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Unusual world

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Autor: Loyalscum

4.66 (34 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

What is the truth? What is reality? Could the end actually be the beginning? In a world were ancient beings walk beside you, guard people against the uniqueness of the world and powerful creatures around them. While trying to obtain the truth of everything and reach the pinnacle of magic. They face new contenders that make there already harrowing world that much difficult and strange. Resulted from a battle of immense proportions against beings incomprehensible, as they clash the void shatters cracks are left all over souls from all across different worlds and dimensions are free once more. This is were our story beings this is the journey of a man who leads to the spread of uncertainty.

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Loyalscum

Hi guys author here just wanted to let you know that i am working on 2 books at the same time whitch is very stupid of me considering im an ******* writer but you know YOLO. I just really that his second on would be an intresting and uneque take on an over saturated plaid out idea were people put little effort into making it uneque. Ill update once every other day sunday and monday less likly to update. Plz leve comments and check out other book just started publishing 3 days ago. So not much but it the other book as a uneque direction i see no one else taking so be patient and keep visiting.

4yr
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Thisone

How this has got so many 4-5 stars is shocking. The main character is completely useless. After 100 chapters he is still the same sniveling idiot coward that he started out as.

4yr
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Gayu2594

I love the way its written. Author has a way of immersing you into the story... Language is good. There is no grammatical errors. But can actually capitalise the 'I' in there... it doesn't make a diff but its just pleasing to eyes I guess.. Anyways keep up the good work. You have the ability to make people imagine exactly what you want them to.

4yr
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Immovable087

i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^ i love it! more author please! ^_^

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4yr
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flyingshenanagens

Ok here is my review: this story is well writin, the characture( specifically) the main one-is very relatable. Very well fleshed out- as you feel like your trying to survive with him. I love that he comes up with all these ways to survive with the things and abilities and tricker pies he had available. Uploads are consistent but it's never enough for me because the story is so fun to read-but it's all good. All around super story telling -very ruthless world-love the different relationships the main character has made.

4yr
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holson_Charles

Read it to chapter 14 before I took a break will probably read it again when I have nothing else to read... writing quality up to chapter 14 is a 5/5 at the time I was reading it... story development didn’t see any of it yet (read to chapter 14) but got huge potential... it is a good read.. this is a story about a weak soul getting a weak old man body struggling while trying to learn and understand is environment..good story but not my cup of tea..

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4yr
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CherShootX

So here goes my review: I like how the way the prologue was made. The Author definitely had a good grasp on English, although there is some typo here and there but who was free from it? The premise of the story is interesting and unique. Although for me, I prefer a shorter paragraph. Yeah, definitely recommend this novel to be read.

4yr
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AshuraMikoto

ok im not best in explaining stuff but im a veteran reader here and i know a good book when i see one and this is a really good one and the character design is really good havent spotted any flaws yet updating stability good enough the world background is perfect no unnecesarry bs story developement is really good not perfect but really good and writing quality is one of the best you can find in webnovel cuz most of webnovel fics is just made by horny kids that force authors to destroy good concepts and this is really good stuff and probably eont be F.ed up

3yr
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The_One_Below_All

What an underrated book this is. I thhink that this is a great novel with lots of potential. The world is very unique and the story is exciting. I cannot wait for the next chapter to arrive.

3yr
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TwistedMage

I don't really even right reviews, but here goes. This is one of my favorite books in the whole site, which is saying something because I read alot of books. It has an amazing world building, Great characters, and it's very well written. There are some small gramatical errors, but the writing quality is still very easy to understand. The character develpment is slow but steady and doesn't seem forced. The only thing I could complain about is that the MC isn't overpowered enough. The fact that I like the overpowered MC but still read this book even though it doesn't have one just proves the books quality. I would rate this very highly and recommend that it should be read.

4yr
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Chrissy239

The writing it self isn't that bad but it constantly switches between first and third person, quotation marks are often missing and it is impossible to tell when someone is thinking something or saying it aloud or when sentences are a character's thoughts or the narrator's. There is a few grammar mistakes as well that make it very jarring to read.

4yr
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Wakiem
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This web is great for many reasons such at this time there is 26 chapters When you make a evil MC it is evil a reason and will stop anything to get and will be swayed by love, friends ect Two it magic system is great Three over all just give it a read Four the author replays when you say something

4yr
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Kheeta

A soul gets thrown into a different world, lost and confused it manages to find a perfect vessel for itself – a dead old man. On its way to a town the man manages to obtain some monster cores and decides to use his new found wealth to realize his long time dream – becoming an old crazy bum. But nothing good lasts for long, a week later after scavenging for food in the trash he decides to go for a walk and unexpected happens. Turns out the magical fantasy world he is in has magic in it, so the man has a sudden change of heart, he decides to pursue his new found dream – magic. Will this crazy dead old man become the greatest wizard sorcerer in the world? I can't wait to find out!

3yr
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Kenringdomstorys

Hey there! Here are some web novel recommendations for whom share the same taste with me. If you like this story, my recommendations are worth a try! https://docs.google.com/document/d/19R5KkqHOOHSMDkF4fHscVmxWcYGh0OntYsv8NglzsQo/edit?usp=sharing

3yr
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Hewwo_Jesus

By far this is amazing and it deserves as much love as the author gave this. The MC is completely tortured by the world and it seems as if everything is against him. You feel bad for him and everyone feels so real and besides how beautiful the world is it's completely crazy.

3yr
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Rasm545e

love this hidden gem love this hidden gem love this hidden gem love this hidden gem love this hidden gemlove this hidden gemlove this hidden gemlove this hidden gem

3yr
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cshupian333

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

3yr
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Ken_ringdomstory

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4yr
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LongWang

Hi there really like your story. It's well written it's well developed and really like the main character he's not like other novel's were mc is just stupid and gets his powers out of nowhere. Well that's my review keep up the good work.

4yr
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InHisName

This novel has tonnes of potential. First of all it's the entire grind. You, as the reader will not only be going through step-by-step of the MC's rise to power, but also about how his journey affect him as a person. Every incident changes a part of him, he doesn't stay the same. That's something I really like about this novel, the characterisation when it comes to the protagonist is on-point! Hmm, as for vibes I'd say it's close enough to Warlock of the Magus World. General world building is same too, but the author takes his own creative license on it, making it unique in several others. Maybe consider it as WMW with a dash of D&D and Warhammer. Best of all, the author has promised us a truly evil MC. I'm looking forward to following the author all the way until the MC is swallowing entire worlds for power!

4yr
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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    Prologue: Breaking The Void 4 years ago
  2. 2
    Something Unusual, Something New 4 years ago
  3. 3
    Your Misfortune My Salvation 4 years ago
  4. 4
    New Meat Suit 4 years ago
  5. 5
    A Fools Journey part 1 4 years ago
  6. 6
    A Fool's Journey part 2 4 years ago
  7. 7
    New discovery 4 years ago
  8. 8
    In The Buff 4 years ago
  9. 9
    Revered Magi 4 years ago
  10. 10
    New Home part 1 4 years ago
  11. 11
    New Home Part 2 4 years ago
  12. 12
    New Home Part 3 4 years ago
  13. 13
    New Home Part 4 4 years ago
  14. 14
    Wandering Souls 4 years ago
  15. 15
    A Path Forward Part 1 4 years ago
  16. 16
    The Path Forward Part 2 4 years ago
  17. 17
    Crystal ball 4 years ago
  18. 18
    Hunter's Bizarre Part 1 4 years ago
  19. 19
    Hunter's Bizarre Part 2 4 years ago
  20. 20
    Hunter's Buzzare part 3 4 years ago
  21. 21
    The underground 4 years ago
  22. 22
    Warm welcome part 1 4 years ago
  23. 23
    Warm Welcome Part 2 4 years ago
  24. 24
    Somethings wrong 4 years ago
  25. 25
    Magic 4 years ago
  26. 26
    Magic Part 2 4 years ago
  27. 27
    World of Theotera 4 years ago
  28. 28
    Idea 4 years ago
  29. 29
    The Boss part 1 4 years ago
  30. 30
    The Boss Part 2 4 years ago
  31. 31
    The Boss Part 3 4 years ago
  32. 32
    The Boss part 4 4 years ago
  33. 33
    The Boss part 5 4 years ago
  34. 34
    Wonderful Feast Part 1 4 years ago
  35. 35
    Wonderful Feast Part 2 4 years ago
  36. 36
    Wonderful Feast Part 3 4 years ago
  37. 37
    Wonderful Feast part 4 4 years ago
  38. 38
    Burn It To The Ground 4 years ago
  39. 39
    The Investigation Part 1 4 years ago
  40. 40
    The Investigation Part 2 4 years ago
  41. 41
    The Investigation Part 3 4 years ago
  42. 42
    Strange Turn of Events Part 1 4 years ago
  43. 43
    Strange Turn of Events Part 2 4 years ago
  44. 44
    Strange Turn of Events Part 3 4 years ago
  45. 45
    Strange Turn of Events Part 4 4 years ago
  46. 46
    Mirror's Image 4 years ago
  47. 47
    No More 4 years ago
  48. 48
    Magic Poisoning 4 years ago
  49. 49
    Beginning Magic 4 years ago
  50. 50
    Not Seeking Strength 4 years ago
  51. 51
    Promise 4 years ago
  52. 52
    Monkey's Palm 4 years ago
  53. 53
    One Step Further 4 years ago
  54. 54
    Training Camp 4 years ago
  55. 55
    No Choice 4 years ago
  56. 56
    Everyone Starts Somewhere 4 years ago
  57. 57
    Illusions 4 years ago
  58. 58
    Dodge Part 1 4 years ago
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    Dodge Part 2 4 years ago
  60. 60
    The crew 4 years ago
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    Library 4 years ago
  62. 62
    Refuge Part 1 4 years ago
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    Refuge Part 2 4 years ago
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    Refuge Part 3 4 years ago
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    Refuge Part 4 4 years ago
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    Refuge Part 5 4 years ago
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    Refuge Part 6 4 years ago
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    Refuge part 7 4 years ago
  69. 69
    Unwanted Resident 4 years ago
  70. 70
    The Walls 4 years ago
  71. 71
    Watcher 4 years ago
  72. 72
    Why Bother Trying 4 years ago
  73. 73
    Lucky You Part 1 4 years ago
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    Lucky You Part 2 4 years ago
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    Lucky You Part 3 4 years ago
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    Lucky You Part 4 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 1 4 years ago
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    Universal language Part 2 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 3 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 4 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 5 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 6 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 7 4 years ago
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    Universal Language Part 8 4 years ago
  85. 85
    You've got this 4 years ago
  86. 86
    Not Again 4 years ago
  87. 87
    New God 4 years ago
  88. 88
    The Sacrifice Part 1 4 years ago
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    The sacrifice Part 2 4 years ago
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    The sacrifice Part 3 4 years ago
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    The Sacrifice Part 4 4 years ago
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    The sacrifice Part 5 4 years ago
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    The Sacrifice Part 6 4 years ago
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    The sacrifice Part 7 4 years ago
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    Unthinkable 4 years ago
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    Reunion 4 years ago
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    New Gods or Old 4 years ago
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    Old wounds 4 years ago
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    Unexpected Turn 4 years ago
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    Unexpected Turn part 2 4 years ago
  101. 101
    Elven War Council 4 years ago
  102. 102
    Nester Vargas 4 years ago
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    Somethings Going On 4 years ago
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    Dead Men Tell No Lies 4 years ago
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    Not Forgotten 4 years ago
  106. 106
    Sweet Dreams 4 years ago
  107. 107
    Sudden change 4 years ago
  108. 108
    Advancement 4 years ago
  109. 109
    Strange Sound 4 years ago
  110. 110
    Peculiar Friend 4 years ago
  111. 111
    Bastard 4 years ago
  112. 112
    The Truth 4 years ago
  113. 113
    Student and Master (Long Chapter) 4 years ago
  114. 114
    Rank 10 Magus 4 years ago
  115. 115
    Unwilling Teacher, Unwanted Student 4 years ago
  116. 116
    Unwilling Teacher, Unwanted Student Part 2 4 years ago
  117. 117
    Enemies On All Sides 4 years ago
  118. 118
    Beyond The Stars (Long Chapter) 4 years ago
  119. 119
    Big Brain and Little Brain 4 years ago
  120. 120
    Big Brain Little Brain Part 2 4 years ago
  121. 121
    Big Brain Little Brain Part 3 4 years ago
  122. 122
    Big Brain Little Brain Part 4 4 years ago
  123. 123
    Big Brain Little Brain Part 5 4 years ago
  124. 124
    Big Brain Little Brain part 6 4 years ago
  125. 125
    Seeking Equality 4 years ago
  126. 126
    Target Acquired 4 years ago
  127. 127
    Eye For An Eye 4 years ago
  128. 128
    Shady Dealings Part 1 4 years ago
  129. 129
    Shady Dealings Part 2 4 years ago
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    Shady Dealings Part 3 4 years ago
  131. 131
    Shady Dealings Part 4 4 years ago
  132. 132
    Shady Dealings Part 5 4 years ago
  133. 133
    Shady Dealings Part 6 4 years ago
  134. 134
    Mastermind 4 years ago
  135. 135
    Teaching A Lesson 4 years ago
  136. 136
    It Has Begun 4 years ago
  137. 137
    Dawn Of War 4 years ago
  138. 138
    The Proposition 4 years ago
  139. 139
    The War Room 4 years ago
  140. 140
    The War Room Part 2 4 years ago
  141. 141
    The Principal 4 years ago
  142. 142
    Punishment 4 years ago
  143. 143
    Uniqueness 4 years ago
  144. 144
    Defending The Wall 4 years ago
  145. 145
    Prowess Of Rank 1 Cultivators Part 1 4 years ago
  146. 146
    Prowess Of Rank 1 Cultivator's part 2 4 years ago
  147. 147
    Prowess Of Rank 1 Cultivators Part 3 3 years ago
  148. 148
    Prowess Of Rank 1 Cultivators Part 4 3 years ago
  149. 149
    Brothers in Arms 3 years ago
  150. 150
    Almost Family 3 years ago
  151. 151
    Lurking Trouble 3 years ago
  152. 152
    I See You 3 years ago
  153. 153
    Reconnaissance 3 years ago
  154. 154
    Into The Dark 3 years ago

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