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Vyr's journey through the multiverse

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The story of a girl named Vyr's path through games, anime, and movies.
I don't really like to write but I though why not give it a shot I'm waiting for stuff to update anyway right? Right now the plan is at least 1.5K words per chapter preferably 3K. I don't know how long ill go for but hopefully it will be a good bit.

Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content.

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Esiyx
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First of all I think that the writing quality is very good, when I read the book I don’t have any trouble understanding what the author is trying to write and the grammar is good. I’m taking one star away for stability of updates because author doesn’t post much, but when they do it’s always good so not much of a problem. Otherwise, everything is pretty good! Characters, world, and story are all well written. I would prefer if the story was slightly slower, because I just like reading those books, but the pace is already very good. Overall a good book and would recommend reading Ps sorry for the long review, just kinda thought this would help maybe brighten authors day a bit, bc as another author I know the feeling of lack of motivation.

4yr
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Randomname69

Vyr is awesome this is a story done right she takes no **** from anyone and can cause the funniest situations like the Griffin meat stew and the wall and is just the most badass female mc I've seen.Hopefully she ends up causing mass hysteria at one point in a city side scale from her escapades definitely five stars

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4yr
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Shira_ori

I love it cant wait to continue reading i only just got to the second world and already love it and need more. The writing quality is really good as well as the story cant stop reading.

4yr
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Fallensnug

I really like what you have going here. The MC is great and isn't one of those whiny push-overs (god I hate those) and the rest of the characters interacting with the MC is quite magical. Only thing is that I feel it's a bit rushed between the Witcher and RWBY settings and it would be better if the MC is more discreet about her abilities. She should learn how to bullshit better as sometimes too much information can be unnecessary.

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3yr
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UsedCreation

Its good, i love it, give me more Thats it and thank you

4yr
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Sorria

Honestly, your history is good but you really don't know how to express feelings, the personality of the other characters is also... weird, witchers are a bunch of serious people and I believe you failed to show that. Your progression is not also good, believe me, I had problems with history progression too but you have to show, for example, how the people get close to the Mc and start to care for her.

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4yr
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Arious3721

if it would be updated more often with new chapters coming out then it would have a much higher score in my opinion

1yr
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soul445
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now that RWBY volume 9 is out are you going to resume the book or are you still going to continue to hiatus because I really like this book I think it's 👍 and the best part about it is that it's a Yuri RWBY which is very rare and some of the books that make them end up just flopping at the middle of it but hey man if you need to take your time do what you got to do man we'll still be here rooting for you do you best of my life be good with you

1yr
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II_Dandy_II

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3yr
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Immadropitall

Great Novel the only problem was in the early chaps were they don't even bother to ask about her strange eyes. Although some of them noticed but I have a case of strange OCD wherein I love details of the Main Characters so maybe its just me. So any reader who gets mad at me for this go **** yourself this is my opinion. Great Novel Author-san please continue more.

3yr
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DaoistwwYBDC

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3yr
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Binaryshark5

Really great book, nice characters, plot is well developed, it's not tacky with lots of laughs. Don't mind the wait in-between chapters when they are of this quality.

3yr
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MartinBrook

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4yr
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Mike_Bryan_1264

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4yr
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AvidReader962

A really fun and highly enjoyable story, I definitely like the main character and some of the mystery involved with her you find out and some of the later chapters. The main character as well rounded, and the characters around her are well written and well rounded as well. This is definitely a fun story to check out .

4yr
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dragon_among_men

super good keep up the good work. [][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][][] ()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()()

4yr
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Lionessa

Great bit of power fantasy with yuri.... so yeah I’m totally in and completely biased. Beyond that it seems the author is willing to have our MC work to attain power which I enjoy. Just some minor gripes on writing quality like wrond word usage and grammar errors but nothing too egregious. Thanks for this interesting story and hope you continue to write this to what ever end you have imagined.

4yr
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Filina
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So fun to read ................ ........ I hate the idea of 140 caractere

4yr
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TheCreatorOfRice

Seemsgood so imma read it becuz the first chap was good so imma ask now.... Is this Yuri or do I have their genders wrong..................

4yr
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BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

3yr
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Volumen 2 : the next step in the journey

  1. 10
    CH 10 New World and New beginings 4 years ago
  2. 11
    Ch 11 A new home and lightweights? 4 years ago
  3. 12
    CH 12 Training and Wolf? 4 years ago
  4. 13
    Ch 13 training results and concert? 4 years ago
  5. 14
    CH 14 the greatest mystery and new armor 4 years ago
  6. 15
    Ch 15 Emerald forset and New weapon(s)? 4 years ago
  7. 16
    Ch 16 quest and Forbbiden Drinks? 4 years ago
  8. 17
    CH 17 Bosses and Lootz 4 years ago
  9. 18
    Ch 18 Artorias and Ciaran 4 years ago
  10. 19
    Ch 19 Sif and a rest. 4 years ago
  11. 20
    Ch 20 Manus fight and Asha? 4 years ago
  12. 21
    Ch21 Apologies and Snow cones 4 years ago
  13. 22
    Ch 22 Relationships and new companion? 4 years ago
  14. 23
    Ch 23 lights and tattoos 4 years ago
  15. 24
    Ch 24 Found out and Mom? 4 years ago
  16. 25
    Ch 25 Return and Weeping Rose? 4 years ago
  17. 26
    CH 26 Dealing with Weiss and Kalameet 4 years ago
  18. 27
    CH 27 Bullies and Scars 4 years ago
  19. 28
    Ch 28 Jaune's character development 4 years ago
  20. 29
    CH 29 a short dream and a small slice of life 4 years ago
  21. 30
    Ch 30 Pranks and Portals 4 years ago
  22. 31
    CH 31 Return to the Keep 4 years ago
  23. 32
    CH 32 Introductions And reunions 4 years ago
  24. 33
    Ch 33 fears and cooking 4 years ago
  25. 34
    Ch 34 The Surprise. 3 years ago
  26. 35
    Ch 35 its raining People? 3 years ago
  27. 36
    Ch 36 Warrior princess? (updates in author note) 3 years ago
  28. 37
    CH 37 a long night and expectations 3 years ago
  29. 38
    Ch 38 Blood and Plans 3 years ago
  30. 39
    Ch 39 Road trip and Military Tactics 3 years ago
  31. 40
    Side Chapter 1 (its here! HYPE!) 3 years ago
  32. 41
    Ch 40 Dreak and his missing man 3 years ago
  33. 42
    Ch 41 Bea the Barmaid 3 years ago
  34. 43
    Ch42 Long time no see 3 years ago
  35. 44
    Ch 43 Did you do it? 3 years ago
  36. 45
    Ch 44 Talks and oaths 3 years ago
  37. 46
    Ch 45 Happy New Years! 3 years ago
  38. 47
    Ch 46 goals and ideas 2 years ago
  39. 48
    Ch 47 You're not supposed to have this. 2 years ago
  40. 49
    CH 48 A return in many ways 2 years ago
  41. 50
    CH 49 Vytal Preparations 2 years ago
  42. 51
    CH 50 Where's Blake? 2 years ago
  43. 52
    Ch 51 The hunt for Blake 1 years ago
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