Somewhat Normal or Not In Marvel

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Daiost_Chan

I did enjoy the binge read I did but I am gonna drop this story even after reading up to chapter C17. Why? Because like many self-inserts fanfics on this site the story is being rushed, the plot or in other words the OP-ness doesn't make sense. I am not just talking about his power that will be even more OP in the future, no I am talking about everyone (Important MCU figures) being unnaturally attracted to MC. Like Fury is already interested in him for the AVENGERS initiative... like why? All he has done is be a hacker(skill from other life) and kill some thugs at the time.(''secretly'') Then there is Jean Gray, Peter Parker, Fantastic 4, Xavier, Natasha, Magneto, Ancient One... all this in less than 20 chapters. The grammatical mistakes and the way its written although not the worst or anywhere close to it, doesn't help the story. But the worst issue is the rush aspect to the story, everything else can be ignore if not for that issue. This review is not meant as a story bash but to inform the readers and author. Sooner or later you gonna hit the ''rewrite or abandon'' wall. Thanks for the content.

LV 11

Foxy_Shooter

Don’t mean to be rude there is just a few small grammar mistakes that’s all I like the story overall I would like it if you keep on making more chapters as I like the way it’s headed

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Kurama_is_tsundere

Yeh tatti hai. Jab maan Kare tab author MC ko nerf kar deta hai. Mujhe yaad hai - the author wrote "the red petals can become hard like metal" that doesn't mean that they become metal themselves. But in the fight against magneto. Author wrote the petals become metal so magneto can control them. He nerfed the MC so bad, that was so illogical and forced. I can't read anymore. Thanks for the writing but I don't mind the subpar grammar and wrong spelling. But that was so cliche and forced Meh. The MC just based on his powers should have been able to take out magneto with a sneak attack easily by turning the red petals invisible. But no all the training he did was wasted, pathetically lost to someone the MC could have curb stomped easily.

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High_Ground

Good so far but please no harem XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli

the MC has a giant ego which makes him extremely boring and unpleasant, he has an IQ so low that it reaches the point where he wants to tell about being a freak reincarnated in chapter 6, romantic interest is exactly the same as another 100 marvel fanfic, jean gray and black cat, the only thing of this work is the powers of the MC, the author tries in every way to make the MC an important person for everyone but fails in all attempts which only makes each arc more boring, he puts many characters in a few chapters and mix everything, fantastic quartet, xman and avengers the author tried to put MC as important in the arcs of the 3 groups even though the MC has no quality

LV 13

MediocreSkater

Although the grammar could be better the book updates regularly and the chapters are super long which is a definite plus. The story takes an interesting take of the Marvel universe as it adds other series in as well. Also there is main plot point which is OC and although his powers at first may seem weird they are pretty cool as you read on. The author isn't afraid to change up the canon plot which keeps the story interesting. Romance is pretty good and leaves me with a smile so I'm satisfied there lol. Overall pretty enjoyable read up to this point. Definitely would recommend.

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thehater

trash

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kamakco

i love but why not 1/2 scène 18 not hard just for the romance thank for chap and good luck :)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Obsideon

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MfrnA

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RageKittenOP

I like this story One can never have perfect grammar...........👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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belier

This is honestly my favorite marvel fan fic at the moment it's completely different compared to the other ones definitely a good read. Plus he updates regularly.

LV 4

HerPingus

I loved the expensive story, something original to see, I was surprised when the synopsis decided to give it a try and I did not regret it, I hope you will continue with it. Forget the guys who talk too much, you are good, and another one is not charging you anything to read your book, so ignore it, go in your time. Well again I loved the book, even.

LV 5

Gridmark

Writing Quality: Ok Story Development: Too fast which makes the events weird and cringy Character: The power is interesting but the one weilding it is a retard. His first fight he forgot he has a blue petal(sheild) got shot in shoulder, his attack is just to throw the red petal(weapon) and forget about it *facepalm* Update Stability: Ok World Background: The usual Marvel fanfic world (MCU with X-men and Fantastic 4)

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Darith_Sky

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Henrique_Paiao

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Henrique_Paiao

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RadiantSight

I really like this story, i hope that you eventually find time to continue

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Daoist721221

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Darith_Sky

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