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I had fun with this story, I wish it got continued but it looks like it has been dropped. Never the less if you want a quick and decent read this is a good one imo.
What fake garbage this is. This is literally a copy and paste of another guys Star Wars Fanfic called "Reincarnated In Star Wars The System". The only thing you changed is the 1st chapter and his race. Everything is copied word for word. In both fanfics MC reborn in forest, saves padme in ally, meets Panaka, joins Queen guard, is a firce user with a Blaster, same girl in his room as he changes. Everything is copied and this guy is pretending he wrote this. The fanfic this author copied from is from a fictional 1 year older than this one.
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Fantastic story love the progression with padme and that you divert from cannon early but i think its dropped or on a hiatus its been without uptate for 3 months now.
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Please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good other than the occasional misgendering here and there but other than that its good can't wait to read more. ----------------------
it's good draws me i. can't wait for more good stuff.................................................................................,...........
Only 27 chapters in and I can honestly say it's one of the better star wars fan fictions that i've read. Reaon I say one of and not the best is that I think you need more chapters to properly judge something. The way this plays out is definitely a cool take on Episode 1, especially like how the situation unfolds with Dooku and Sidious. Keep up the great work and don't drop this![img=coins]
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏🙏
Really good star wars fanfic with a lot of good twists of the cannon that makes you keep reading although the Grammar isn't perfect its still really good so if u get the chance to read it its definitely worth it
es el mejor fanfic de Star wars que he leído jaja , me encanta como es el mc , estoy ansioso por saber quiénen es la próxima del haren jaja , ojalá sea una jedi de carácter frío
Latest chapter killed this in my eyes... I can no longer pretend the constantly falling quality is just the author's subpar linguistic skills... MC basically just nonchalantly asked his "crush" to pay him back for his services with her body in the middle of his "confession." And then proceeded to force a kiss on her in the moment of shock that followed. But ofc, since the author sees nothing wrong with that, she gives a positive response. The first part could be the language barrier. The 2nd part is not as easy to excuse, and worse(since he doesn't just ask for something fcked up, which could have just been meant as a joke. He actually forcefully takes it. Entering the realm of what I'd consider a legit crime. A fairly minor one relatively speaking, but a real sexual harassment crime all the same. And I don't see how a language barrier would excuse it this time). To draw a comparison, how would you like it if a larger and stronger guy than you. One that you've known for some time, and at least tacitly trust - Suddenly says something that shocks you into a stupor, and then forces a kiss on you while you're out of it. It's likely not the same, due the general sexual orientation. But I had to include the part about them towering over you, both in terms of physical ability, and size. And have you consider that you don't know the other's thought on the subject yet, you just push past that.
wish fulfilment story with a bunch of plot armor. Author changed how some force abilities work for... I don't know, more plot armor??? Seriously there is just too many things wrong about the force in this ff, if you are true fan of sw you should stay away from this.
Honestly I love it. Theres nothing I have to complain about. Author-sama please continue making chapters.
Episode I is now complete and cannon is destroyed!!!!!! Probably the best Star-wars fan fiction out there, just read and enjoy!!!!! ............................................................................................................................xp
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I think it's a really Fun read ......................................... ....................................................................
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I'm certainly not a fan of star warriors, but I liked the fanfiction. At first it bothered me that he constantly relied on the system, but later the author seemed to fix it.
The story is well written, and quite entertaining, although the MC might seem a little clumsy in the beginning. But the Author has trouble putting the right articles, upholding a consistent sentence structure and narrative (it switches back and forth between first and third person, sometimes in the same sentence) so it can get a little irritating from time to time!
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cool story ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Just remembering, I'm a new writer, I've never written anything before, so there's no use asking for a super engaging original storyline with lots of plots, because unfortunately I don't have the capacity for it, I'm writing just for my fun while I hope you have fun too, with that said, I still intend to have a good story. I really hope you enjoy it!
I had fun with this story, I wish it got continued but it looks like it has been dropped. Never the less if you want a quick and decent read this is a good one imo.
What fake garbage this is. This is literally a copy and paste of another guys Star Wars Fanfic called "Reincarnated In Star Wars The System". The only thing you changed is the 1st chapter and his race. Everything is copied word for word. In both fanfics MC reborn in forest, saves padme in ally, meets Panaka, joins Queen guard, is a firce user with a Blaster, same girl in his room as he changes. Everything is copied and this guy is pretending he wrote this. The fanfic this author copied from is from a fictional 1 year older than this one.
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exp........... .............................................................................................................................
Fantastic story love the progression with padme and that you divert from cannon early but i think its dropped or on a hiatus its been without uptate for 3 months now.
Spoiler enthüllen Please come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very good other than the occasional misgendering here and there but other than that its good can't wait to read more. ----------------------
it's good draws me i. can't wait for more good stuff.................................................................................,...........
Only 27 chapters in and I can honestly say it's one of the better star wars fan fictions that i've read. Reaon I say one of and not the best is that I think you need more chapters to properly judge something. The way this plays out is definitely a cool take on Episode 1, especially like how the situation unfolds with Dooku and Sidious. Keep up the great work and don't drop this![img=coins]
AUTHOR MISSING ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏🙏
Really good star wars fanfic with a lot of good twists of the cannon that makes you keep reading although the Grammar isn't perfect its still really good so if u get the chance to read it its definitely worth it
es el mejor fanfic de Star wars que he leído jaja , me encanta como es el mc , estoy ansioso por saber quiénen es la próxima del haren jaja , ojalá sea una jedi de carácter frío
Latest chapter killed this in my eyes... I can no longer pretend the constantly falling quality is just the author's subpar linguistic skills... MC basically just nonchalantly asked his "crush" to pay him back for his services with her body in the middle of his "confession." And then proceeded to force a kiss on her in the moment of shock that followed. But ofc, since the author sees nothing wrong with that, she gives a positive response. The first part could be the language barrier. The 2nd part is not as easy to excuse, and worse(since he doesn't just ask for something fcked up, which could have just been meant as a joke. He actually forcefully takes it. Entering the realm of what I'd consider a legit crime. A fairly minor one relatively speaking, but a real sexual harassment crime all the same. And I don't see how a language barrier would excuse it this time). To draw a comparison, how would you like it if a larger and stronger guy than you. One that you've known for some time, and at least tacitly trust - Suddenly says something that shocks you into a stupor, and then forces a kiss on you while you're out of it. It's likely not the same, due the general sexual orientation. But I had to include the part about them towering over you, both in terms of physical ability, and size. And have you consider that you don't know the other's thought on the subject yet, you just push past that.
wish fulfilment story with a bunch of plot armor. Author changed how some force abilities work for... I don't know, more plot armor??? Seriously there is just too many things wrong about the force in this ff, if you are true fan of sw you should stay away from this.
Honestly I love it. Theres nothing I have to complain about. Author-sama please continue making chapters.
Episode I is now complete and cannon is destroyed!!!!!! Probably the best Star-wars fan fiction out there, just read and enjoy!!!!! ............................................................................................................................xp
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
I think it's a really Fun read ......................................... ....................................................................
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I'm certainly not a fan of star warriors, but I liked the fanfiction. At first it bothered me that he constantly relied on the system, but later the author seemed to fix it.
The story is well written, and quite entertaining, although the MC might seem a little clumsy in the beginning. But the Author has trouble putting the right articles, upholding a consistent sentence structure and narrative (it switches back and forth between first and third person, sometimes in the same sentence) so it can get a little irritating from time to time!
Hdgsgahasvhshshszggg👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
cool story ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Just remembering, I'm a new writer, I've never written anything before, so there's no use asking for a super engaging original storyline with lots of plots, because unfortunately I don't have the capacity for it, I'm writing just for my fun while I hope you have fun too, with that said, I still intend to have a good story. I really hope you enjoy it!