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This novel definitely stands out from the rest of the novels on here. First off is the writing. The writing in this book is really well done, few spelling mistakes and overall great grammar. What few spelling mistakes there may be arent so bad that you can’t figure out what the author is trying to say like so many others on this app. Next is the plot, and if you’re a fan of darker books down count this one out because of the world it’s set in because this book manages to turn the happy go lucky world of MHA where heroes are abound into it’s own comparatively darker take. The main character is Midoriya, but a much more mature and serious take on the character. Updates are from what i can see relatively consistent. I’m really looking forward to how this story progresses because I am loving it so far.
Haven't read it yet but do I need to know a lot about dark souls to read this ? . ......... ...... .. . .. ... . .. .. . ............ ...
please continue the story as it is good and I would like to see more as I am a fan of both dark souls and my hero academia so I would find it interesting how you blend th these two concepts together
there are vary few dark souls fanfics on here witch sucks so when i find one and its good i just can stop wanting to read more so im giving five stars plz keep writing this one
Not bad at all, but let's go in order. Really cool Character Design and World Background. To be able to read about the various bosses of DS in such a good way is something exciting. The fusion of the two worlds strangely works. We come to the part that, however, made me drop the fiction, the Story Development, obviously for completely subjective tastes. SPOILER: I've read every single chapter with a lot of hype, but the last few have disappointed me. The fact that Izuku shows up so early is something I didn't like but that's not the serious part. Well, the death of a character and it's "rebirth", which is a distinctive feature of the protagonist (besides of course the journey he has made), made it useless for me to continue reading the fiction. However I recommend the fiction that perfectly mixes the two worlds without ever getting bored.
I love the characters especially Izuku because we only see him as a happy cinnammon roll although the part where he still wants to save people is the same his personality and relationship with All Might and Bakugou is different. So far it is a great story love the storyline and I enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more of this Author! 😁👍
well let see it started of pretty well got a bit edgy but meh I like it it just you really messed up the world and your upload stability is just terrible to be honest 2 Chapters every month sometimes even one like Bruh
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Characters were interesting and fleshed out. the story is also engaging and make the readers want to read more. good job author! Cheers to more!
A very great fanfic of mha for me. the character development for MC is very great and not only him all the characters are showing great promise. the idea of combing MHA with dark souls created this wonderful fanfic. I hope the author keeps updating more chapter, thanks
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Impressive,but you should at least write 1 chapter a day.It can least come to top 50 fanfic ranking if you try to upload daily.Oh and by the way,Keep up the good work
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Just 5 stars all around, the emotion, the setting and dialogue is perfect. I do hope to see chapter 20 in the future, however your mind comes first
Yeah... This is some good weed... Fanfic bro! Writing Quality: My native language isn`t English so I can`t really find every flaw in text... But I don`t really seen any visible (for me) mistakes. Stability of Updates: I don`t really need to write something here right? You can see it yourself... Story Development: Good. Not "fast as **** boiiii" and not as slow as some authors. Character Design:Not bad tho. I think many many authors would not let Bakugou get smarter in order to make their MC look better. They`d just leave`d him be stupid and arrogant. I like that Izuku is cold-blooded but not entirely insensitive. He still has he`s feels, looks on world(quite ****ed right now tho). And I`m happy that Mc revelead his past.(IDK why tho... It`s just that author made a good move with this...Movie time: Dark Souls Version?) World Background: 4-stars because it`s fanfiction (lol). But i like how author made Dark Souls affect MHA. Undead, Bosses. Au revoir
This is a really really good fanfic!❤🎉 But go and read other reviews, I'm too lazy to write my a try of my own😅 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
no don't let people call him deku man you are worst author sorry I am saying this but this worst and idiotic thing to do he just commited suicide for calling deku and bulling doesn't believe in so called hero don't do this man please don't
nothing happens feijoada ... kinda meh, he goes to one of the most depressing universes there is and spend years fighting but apparently that cannot change even a little how he views the world or the people in it
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Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение. Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Я написа 6 раз " хочу продолжение " , 7 раз написал " хочу продолжение " 8 раз ..... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
More....I...need...more...MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. TAKE MY POWER STONES......BUT GIVE IT TO MEEEEE...... P.S. Good i like dat. Take ur time to write, but never give up. DS with BNHA, good idea
Я в восторге . Это история лучшея что я читал за последнии 4 месяца . Спасибо автору . жду продолжение . Мне нравится всё в этой истории . Персонажи , лор , повествование все просто супер.
All the 4 out of 5 stars I can give to you right now. Updating stability was really been extended due to you having rest. But I like the story so much. I hope you can do much better and use the critics as your guide to make it better. Good job!
This is amazing!!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊✊✊✊✊👁️👄👁️
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I think it is amazing, the chapter quality is great and despite wait it worth it.............................................................
Amazing just wow.............................................................................................................................
love it .................................................................................................................................................
I just found your ff in fanfiction dot net. I thought this is just a stolen ff. But after confirming the name of author, this Author is legit writer.
the story is good..so is the setting of world ..but the issue is with izuku..his power is such that of a demi-god, he died many times..fought many wars..etc etc..then, how come, he didn't secure first place in the starting quirk rankings..I get that he is holding back..just using dimensional storage but come on man!, he can lift a freaking huge baseball bat,..let's forget this it's not much of an issue, the main issue is .. in later part of the story, while reading, I get the feeling that he behaves more like a talented rookie rather than a last surviving war veteran.. this story is really good., that's one of the reason I find above reason in the paragraph off-putting..sorry, if you feel bad or angry..this is my honest opinion..good job author
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i dont really write reviews but this book deserves it. This book is amazing. I thought it would just be another generic Cross over. But as i read through it did something that alot of book cant. It made me feel for the characters. I want to give it 5 stars, but im a realist. the stability of updates leaves me wanting more. and the writing quality isnt perfect, but its close. If the author continues at this quality i wouldnt be suprised to see the book in the top 10 of the fanfic leaderboard.
This novel definitely stands out from the rest of the novels on here. First off is the writing. The writing in this book is really well done, few spelling mistakes and overall great grammar. What few spelling mistakes there may be arent so bad that you can’t figure out what the author is trying to say like so many others on this app. Next is the plot, and if you’re a fan of darker books down count this one out because of the world it’s set in because this book manages to turn the happy go lucky world of MHA where heroes are abound into it’s own comparatively darker take. The main character is Midoriya, but a much more mature and serious take on the character. Updates are from what i can see relatively consistent. I’m really looking forward to how this story progresses because I am loving it so far.
Haven't read it yet but do I need to know a lot about dark souls to read this ? . ......... ...... .. . .. ... . .. .. . ............ ...
please continue the story as it is good and I would like to see more as I am a fan of both dark souls and my hero academia so I would find it interesting how you blend th these two concepts together
there are vary few dark souls fanfics on here witch sucks so when i find one and its good i just can stop wanting to read more so im giving five stars plz keep writing this one
Not bad at all, but let's go in order. Really cool Character Design and World Background. To be able to read about the various bosses of DS in such a good way is something exciting. The fusion of the two worlds strangely works. We come to the part that, however, made me drop the fiction, the Story Development, obviously for completely subjective tastes. SPOILER: I've read every single chapter with a lot of hype, but the last few have disappointed me. The fact that Izuku shows up so early is something I didn't like but that's not the serious part. Well, the death of a character and it's "rebirth", which is a distinctive feature of the protagonist (besides of course the journey he has made), made it useless for me to continue reading the fiction. However I recommend the fiction that perfectly mixes the two worlds without ever getting bored.
I love the characters especially Izuku because we only see him as a happy cinnammon roll although the part where he still wants to save people is the same his personality and relationship with All Might and Bakugou is different. So far it is a great story love the storyline and I enjoyed reading it. Hope to read more of this Author! 😁👍
well let see it started of pretty well got a bit edgy but meh I like it it just you really messed up the world and your upload stability is just terrible to be honest 2 Chapters every month sometimes even one like Bruh
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Characters were interesting and fleshed out. the story is also engaging and make the readers want to read more. good job author! Cheers to more!
A very great fanfic of mha for me. the character development for MC is very great and not only him all the characters are showing great promise. the idea of combing MHA with dark souls created this wonderful fanfic. I hope the author keeps updating more chapter, thanks
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Impressive,but you should at least write 1 chapter a day.It can least come to top 50 fanfic ranking if you try to upload daily.Oh and by the way,Keep up the good work
Spoiler enthüllen Just 5 stars all around, the emotion, the setting and dialogue is perfect. I do hope to see chapter 20 in the future, however your mind comes first
Yeah... This is some good weed... Fanfic bro! Writing Quality: My native language isn`t English so I can`t really find every flaw in text... But I don`t really seen any visible (for me) mistakes. Stability of Updates: I don`t really need to write something here right? You can see it yourself... Story Development: Good. Not "fast as **** boiiii" and not as slow as some authors. Character Design:Not bad tho. I think many many authors would not let Bakugou get smarter in order to make their MC look better. They`d just leave`d him be stupid and arrogant. I like that Izuku is cold-blooded but not entirely insensitive. He still has he`s feels, looks on world(quite ****ed right now tho). And I`m happy that Mc revelead his past.(IDK why tho... It`s just that author made a good move with this...Movie time: Dark Souls Version?) World Background: 4-stars because it`s fanfiction (lol). But i like how author made Dark Souls affect MHA. Undead, Bosses. Au revoir
This is a really really good fanfic!❤🎉 But go and read other reviews, I'm too lazy to write my a try of my own😅 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
no don't let people call him deku man you are worst author sorry I am saying this but this worst and idiotic thing to do he just commited suicide for calling deku and bulling doesn't believe in so called hero don't do this man please don't
nothing happens feijoada ... kinda meh, he goes to one of the most depressing universes there is and spend years fighting but apparently that cannot change even a little how he views the world or the people in it
Spoiler enthüllen Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение. Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Хочу продолжение . Я написа 6 раз " хочу продолжение " , 7 раз написал " хочу продолжение " 8 раз ..... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
More....I...need...more...MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. TAKE MY POWER STONES......BUT GIVE IT TO MEEEEE...... P.S. Good i like dat. Take ur time to write, but never give up. DS with BNHA, good idea
Я в восторге . Это история лучшея что я читал за последнии 4 месяца . Спасибо автору . жду продолжение . Мне нравится всё в этой истории . Персонажи , лор , повествование все просто супер.
All the 4 out of 5 stars I can give to you right now. Updating stability was really been extended due to you having rest. But I like the story so much. I hope you can do much better and use the critics as your guide to make it better. Good job!
This is amazing!!!!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊✊✊✊✊👁️👄👁️
Dope Asf😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁😲😁
I think it is amazing, the chapter quality is great and despite wait it worth it.............................................................
Amazing just wow.............................................................................................................................
love it .................................................................................................................................................
I just found your ff in fanfiction dot net. I thought this is just a stolen ff. But after confirming the name of author, this Author is legit writer.
the story is good..so is the setting of world ..but the issue is with izuku..his power is such that of a demi-god, he died many times..fought many wars..etc etc..then, how come, he didn't secure first place in the starting quirk rankings..I get that he is holding back..just using dimensional storage but come on man!, he can lift a freaking huge baseball bat,..let's forget this it's not much of an issue, the main issue is .. in later part of the story, while reading, I get the feeling that he behaves more like a talented rookie rather than a last surviving war veteran.. this story is really good., that's one of the reason I find above reason in the paragraph off-putting..sorry, if you feel bad or angry..this is my honest opinion..good job author
Spoiler enthüllen
i dont really write reviews but this book deserves it. This book is amazing. I thought it would just be another generic Cross over. But as i read through it did something that alot of book cant. It made me feel for the characters. I want to give it 5 stars, but im a realist. the stability of updates leaves me wanting more. and the writing quality isnt perfect, but its close. If the author continues at this quality i wouldnt be suprised to see the book in the top 10 of the fanfic leaderboard.