That would be a good answer
first contact war
Good start looking for the following chapter
A-Continue the story because it wasn't as bad as you depicte it and often when people start a novel anew they dont have the will to truly do it
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Movies · BoiGeorge
good start changing from what we usualy see so keep going on man
Nice chapter keep the armor for now it would be the best choice in my opinion
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Video Games · Fanfiction_Fanatic
Good story with interesting ideas keep the good work
Nice story with fun MC keep the good work
Nice start and a MC with potential keep the good work
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Anime & Comics · Fanfiction_Fanatic
Its your story so write what you like first because if the autor dont like his own story we wont be able to like it
Game of Thrones: Dragon King of The North
TV · Bigbaby