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I really am enjoying this book so far! The characters are great and there is a lot of tension and intrigue. It is gripping and the reader doesn’t know what will happen next! I Highly recommend it!!!
The thing that really sucked is I really enjoyed this author's world they created. Especially with the inner weaving of all the characters which there are a good amount of them. But by chapter 168 the author gave up trying to make proper words and it became a scrambled mess that you could barely make out as sentences. I occasionally come back to see if they tried to update their chapters and fix them which they need. But I have little faith that they'll do that. All I can say is it's a shame.
I absolutely loved the story. It’ very promising, however around ch 155 on, the words are completely scrambled and ineligible. Then by ch 168 it’ a completely different story. Please fix this I was so waiting for the reunion of the characters!!!
This book is promising until you get to around chapters 155-165 when the words are all scrabbled, then from 168 onward is a completely different story. The novel really needs to work put in to fix it, it seems rushed, but the plot is good overall.
I really like this story it has all the elements needed for perfection but I do have a question will she end up with both of the ml's or only on of them? I really hope its both 😭
OMG OMG OMG This is one of the bestest novels I have ever read This book is a must read must must MUST I just cant describe how much I like this novel.....😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Amo a loa gemelos, realmente me hacen reír ¡¡ quiero ver cuando crezcan y ver sus travesuras. Me gusta porque es una historia con drama pero no excesivo. Realmente me intriga saber como el gran mago se enamora de elle. Aún hay muchas preguntas sin responder... seguiré esperando las actualizaciones.
I had to write this review 'cause, who knows, someone might have the same opinion as me. I initially thought this was reverse harem because of the synopsis but the further I read, the further I got curious. So I checked the tags (I was at ch 50+ I think?), and there was no reverse harem tag. I got sullen, knowing only one ML might be chosen. But some authors just don't tag every theme/sub genres, so I still had a tiny hope that maybe they'll all end up together (please—if the one reading this doesn't like reverse harem, please don't get disgusted by my opinion). That's all. I'll be reading all the chapters (and wait for updates) 'cause this book got me hooked!
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VwV I Love This Book But I Am Strange So I Didn’t Write Anything ._.
💗💗this story is amazing,I am waiting for the new updates , the character ,they are so wonderful,so far I am really being obsessed with this book💖💖
Such a great book. I have to check for updates every day. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, just the synopsis is very hooking! I like how complicated things in their lives. It added to its charm as a whole and the characters were naughty with the Lead. More heartwarming scenes and cuddly moments to remember. Overall a good refreshing take on the genre. Peace ✌️
Hey cuties, it's your shameless author san here. I started this book because I've weirdly been obsessed with 'Scumbag system.' I hope you guys like it <3
Off to a good start! The FL exudes so much potential and ambition, and I was able to empathize with her. With a little polishing here and there, I'm sure this will exceeds the expectations of the readers. Can't wait for her journey, and continue doing a good job, dear author! ^^
Wow. I mean, most everyone else already said so much about the current story. I agree wholeheartedly, but I’d like to add, naturally. I think that the way you write the character’s personalities and dialogue just has a unique and genuine charisma to it that is so so important in a story such as this one. Congratulations, and PLEASE write more!:)
I must say, I am impressed by the novel even though I usually don't read novels of this genre. Thankfully author seems to know how to twist the plot into something exciting. Looking forward for more. [img=update][img=update]
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I don't usually read these types of novels but you was able to pull me in with your immersive story telling and fleshed out characters. I ended up really liking Feng and it felt like I was struggling right beside her. Keep up the good work, I want to see where the story leads her.
This story is really well written; the descriptions are great and very vivid. It is clear that you have spent a lot of time on this, and your prolonged effort will definitely pay off :) I look forward to seeing what happens next
A solid beginning to what promises to be an wild story of revenge and conspiracy and more. The writing/translation could stand a little work, but other than that, this is a fun read.
Please write more. The main character is being treated so unjustly, while she is a sweet woman - she just happens to be ambitious, OK? I truly want the best for her and I think that's what really sold this story to me. The MC is just so lovable!
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Now here we an intriguing start to a webnovel. The protagonist is going through a bit of a rough spot, losing control of her company and then being blamed for the death of a business colleague. I was just disappointed I ran out of content to read just as the story was really finding its strides, ending on a cliffhanger. I sense a bit of a conspiracy going on and I look forward to seeing how the protagonist faces these obstacles.
please give me more!!!!! I love the story line and characters, there is a good development in both and our FL and ML's are just absolutely adorable. I definitely look forward to see how their life will turn out in this world or if they will ever go back to their old life.
I really am enjoying this book so far! The characters are great and there is a lot of tension and intrigue. It is gripping and the reader doesn’t know what will happen next! I Highly recommend it!!!
The thing that really sucked is I really enjoyed this author's world they created. Especially with the inner weaving of all the characters which there are a good amount of them. But by chapter 168 the author gave up trying to make proper words and it became a scrambled mess that you could barely make out as sentences. I occasionally come back to see if they tried to update their chapters and fix them which they need. But I have little faith that they'll do that. All I can say is it's a shame.
I absolutely loved the story. It’ very promising, however around ch 155 on, the words are completely scrambled and ineligible. Then by ch 168 it’ a completely different story. Please fix this I was so waiting for the reunion of the characters!!!
This book is promising until you get to around chapters 155-165 when the words are all scrabbled, then from 168 onward is a completely different story. The novel really needs to work put in to fix it, it seems rushed, but the plot is good overall.
I really like this story it has all the elements needed for perfection but I do have a question will she end up with both of the ml's or only on of them? I really hope its both 😭
OMG OMG OMG This is one of the bestest novels I have ever read This book is a must read must must MUST I just cant describe how much I like this novel.....😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Amo a loa gemelos, realmente me hacen reír ¡¡ quiero ver cuando crezcan y ver sus travesuras. Me gusta porque es una historia con drama pero no excesivo. Realmente me intriga saber como el gran mago se enamora de elle. Aún hay muchas preguntas sin responder... seguiré esperando las actualizaciones.
I had to write this review 'cause, who knows, someone might have the same opinion as me. I initially thought this was reverse harem because of the synopsis but the further I read, the further I got curious. So I checked the tags (I was at ch 50+ I think?), and there was no reverse harem tag. I got sullen, knowing only one ML might be chosen. But some authors just don't tag every theme/sub genres, so I still had a tiny hope that maybe they'll all end up together (please—if the one reading this doesn't like reverse harem, please don't get disgusted by my opinion). That's all. I'll be reading all the chapters (and wait for updates) 'cause this book got me hooked!
Spoiler enthüllen VwV I Love This Book But I Am Strange So I Didn’t Write Anything ._.
💗💗this story is amazing,I am waiting for the new updates , the character ,they are so wonderful,so far I am really being obsessed with this book💖💖
Such a great book. I have to check for updates every day. :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, just the synopsis is very hooking! I like how complicated things in their lives. It added to its charm as a whole and the characters were naughty with the Lead. More heartwarming scenes and cuddly moments to remember. Overall a good refreshing take on the genre. Peace ✌️
Hey cuties, it's your shameless author san here. I started this book because I've weirdly been obsessed with 'Scumbag system.' I hope you guys like it <3
Off to a good start! The FL exudes so much potential and ambition, and I was able to empathize with her. With a little polishing here and there, I'm sure this will exceeds the expectations of the readers. Can't wait for her journey, and continue doing a good job, dear author! ^^
Wow. I mean, most everyone else already said so much about the current story. I agree wholeheartedly, but I’d like to add, naturally. I think that the way you write the character’s personalities and dialogue just has a unique and genuine charisma to it that is so so important in a story such as this one. Congratulations, and PLEASE write more!:)
I must say, I am impressed by the novel even though I usually don't read novels of this genre. Thankfully author seems to know how to twist the plot into something exciting. Looking forward for more. [img=update][img=update]
Spoiler enthüllen I don't usually read these types of novels but you was able to pull me in with your immersive story telling and fleshed out characters. I ended up really liking Feng and it felt like I was struggling right beside her. Keep up the good work, I want to see where the story leads her.
This story is really well written; the descriptions are great and very vivid. It is clear that you have spent a lot of time on this, and your prolonged effort will definitely pay off :) I look forward to seeing what happens next
A solid beginning to what promises to be an wild story of revenge and conspiracy and more. The writing/translation could stand a little work, but other than that, this is a fun read.
Please write more. The main character is being treated so unjustly, while she is a sweet woman - she just happens to be ambitious, OK? I truly want the best for her and I think that's what really sold this story to me. The MC is just so lovable!
Spoiler enthüllen Now here we an intriguing start to a webnovel. The protagonist is going through a bit of a rough spot, losing control of her company and then being blamed for the death of a business colleague. I was just disappointed I ran out of content to read just as the story was really finding its strides, ending on a cliffhanger. I sense a bit of a conspiracy going on and I look forward to seeing how the protagonist faces these obstacles.
please give me more!!!!! I love the story line and characters, there is a good development in both and our FL and ML's are just absolutely adorable. I definitely look forward to see how their life will turn out in this world or if they will ever go back to their old life.