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Decent fanfic. But I think Norton is too much of a fixer. At the beginning, it’s like she is a goody two shoes who just makes Harry Potter life easier
Overall the writing quality is excellent aside from several prevalent typos, the original character is extremely likable and it fits fairly well inside the existing potter world, though her reactions are at times lackluster and inconsistent - the real trouble lies in the plot. When interacting with existing key plot points, holes are sometimes drilled into the established personality of characters from the original plot, or at times, the Original Characters personality herself. These actions, taken to preserve the original plot are reasonable and expected, but as the original villain comes into play, our protagonist often forgets about her own existence only to become an accessory to the original potter plot. There are several points where the spirit of the main character is lost to let the original plot progress prior to the original villains appearance, and even after he appears surrounded by dozens of questionable coincidences, he acts as a pure counter-agent to our MC leaving every action she takes to barely matter at all. It was worth giving a shot to read, even through the issues. I personally look forward to the writer's next foray into new territory with a new work - the above issues aren't beyond hope for a new story, but I don't believe they can be recovered in this one.
I don't know what's the point of this story. You didn't change anything major. You just started adding characters. The canon remained the same. Sure there was commentary from Mc but she didn't do anything. Hell, the mc felt bland. The dialogues were forced. There was no development. All in all, a bland story.
The best ever fan fic written , please update faster !! Its been a awSome story amd please dont drop it !! The MC is great nd badass !! Cant stop loving the book
One of the best HP fanfics on Webnovel... the plot is amazing with new and exciting twists with great action and emotional scenes ☺️...with romance and story development is also very awesome 👍👍... recommended for all POTTERHEADS ⚡⚡
🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
an incredible fanatic the original characters are unique and interesting and the other characters are very well portrayed there are a few grammar mistakes but nothing too bad that is the only reason I'm not giving 5 stars very well written
God this was boring, I only managed to force myself to read until ch.23. I liked the beginning, had a great premise, but when she went to Hogwarts it became the "behind the scenes of Harry Potter". The whole story feels like she has been wedged into the trio and they can't get her out of their business. Everyone turns into what-what idiots around her which makes everything she says sound brilliant. Of course everything she says is correct and everyone follows whatever she suggests. I don't blame Ginny from staying away from her, how everyone just follows and believes whatever she says is just abnormal. How everyone trusts her is also abnormal, it's almost like they are hypnotized to attracted/listen/believe her. You have to remember that she is a first year muggleborn that knows very little about the magical world. At most, she has read a few books beyond the first year courses and yet Hermione who has read more than her decides to use a potion she has read nothing about just because MC says so? Another jarring thing about this story is the plot armor. Nothing she does changes the original books plot. It's like the writer just rewrote minimal parts of the original story to fit her in them. I just had the realization, SHE IS THE EXTRA CHARACTER THE HARRY POTTER SERIES DOESN'T NEED. You know, the ones that get deleted because they have no use in the story, like the Weasely cousin that never saw the light of day.
🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
this book is just a piece of work. though chapters come slow the wait is worth it. I think I speak for most readers when I say we love the world the author has made and the new characters they've added. so ya pick up this book and it won't disappoint.
I love the story at the start of it but grammer and wording have inconsistencies, so for the beginning it's around a 3.8 but when I'm finished or halfway I'll update my review
Me encanto, espero que haya un poco mas de Romance de cris y harry. Me encanta como va la historia, estoy muy interesada en cómo avanzará el trama. Espero con ansias los capítulos.
and now I await updates sigh. I'm all caught up .🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍🏻
Just read chapter 226, in my opinion, this is the best main Harry Potter fanfiction, and when I mean “main”, I mean it centers around Harry Potter world and isn’t an small portion of some muti-universe novel. I also think its fine to go along with the original story unlike some novels that make the lead as OP as possible in the beginning or half way through the story. On top of that, at LEAST you keep on updating and didn’t stop after ~40 ish chapters like some people have done on some very cool fanfiction thinking they didn’t that well and dropped it, make ME who enjoyed it, feel like killing them 100 times. So thanks for the fanfiction and hope you keep releasing as often as you can.
hehe twas a good book though i have not read yet HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSHAAHHAHSHAAHAHAHAHAHAHQHAHAHAHAHAHWHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAYAYAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA
Amazing !! I am a harry potter fan as well... This story does not disappoint ! I recommend this story for the Harry Potter Fans out there. Give this story a chance and enjoy yourself in reading. To the author-nim, Thank you for such wonderful story!
One of the best Harry Potter fanfics i have read, please don't drop..........................................................................
I'm putting this in my library and am probably going to read it but is it dropped? please reply As soon as possible ;-) (also suggest some Harry Potter novels)
Just finished binge reading every chapter and I must say that it's entertaining enough as the original book. I hope the author updates the fanfic soon as it's been 2 months without an update or even news. And the latest content is just right about where the OC tackles her own problems outside of deathly hallows events.
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I really do think that Jason and Chris are cute together. Although this gs are not going very well on both ends, Im really rooting for them. Please keep up with this good work. And UPDATE SOON please.
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This is a great fanfic! Character development is good and the way it also shows how the teenage mind seems to be influenced as they grow up depending on the environment is just outstanding. Yea it follows a lot of the canon and that seems to be a complaint of other people. But they seem to forget it isn’t their fanfic and that they can just go somewhere else.
The story is good,but the chapters he gives in the daily updates feel like 1 chapter and each actual chapter is a scene of a bigger chapter,but either it is good,but if you're looking for stories with real struggle better go with a different story as the story mains struggle is the mc(main character) choosing to wait till the last minute to do somethings he can do much earlier with less fanfare
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Fantastic story great main character arc it's a must read for harry Potter fans especially if you didn't appreciate how dumb the characters are in the original
Dang it I now all caught up. Now waiting on updates lol⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟☕☕☕☕☕☕☕
Review time: The quality of the story starts off rather poor. Grammatical errors and clunky dialogue make it grating to read. The sheer quantity of chapters and the update schedule is impressive. However, there is a weird mixture of content quality going on. One paragraph might flow beautifully and be constructed well, but then comes the dialogue which is like a hatchet to the face and butchers any sense of story immersion. Combine that with a hit and miss chapter quality and it's a labour of tough love. The quality does seem to improve as the story trundles along which is a blessing. But, for new readers, it might take a while for you to adjust the experience.
(I have just read to chapter 30 so this review is from what I have read.) The author is basically creating a character that's as smart as Hermione and a replacement of Harry Potter. They didn't try to make a different storyline, only sticking closely to the original plot. All in all, the story is bland and has a typical Harry Potter storyline. (I will update this review after reaching halfway)
Perfect. The execution was perfect! I am always sceptical when something is off in the beginning, But this. This right here is so organic so real so beatiful so good I fell for it, and its not even the 3Chap. like holy **** is this real. Really hope this continues like this I have a great hopes that this will be one of my fav Fanfics. Thanks Author!!! I love you!
Decent fanfic. But I think Norton is too much of a fixer. At the beginning, it’s like she is a goody two shoes who just makes Harry Potter life easier
Overall the writing quality is excellent aside from several prevalent typos, the original character is extremely likable and it fits fairly well inside the existing potter world, though her reactions are at times lackluster and inconsistent - the real trouble lies in the plot. When interacting with existing key plot points, holes are sometimes drilled into the established personality of characters from the original plot, or at times, the Original Characters personality herself. These actions, taken to preserve the original plot are reasonable and expected, but as the original villain comes into play, our protagonist often forgets about her own existence only to become an accessory to the original potter plot. There are several points where the spirit of the main character is lost to let the original plot progress prior to the original villains appearance, and even after he appears surrounded by dozens of questionable coincidences, he acts as a pure counter-agent to our MC leaving every action she takes to barely matter at all. It was worth giving a shot to read, even through the issues. I personally look forward to the writer's next foray into new territory with a new work - the above issues aren't beyond hope for a new story, but I don't believe they can be recovered in this one.
I don't know what's the point of this story. You didn't change anything major. You just started adding characters. The canon remained the same. Sure there was commentary from Mc but she didn't do anything. Hell, the mc felt bland. The dialogues were forced. There was no development. All in all, a bland story.
The best ever fan fic written , please update faster !! Its been a awSome story amd please dont drop it !! The MC is great nd badass !! Cant stop loving the book
One of the best HP fanfics on Webnovel... the plot is amazing with new and exciting twists with great action and emotional scenes ☺️...with romance and story development is also very awesome 👍👍... recommended for all POTTERHEADS ⚡⚡
🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
an incredible fanatic the original characters are unique and interesting and the other characters are very well portrayed there are a few grammar mistakes but nothing too bad that is the only reason I'm not giving 5 stars very well written
God this was boring, I only managed to force myself to read until ch.23. I liked the beginning, had a great premise, but when she went to Hogwarts it became the "behind the scenes of Harry Potter". The whole story feels like she has been wedged into the trio and they can't get her out of their business. Everyone turns into what-what idiots around her which makes everything she says sound brilliant. Of course everything she says is correct and everyone follows whatever she suggests. I don't blame Ginny from staying away from her, how everyone just follows and believes whatever she says is just abnormal. How everyone trusts her is also abnormal, it's almost like they are hypnotized to attracted/listen/believe her. You have to remember that she is a first year muggleborn that knows very little about the magical world. At most, she has read a few books beyond the first year courses and yet Hermione who has read more than her decides to use a potion she has read nothing about just because MC says so? Another jarring thing about this story is the plot armor. Nothing she does changes the original books plot. It's like the writer just rewrote minimal parts of the original story to fit her in them. I just had the realization, SHE IS THE EXTRA CHARACTER THE HARRY POTTER SERIES DOESN'T NEED. You know, the ones that get deleted because they have no use in the story, like the Weasely cousin that never saw the light of day.
🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
this book is just a piece of work. though chapters come slow the wait is worth it. I think I speak for most readers when I say we love the world the author has made and the new characters they've added. so ya pick up this book and it won't disappoint.
I love the story at the start of it but grammer and wording have inconsistencies, so for the beginning it's around a 3.8 but when I'm finished or halfway I'll update my review
Me encanto, espero que haya un poco mas de Romance de cris y harry. Me encanta como va la historia, estoy muy interesada en cómo avanzará el trama. Espero con ansias los capítulos.
and now I await updates sigh. I'm all caught up .🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍🏻
Just read chapter 226, in my opinion, this is the best main Harry Potter fanfiction, and when I mean “main”, I mean it centers around Harry Potter world and isn’t an small portion of some muti-universe novel. I also think its fine to go along with the original story unlike some novels that make the lead as OP as possible in the beginning or half way through the story. On top of that, at LEAST you keep on updating and didn’t stop after ~40 ish chapters like some people have done on some very cool fanfiction thinking they didn’t that well and dropped it, make ME who enjoyed it, feel like killing them 100 times. So thanks for the fanfiction and hope you keep releasing as often as you can.
hehe twas a good book though i have not read yet HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHSHAAHHAHSHAAHAHAHAHAHAHQHAHAHAHAHAHWHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAYAYAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA
Amazing !! I am a harry potter fan as well... This story does not disappoint ! I recommend this story for the Harry Potter Fans out there. Give this story a chance and enjoy yourself in reading. To the author-nim, Thank you for such wonderful story!
One of the best Harry Potter fanfics i have read, please don't drop..........................................................................
I'm putting this in my library and am probably going to read it but is it dropped? please reply As soon as possible ;-) (also suggest some Harry Potter novels)
Just finished binge reading every chapter and I must say that it's entertaining enough as the original book. I hope the author updates the fanfic soon as it's been 2 months without an update or even news. And the latest content is just right about where the OC tackles her own problems outside of deathly hallows events.
Spoiler enthüllen I really do think that Jason and Chris are cute together. Although this gs are not going very well on both ends, Im really rooting for them. Please keep up with this good work. And UPDATE SOON please.
Spoiler enthüllen This is a great fanfic! Character development is good and the way it also shows how the teenage mind seems to be influenced as they grow up depending on the environment is just outstanding. Yea it follows a lot of the canon and that seems to be a complaint of other people. But they seem to forget it isn’t their fanfic and that they can just go somewhere else.
The story is good,but the chapters he gives in the daily updates feel like 1 chapter and each actual chapter is a scene of a bigger chapter,but either it is good,but if you're looking for stories with real struggle better go with a different story as the story mains struggle is the mc(main character) choosing to wait till the last minute to do somethings he can do much earlier with less fanfare
Spoiler enthüllen Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male Hoped That MC was Male
Fantastic story great main character arc it's a must read for harry Potter fans especially if you didn't appreciate how dumb the characters are in the original
Dang it I now all caught up. Now waiting on updates lol⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟☕☕☕☕☕☕☕
Review time: The quality of the story starts off rather poor. Grammatical errors and clunky dialogue make it grating to read. The sheer quantity of chapters and the update schedule is impressive. However, there is a weird mixture of content quality going on. One paragraph might flow beautifully and be constructed well, but then comes the dialogue which is like a hatchet to the face and butchers any sense of story immersion. Combine that with a hit and miss chapter quality and it's a labour of tough love. The quality does seem to improve as the story trundles along which is a blessing. But, for new readers, it might take a while for you to adjust the experience.
(I have just read to chapter 30 so this review is from what I have read.) The author is basically creating a character that's as smart as Hermione and a replacement of Harry Potter. They didn't try to make a different storyline, only sticking closely to the original plot. All in all, the story is bland and has a typical Harry Potter storyline. (I will update this review after reaching halfway)
Perfect. The execution was perfect! I am always sceptical when something is off in the beginning, But this. This right here is so organic so real so beatiful so good I fell for it, and its not even the 3Chap. like holy **** is this real. Really hope this continues like this I have a great hopes that this will be one of my fav Fanfics. Thanks Author!!! I love you!