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In this fanfic there are no faceless men and Valyrian steel swords, right? ________________________________________________________________________
Written at chapter 120. This story started off great but slowly lost its steam. Once MC achieved his goals of conquering the seven kingdoms, he didn't really do anything. Even though he knew The Others(White Walkers) were coming, he did no training or preparing the kingdom. Knowing they were stronger than him. Most of the magic trails were boring and offered nothing to him, just killing for the sake of killing. I would say only two gave something good for him, let alone test him. The Others' volume was too short and didn't really do anything. No one important died or hurt. Some of the first/important characters we meet get pushed back to the point that they don't really do anything or forgotten. The volume that Ser Jamie died in was fairly disappointing. It didn't really make sense or have a proper build to such major character for MC died in. The whole alternative future god of MC kind of ruined the story, like what was the point of our MC then. Should have done something like MC was reincarnated or something. Over started of great and became dull later on. WQ 4 SD 3 CD 2 US 2 WB 3
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The story is engaging and makes you want to binge read until the latest chapter not one for villain/hero characters but the mc in the story entices you to read more
Unique story already liking this. ... ...... .. .. .... .. ... ..... .... ... .. . . . ....... . .... .. .. ... . . ... . .. ... ... . .. Continue
Nice take by the way the way you You toke the story In another perspective the only problem I saw was on earlier on the novel the power rating was inconsistent when he was super strong then he was having pressure fighting something like that
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PLEASE AUTHOR DON'T DROP I GIFTED YOU POWER STONE SO PLEASE PLEASE DONT ILL CURSE YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY TO ROT IF YOU DROP OF COURSE IT IS AFTER YOU DID
AMAZING READ! Interesting Characters and development of them and the plot. Multiverse? could be or not, the potential is there. Overall juust amazing!
The story was really good until he started conquering Westeros the way he dealt with the Baratheon family was probably the first time I was like this is stupid. It just shows what kind of weakl and emotional person he is. no ruler or king would allowing the former royal family to live. people who have claimed your throne and you let them live is one of the dumbest things you can possibly do. Your character is leave a legitimate threat to his rule live. Not to mention it almost feels like you’ve awarded your enemy. What you should have done was cut off Roberts arms and legs kept him alive chained to your throne then you should have taxed every rebel kingdom half of their total income and require the death of one in every ten adults males. That execution needs to be carried out by the actual ruling family of each territory. What do even better do what his ancestors did and completely wipe out those houses and put loyal houses to rule those areas instead.
Could remove the prologue and would make this much better, i cant stand the fact that a 3 year old toddler is some genius politician, can kill multiple grown men with a dagger and is also some genius sorcerer.
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Please post more🙏. It's a great fanfic.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏.
Loving this so far. I like how you used Crusader Kings 2 traits for this stats. . . . . . . . . .
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is he reborn guy or just oc? does he know future or somehting..........................................................................................
Uma das melhores histórias que já li nesse site, sem dúvidas. Meus parabéns irmão, você merece.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it is hard to find mildly serious fictions like this where you dont hate the main character for being angsty. it is hard to find stories where the author can make the tensions between characters make up for the lack of physical risk to the mc. after all, it is unlikely for him to be hurt by most characters. however, the interactions and consequences make a good substitute. good job dude
Je change ma critique après avoir passer le passage Xianxia ou le mc devient une chienne de 3ème zone et je dois dire qu'il continu assez bien...donc je mais un petit 4.8 pour me faire pardonner d'avoir mis 3.5 avant
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Writing Quality - Is excelent for the quality of novels on this site. 5 stars Stability of Updates - Just finished reading it all, through the dates of the chapters there seems to be some kind of "order" but could be better. 4 stars Story Development - So, I will not spoil but the plot is not taking the canon side, and is going in completely other way. Add to the fact a Targaryen OC child and well so far I am satisfied. 5 stars Character Design - Is done wonderfully, MC and the characters around him feel real, especially mc who is an OC but actually feels like part of the world 5 stars World Background - Now as this is a fanfic I will not give the world a 5 star but author does a very good job of making the world feel alive. 4 stars
A great read from an author who has done his research on the GOT series. This is in my opinion the best GOT fan-fiction out there currently. You would be hard pressed to find something better than this. The only real negative this novel has is the stability of updates but the author has a justifiable reason for being unable to upload frequently.
This is one of best novel with the concept of necromancy, and the concept of adding necromancy in God of thrones is amazing, and right now all I want is bigger harem, so please keep upgrading his harem whether by OC or through the game of thrones characters.
Definitely one of the best GOT fanfics out there, Mc's OP, smart and level headed, the story's pretty good, the writing quality's great. Sooo yeah all in all great novel, would definitely recommend reading it.
The story has, or had, a lot of potential. But it bores me, I did not come for this, maybe it is not my cup of tea how things are taking at the moment, nor the decisions that the MC has made, and will make, for the convenience of the plot, as if it has no life of its own . Still, the quality of the writing and everything else is very refreshing ... but honestly, my feelings for keeping me reading have faded as I read the chapters. If you can handle this, congratulations, the story is not bad ... although I got carried away a lot by the TAGs and made expectations inside my head, expectations that were never met. Great work and peace
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Hello there SovereignofHeaven. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope you can continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard work to create this a great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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In this fanfic there are no faceless men and Valyrian steel swords, right? ________________________________________________________________________
Written at chapter 120. This story started off great but slowly lost its steam. Once MC achieved his goals of conquering the seven kingdoms, he didn't really do anything. Even though he knew The Others(White Walkers) were coming, he did no training or preparing the kingdom. Knowing they were stronger than him. Most of the magic trails were boring and offered nothing to him, just killing for the sake of killing. I would say only two gave something good for him, let alone test him. The Others' volume was too short and didn't really do anything. No one important died or hurt. Some of the first/important characters we meet get pushed back to the point that they don't really do anything or forgotten. The volume that Ser Jamie died in was fairly disappointing. It didn't really make sense or have a proper build to such major character for MC died in. The whole alternative future god of MC kind of ruined the story, like what was the point of our MC then. Should have done something like MC was reincarnated or something. Over started of great and became dull later on. WQ 4 SD 3 CD 2 US 2 WB 3
Spoiler enthüllen The story is engaging and makes you want to binge read until the latest chapter not one for villain/hero characters but the mc in the story entices you to read more
Unique story already liking this. ... ...... .. .. .... .. ... ..... .... ... .. . . . ....... . .... .. .. ... . . ... . .. ... ... . .. Continue
Nice take by the way the way you You toke the story In another perspective the only problem I saw was on earlier on the novel the power rating was inconsistent when he was super strong then he was having pressure fighting something like that
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PLEASE AUTHOR DON'T DROP I GIFTED YOU POWER STONE SO PLEASE PLEASE DONT ILL CURSE YOUR ENTIRE FAMILY TO ROT IF YOU DROP OF COURSE IT IS AFTER YOU DID
AMAZING READ! Interesting Characters and development of them and the plot. Multiverse? could be or not, the potential is there. Overall juust amazing!
The story was really good until he started conquering Westeros the way he dealt with the Baratheon family was probably the first time I was like this is stupid. It just shows what kind of weakl and emotional person he is. no ruler or king would allowing the former royal family to live. people who have claimed your throne and you let them live is one of the dumbest things you can possibly do. Your character is leave a legitimate threat to his rule live. Not to mention it almost feels like you’ve awarded your enemy. What you should have done was cut off Roberts arms and legs kept him alive chained to your throne then you should have taxed every rebel kingdom half of their total income and require the death of one in every ten adults males. That execution needs to be carried out by the actual ruling family of each territory. What do even better do what his ancestors did and completely wipe out those houses and put loyal houses to rule those areas instead.
Could remove the prologue and would make this much better, i cant stand the fact that a 3 year old toddler is some genius politician, can kill multiple grown men with a dagger and is also some genius sorcerer.
Spoiler enthüllen Please post more🙏. It's a great fanfic.🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏.
Loving this so far. I like how you used Crusader Kings 2 traits for this stats. . . . . . . . . .
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is he reborn guy or just oc? does he know future or somehting..........................................................................................
Uma das melhores histórias que já li nesse site, sem dúvidas. Meus parabéns irmão, você merece.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
it is hard to find mildly serious fictions like this where you dont hate the main character for being angsty. it is hard to find stories where the author can make the tensions between characters make up for the lack of physical risk to the mc. after all, it is unlikely for him to be hurt by most characters. however, the interactions and consequences make a good substitute. good job dude
Je change ma critique après avoir passer le passage Xianxia ou le mc devient une chienne de 3ème zone et je dois dire qu'il continu assez bien...donc je mais un petit 4.8 pour me faire pardonner d'avoir mis 3.5 avant
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Writing Quality - Is excelent for the quality of novels on this site. 5 stars Stability of Updates - Just finished reading it all, through the dates of the chapters there seems to be some kind of "order" but could be better. 4 stars Story Development - So, I will not spoil but the plot is not taking the canon side, and is going in completely other way. Add to the fact a Targaryen OC child and well so far I am satisfied. 5 stars Character Design - Is done wonderfully, MC and the characters around him feel real, especially mc who is an OC but actually feels like part of the world 5 stars World Background - Now as this is a fanfic I will not give the world a 5 star but author does a very good job of making the world feel alive. 4 stars
A great read from an author who has done his research on the GOT series. This is in my opinion the best GOT fan-fiction out there currently. You would be hard pressed to find something better than this. The only real negative this novel has is the stability of updates but the author has a justifiable reason for being unable to upload frequently.
This is one of best novel with the concept of necromancy, and the concept of adding necromancy in God of thrones is amazing, and right now all I want is bigger harem, so please keep upgrading his harem whether by OC or through the game of thrones characters.
Definitely one of the best GOT fanfics out there, Mc's OP, smart and level headed, the story's pretty good, the writing quality's great. Sooo yeah all in all great novel, would definitely recommend reading it.
The story has, or had, a lot of potential. But it bores me, I did not come for this, maybe it is not my cup of tea how things are taking at the moment, nor the decisions that the MC has made, and will make, for the convenience of the plot, as if it has no life of its own . Still, the quality of the writing and everything else is very refreshing ... but honestly, my feelings for keeping me reading have faded as I read the chapters. If you can handle this, congratulations, the story is not bad ... although I got carried away a lot by the TAGs and made expectations inside my head, expectations that were never met. Great work and peace
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Hello there SovereignofHeaven. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope you can continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard work to create this a great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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Muito bom, quero mais!......................................... . .................. .......,.............................................................................. ..
I hope the next chapter comes out real soon