the eyes of an 18 or 25 year old man but I keep forgetting his body is that of a kid!?
Great read.There was a good background as I found that all characters got their respective attention. the comedy was good and I loved the development.The author made this story look like the origin of his on series of fanfics that are interconnected but distinct in their own way, and I love it.Amazing work author. 😄😁
ok that was something you have to like perrsy Jackson to enjoy this story.
THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfiction ever!!!Simply unbelievable journey in a familiar world with a brand new character.
Good book, I don’t really read Percy Jackson fan fics, but glad I read this one. 10/10 would read again
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Amazing, one of the best, not even, probably THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfic out there, very well done, 5/5, 10/10, 700/700. Amazing story, unexpected turns, and a bunch of hilarious comedy.
Lembrando a mim mesmo: Comecei a ler, mas não suportei a personalidade, história inserção do MC...............................................
Perhaps one if the best fanfics I have ever read, definitely at least the best Percy Jackson Fanfic I have ever read. This story was addictive I read faster try to absorb this master peace than almost any other thing I have ever read. This story is worth your time l, and while bit perfect its imperfections is one of its endearing qualities.
Not bad) 😁Cool story.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)))))))))))).
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Hello there, I've just finished reading the story. So, I'm here to leave my review. It might contain spoilers, so be warned. 1) The writing is good, with rarely any spelling or grammar errors. (1 point) 2) The overall plot is interesting, based on the Percy Jackson franchise with a mix of Lovecraft. If I had to have a complaint was that it almost isn't fanfic. I mean. In the beginning, there were the PJ Stories from the cannon books. But that quickly was forgotten and focused more on Pantheon's (greek especially) mythologies. It was nice. But rarely an actual Percy Jackson world story. In resume, it is a good story but hardly a PJ fan-fic. (0.5 Points) 3) Character development was nice. Mc was dumb sometimes but eventually, he leaned. Maybe it was intentional or the Author was correcting things as he saw complaints in the comments. There were many funny moments. I laughed many times. It would have been nice if the humor was kept throughout the story, unfortunately, the ending was too much drama (change destiny kind of drama) (0.5) 4) I personally like seeing and imagining (in fanfic) the things that aren't shown in canon and an MC that does things differently from the original. Since the story left out many Percy Jackson and practically became another thing altogether it did not fulfill my desire for fanfic. (no points) 5) The story had many plots and mysteries. Much left to explore. But still good. There could have been many more interactions and in my opinion. The end was resolved much too fast. ( 0.5 points) My final count is 2.5 out of 5. It doesn't mean it's bad. It is actually really good. It just didn't have all the things I was expecting. I recommend you to read this fanfic. It is a good read.
irritating. sometimes I think. what is the most annoying. Ah, I remember that novel😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
A fantastic story, full of grammatical errors but I don't care. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yet another great on from our lord. One of the few I read till the end, it was humorous, good romance and good original events.
Wonderfully written but sadly too much of forced bs for the plot. The MCs thought process and intentions when reading from his monologue don't match his actions. It's like MCs thought process and the mc doing the action are two different beings. Also a lot of stupid decision. Side characters are cardboard cutout too that ability of logical reasoning.
I dont have a strong oppinion on The story itself, but The magic system is vary fleshed out.
I like the story what mostly irked me was the ending chapter. I enjoyed the way the story progressed from beginning to end but I felt myself just wanting a bit more at the end.
Spoiler enthüllen it was a pretty good FF, it had a good main character, a decent plot, and a fine character development.
Es la primera vez que leí un fanfic de Percy Jackson y me llevé una grata sorpresa, tiene una buena traducción y una gramática fluida, lo que destaca de esta novela es el sentido de humor del MC 😆 diablos no paraba de reírme 😂🤣 lo recomiendo jajaja 🤙🏻
I like your stories… but I found that I don’t like this story as much as your other stuff. Your other stories were a perfect balance of humour and plot. This however, felt and read like one big joke that never hit its punchline.
One word [img=Smitten] Hhhhhjjjjjiiiihhhhhhhhhhhhbhhhhuuuhhhhhhhhhhuhhhuuuuuujuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
It handled story progression well even doe the power leveling is very fast but stayed on track. The jokes are really good and fit into the character.
I read to the 111 chapter. I like the story, though it feels vague in some spots, dragged out in others, and I feel like the Mc got a bit dumber a few times. he randomly became a Roman god, and it was only mentioned once so far. and the thing that irritates me the most and many readers so far is the fact we can't guess who's Mc's father is. The author keeps edging use on that. also I'm a little upset Mc and Loki didn't become friends but that's just me. beyond this the story is actually nice it just stopped being my cup of tea
Absolutely mental the ending hit me like a truck. There are plenty of grammatical errors but they aren't very noticeable so you can ignore that. There character descriptions are lacking in both detail and being there. The crossovers were unexpected but not that bad. And no the ending is not truck-kun
I’m up to ch. 30 at the moment, I’m so fascinated by this fanfic, it has me shocked, absorbed, excited, hysterical and amazed how it is so well connected with its origin in a twisted circumstance that brings it together. The MC is 11 right? The Demi-Titan has why more character and personality then the origin story MC & Co-MC! The fanfic has an unexpected pov of the MC i always feel like I’m see through the eyes of an 18 or 25 year old man but I keep forgetting his body is that of a kid!?
Great read.There was a good background as I found that all characters got their respective attention. the comedy was good and I loved the development.The author made this story look like the origin of his on series of fanfics that are interconnected but distinct in their own way, and I love it.Amazing work author. 😄😁
ok that was something you have to like perrsy Jackson to enjoy this story.
THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfiction ever!!!Simply unbelievable journey in a familiar world with a brand new character.
Good book, I don’t really read Percy Jackson fan fics, but glad I read this one. 10/10 would read again
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Amazing, one of the best, not even, probably THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfic out there, very well done, 5/5, 10/10, 700/700. Amazing story, unexpected turns, and a bunch of hilarious comedy.
Lembrando a mim mesmo: Comecei a ler, mas não suportei a personalidade, história inserção do MC...............................................
Perhaps one if the best fanfics I have ever read, definitely at least the best Percy Jackson Fanfic I have ever read. This story was addictive I read faster try to absorb this master peace than almost any other thing I have ever read. This story is worth your time l, and while bit perfect its imperfections is one of its endearing qualities.
Not bad) 😁Cool story.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)))))))))))).
Divertido hasta hasta el último cap Blablablablabalabalablabalabalabalabalabalabalabalabalasbslsbslsbsslsbslsbslssbslsbslsbsslsbslsbsslsbslsbsslsnslsbslbslssbslsbslsbslsbsslsnslsnslssbslsnslssblssbslsbslsbslsbslsbsslsbsl
Spoiler enthüllen Hello there, I've just finished reading the story. So, I'm here to leave my review. It might contain spoilers, so be warned. 1) The writing is good, with rarely any spelling or grammar errors. (1 point) 2) The overall plot is interesting, based on the Percy Jackson franchise with a mix of Lovecraft. If I had to have a complaint was that it almost isn't fanfic. I mean. In the beginning, there were the PJ Stories from the cannon books. But that quickly was forgotten and focused more on Pantheon's (greek especially) mythologies. It was nice. But rarely an actual Percy Jackson world story. In resume, it is a good story but hardly a PJ fan-fic. (0.5 Points) 3) Character development was nice. Mc was dumb sometimes but eventually, he leaned. Maybe it was intentional or the Author was correcting things as he saw complaints in the comments. There were many funny moments. I laughed many times. It would have been nice if the humor was kept throughout the story, unfortunately, the ending was too much drama (change destiny kind of drama) (0.5) 4) I personally like seeing and imagining (in fanfic) the things that aren't shown in canon and an MC that does things differently from the original. Since the story left out many Percy Jackson and practically became another thing altogether it did not fulfill my desire for fanfic. (no points) 5) The story had many plots and mysteries. Much left to explore. But still good. There could have been many more interactions and in my opinion. The end was resolved much too fast. ( 0.5 points) My final count is 2.5 out of 5. It doesn't mean it's bad. It is actually really good. It just didn't have all the things I was expecting. I recommend you to read this fanfic. It is a good read.
irritating. sometimes I think. what is the most annoying. Ah, I remember that novel😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
A fantastic story, full of grammatical errors but I don't care. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yet another great on from our lord. One of the few I read till the end, it was humorous, good romance and good original events.
Wonderfully written but sadly too much of forced bs for the plot. The MCs thought process and intentions when reading from his monologue don't match his actions. It's like MCs thought process and the mc doing the action are two different beings. Also a lot of stupid decision. Side characters are cardboard cutout too that ability of logical reasoning.