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5/5 for me author although I'm surprise what you did there in your latest chapter and I'm fairly excited on what kind of plot for this fan fiction will you be making so I'll be waiting for more updates!
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Trash Star Wars fanfic idk how it’s ranked so high you got a system that controls the MC if he does any bad deeds revokes his system you know what happens after that what I don’t get is why make a Mc look so heavenly handsome but hides his face 24/7 “it bring too much attention” might as well make him ugly plus the Mc a retard with SS intelligence but I forgot can’t be smarter then the author right ? Plus it’s just follows usual plot pretty similar to other fanfics author also nerfs Mc a system is suppose to correct your flaws automatically an improve but forcing him to find a master so dumb An you can’t forget Anakin get on ya knees suck him off Mc this story not for me I was hoping for a more anti hero dark side but I found 💩💩💩
I only read to the first 20 chapters, it was good and I had my fun. The grammar is good and legible while some deeper meaning do appear here and there. It updates within a good rate, and there are times where you are left for more and would like a higher frequency but the word count is also at a satisfying amount. Within the first 20 chapters there not much story yet, the MC usually just follows the original plot so he can experience the actual world of Star Wars. So the character development is still developing as well. Not much to see about the MC yet, but it starts to fall flat at some chapters. While in other chapters you feel attach to the MC for his character. Is still unstable up to this point. The main character usually has everything planned out and expected things to go his way. Which does until chapter 20 where he gets toyed with the best in the field of politics. That’s actually a good thing because it shows that the Mc can lose sometimes. It’s actually pretty fun, however chapter 20 became an issue for me for other reasons I won’t spoil. The story is good and it will help you have some fun, there’s also some frustrating decisions the MC takes but it is what it is. Give it a try, to some it might be bland, to others interesting for awhile. Some it might be new while others cliche but still enjoyable. I stopped reading at chapter 20 out of personal taste, but that’s just my opinion which I won’t include I’ll be as non-biased as possible.
Although the writing quality is average at best, considering author's language it's more than acceptable. Update stability is perfect but considering it's just the beginning of the novel we have to see in the future how author will keep going . Overall and all things considered it's a very fascinating fanfic specially since it's from SW. I say give it a try and by ignoring some grammatic mistakes, enjoy this novel
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Me gusta mucho la historia, aunque solo va en el arco 1, no se apresura como otros, y muestra habilidades y cosas no solo de las películas sino de todo el universo de Star Wars, lo que es un buen toque ya que es una franquicia muy grande y con potencial para un fanfiction. En especial me gusta mucho su habilidad Mechu-Deru, aunque no entiendo porque sería malvado ya que manipula máquinas, no seres vivos. Los personajes son retratados como se muestran en la película, Qui gon es amable y de mente más bodega que el jedi promedio, Obi wan es un mocoso arrogante, Padme es una niña valiente, decidida e ingenua. No creo que haya un mejor fanfic de Star Wars, y felicito al autor y espero que continúe con esta excelente historia.
Little iffy with the writing but definitely readable and can't blame the author at all since it not his main language and he is using a translator. Enjoyed all 18 chapters so far and can't wait for more!
Really good fanfiction hope you don't drop because I really want to see how the storie will go Good job! Lalalalalalalalalalalalalallalalala
As soon as I read the first two chapters, I got hooked to the book, the author adds a lot of detail to almost everything and makes the story progress at a nice pace. My amazement to this will continue to rise as I read more of it
i give the author 5 star even though there are still grammar mistakes, The character development is great so far and i like how the story is going.
I'm enjoying this fan-fic it is a new take and I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work op. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😅😅⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Liking it so far author keep it up...........................................................................................................
The story has left cannon, huge changes so far....He totally stole the Siths milk money!!!!! And I am sure Luke and his sister may not exist in this universe [Thumbs up!] ...................................................................................................................
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I am loving this so far just really needs more chapters please give more chapters I would kill for like next 100 chapters lol :) rest is for min words count hagsgsusissjsbsjsjshhsvsjsjeheshuujdjdjddhdjjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsisjejejsnssbhshsssjsjdjsjsbsbdhjdjeheheiejehe
Very entertaining read with MC being a very powerful force sensitive and creating his own abilities, however I don’t understand how well the story will progress if Palpatine isn’t there to cause the clone wars. Written after reading chapter 22.
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5/5 for me author although I'm surprise what you did there in your latest chapter and I'm fairly excited on what kind of plot for this fan fiction will you be making so I'll be waiting for more updates!
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Trash Star Wars fanfic idk how it’s ranked so high you got a system that controls the MC if he does any bad deeds revokes his system you know what happens after that what I don’t get is why make a Mc look so heavenly handsome but hides his face 24/7 “it bring too much attention” might as well make him ugly plus the Mc a retard with SS intelligence but I forgot can’t be smarter then the author right ? Plus it’s just follows usual plot pretty similar to other fanfics author also nerfs Mc a system is suppose to correct your flaws automatically an improve but forcing him to find a master so dumb An you can’t forget Anakin get on ya knees suck him off Mc this story not for me I was hoping for a more anti hero dark side but I found 💩💩💩
I only read to the first 20 chapters, it was good and I had my fun. The grammar is good and legible while some deeper meaning do appear here and there. It updates within a good rate, and there are times where you are left for more and would like a higher frequency but the word count is also at a satisfying amount. Within the first 20 chapters there not much story yet, the MC usually just follows the original plot so he can experience the actual world of Star Wars. So the character development is still developing as well. Not much to see about the MC yet, but it starts to fall flat at some chapters. While in other chapters you feel attach to the MC for his character. Is still unstable up to this point. The main character usually has everything planned out and expected things to go his way. Which does until chapter 20 where he gets toyed with the best in the field of politics. That’s actually a good thing because it shows that the Mc can lose sometimes. It’s actually pretty fun, however chapter 20 became an issue for me for other reasons I won’t spoil. The story is good and it will help you have some fun, there’s also some frustrating decisions the MC takes but it is what it is. Give it a try, to some it might be bland, to others interesting for awhile. Some it might be new while others cliche but still enjoyable. I stopped reading at chapter 20 out of personal taste, but that’s just my opinion which I won’t include I’ll be as non-biased as possible.
Although the writing quality is average at best, considering author's language it's more than acceptable. Update stability is perfect but considering it's just the beginning of the novel we have to see in the future how author will keep going . Overall and all things considered it's a very fascinating fanfic specially since it's from SW. I say give it a try and by ignoring some grammatic mistakes, enjoy this novel
Nice bro . Keep update . Make more interesting💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻
Me gusta mucho la historia, aunque solo va en el arco 1, no se apresura como otros, y muestra habilidades y cosas no solo de las películas sino de todo el universo de Star Wars, lo que es un buen toque ya que es una franquicia muy grande y con potencial para un fanfiction. En especial me gusta mucho su habilidad Mechu-Deru, aunque no entiendo porque sería malvado ya que manipula máquinas, no seres vivos. Los personajes son retratados como se muestran en la película, Qui gon es amable y de mente más bodega que el jedi promedio, Obi wan es un mocoso arrogante, Padme es una niña valiente, decidida e ingenua. No creo que haya un mejor fanfic de Star Wars, y felicito al autor y espero que continúe con esta excelente historia.
Little iffy with the writing but definitely readable and can't blame the author at all since it not his main language and he is using a translator. Enjoyed all 18 chapters so far and can't wait for more!
Really good fanfiction hope you don't drop because I really want to see how the storie will go Good job! Lalalalalalalalalalalalalallalalala
As soon as I read the first two chapters, I got hooked to the book, the author adds a lot of detail to almost everything and makes the story progress at a nice pace. My amazement to this will continue to rise as I read more of it
i give the author 5 star even though there are still grammar mistakes, The character development is great so far and i like how the story is going.
I'm enjoying this fan-fic it is a new take and I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work op. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐😅😅⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Liking it so far author keep it up...........................................................................................................
The story has left cannon, huge changes so far....He totally stole the Siths milk money!!!!! And I am sure Luke and his sister may not exist in this universe [Thumbs up!] ...................................................................................................................
Мне очень понравилась.😁😁😁!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Great character development great plot like the Mc....................................................................................................
I love good luck author please please please please don't quit really love the story good luck and much love to everyone😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Spoiler enthüllen I am loving this so far just really needs more chapters please give more chapters I would kill for like next 100 chapters lol :) rest is for min words count hagsgsusissjsbsjsjshhsvsjsjeheshuujdjdjddhdjjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjsisjejejsnssbhshsssjsjdjsjsbsbdhjdjeheheiejehe
Very entertaining read with MC being a very powerful force sensitive and creating his own abilities, however I don’t understand how well the story will progress if Palpatine isn’t there to cause the clone wars. Written after reading chapter 22.
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