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A good story with lot of potential. Keep the good work and update as soon as possible. I want to see the next chapters so much that every free time i check for new update
dont drop write more i really dont want this story to get droped at like 5 ch or someting.............................................................
MC is in star wars with a child yoda...yep......centuries before cannon,,,,,,,,,the MC hopefully isnt an idiot..make him smart..........keep him godlike.or atleast OP......like IDK....shinra tensei all the flying ships?.....save the universe...add some romance and fluff......just build it.......if harem keep it small.........goodluck...........maybe make MC create terminator robots or xenomorphs.....completely loyal to him?....
The story and MC are very good so far. I also like the fact that you started this before Star wars actually started on disc. Although the story is good the chapter update is not very good.
A good story with lot of potential. Keep the good work and update as soon as possible. I want to see the next chapters so much that every free time i check for new update
dont drop write more i really dont want this story to get droped at like 5 ch or someting.............................................................
MC is in star wars with a child yoda...yep......centuries before cannon,,,,,,,,,the MC hopefully isnt an idiot..make him smart..........keep him godlike.or atleast OP......like IDK....shinra tensei all the flying ships?.....save the universe...add some romance and fluff......just build it.......if harem keep it small.........goodluck...........maybe make MC create terminator robots or xenomorphs.....completely loyal to him?....
The story and MC are very good so far. I also like the fact that you started this before Star wars actually started on disc. Although the story is good the chapter update is not very good.