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Zusammenfassung
To have died in a car accident. Alpheus woke up in white plain, no nothing, all white. A page then appeared infront of him with a text that said...
"Welcome to Supreme Overlord System" giving him the choice to make a character like in the Video Game.
He was given the choice of picking his own face, his race, his skills and his specialty. While picking his skills and his specialty, he picked 'all of the above'!
It's not the fantasy world you'd expect it would be.
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I don't know the owner of the cover, if you know who you are, then happily say it to me. I can change it anytime!
Also, Thank you for the loving support you guys made! It is my first novel and you guys motivate me <3 so thank you very much!
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Schreiben Sie eine RezensionUmm This novel is very good I am not that good at judging story's but I really enjoyed it I recommend it Btw Author please publish more chapters DONT YOU DARE DROP IT
Onee chan = sister / onii chan = brother Only 5 chapters at the moment can't say to mutch yet. I will give a better rating in the future hope you don't drop it
I just read it. 1. This is a great novel and one of the best so far 2. Plz don't drop it author 3. If anyone knows where I can find more chapters please tell me
The story seems good and has a lot of potential.Its enjoyable but I HAVE to say this, the Grammar was a Disaster...... How do you make mistakes like is almost every line? Write the narration in past tense and the conversation in the present tense....Thats how you are supposed to go. I would love to complete this novel but please with better translation, otherwise it was truely a torture for me. Hope this gets a better translation [img=recommend]
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The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. every story plot in all the chapter is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
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A very good novel 10/10 Would recommend then again its only the beginning still so the author has a lot of chances to screw up. I don't think this story would fit well with a harem as its a modern world so don't do it.
Awesome story dude...keep writing such amazing stuff..🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌
It's pretty good I hope you can mass release some chapters though cuz I really like it good job author-San more please.......................
The story so far is pretty good and although theres only five chapters it looks like it could become popular but thats in the future.(just dont drop it plz)
Autor Rohan_Alfornon
more pls