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The only thing I have a slight problem with is the hiccups in the grammar, but it's tolerable compared to others. And on any other note this is amazing, I haven't enjoyed a story this much in a while.
I love everything about this book and I am reading this for the second time because I can’t get enough 😁. I would recommend it to other readers to read this book.
The book follows a muggleborn witch who is the chosen protector of hogwarts that the founders had chosen. Malgino, her arch enemy, is trying to steal the founders’s keys which Chris is in possession of. Her magic is sometimes to much and she rages and kills. During the triwizard tournament she saves Cedric and Harry. She has an amazing impact on the story. And the book goes all the way up to her 6th year and Harry’s 7th year. It’s good the author skipped the first year and made Chris in ginny’s year cause the sorcerers stone is overdone. Anyway give the book a try it’s hecka awesome 🥳
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I really like your story. I wish there were more of that apply logic in Harry Potter. I mean I love the series but there are a lot of red flags when you analyze it deeply. Your story keeps me entertained in my bored life
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Hope Harry and Chris are gonna be together otherwise I wasted my time😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔💔 I mean even if you'll add some new characters, their love story (Chris and Harry) moved to this from the beginning, and now Chris gonna choose some newcomer after all. Really??? This is unfair, even the storyline with Jason did not look very worked out. Artificially. Only Harry could fell in love with Chris, because they have had a lot together. It’s like beckoning the entire book with a delicious candy, and in the end, replace the candy with a pooр. Sorry if it was too rude. And also sorry for my mistakes. (I use google translate to read this fanfic, I know only russian)
I love this. Please please make more. This was so good I started crying. It was so good.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💗💗💗💗💗💗
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I really love this story. I feel it keeps true to the original while at the same time being original to the author’s ideas. Keep it up!! 😁😁
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The grammar, structure, pacing, character development, and originality are all on about a middle school level. Its a commendable first shot at writing and the sheer number of releases is something to be proud of. But it’s just not to the writing proficiency level which I enjoy reading.
The main character here is a girl. She's smart and logical and knows when to act when needed. She isn't very fond of Ron's childish insults and his constant belief in rumors about harry. As much as I see she doesn't have a ship, she's merely close friends with the characters (for now I guess). The story isn't all that bad, and the character here isn't very over reactive to everyone's bs.
This is by far one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics you’re going to find. It’s not something entirely different and does follow the main story plot, however, the author does a very good job at making the story their own with original characters thrown into the mix which change the plot. The author clearly understands and knows the world of Harry Potter well and it is an amazing story if you enjoyed the Books. Now the bad- I binge read the entire story up to chapter 295 or so and I have to say, up until chapter 250 I couldn’t take my eyes off the book. It made you feel as if you were reading a real Harry Potter book with its own plot. Sadly around 250 the romance made me lose some of my motivation to continue reading. Without spoiling to much, basically the romance was perfect, it had its ups and downs and even if they didn’t end up together in the end, it was still perfectly executed. Until around chapter 250 when the author decided to change the love interest of the main character and the entire story crashed for me. The first love interest was perfect and the author had an amazing romance subplot going for them which they could have taken in so many ways. But they decided to have the MC fall for someone who doesn’t fit them at all. They said “The MC having feelings for him just felt obvious for me.” But for me and a lot of other people it did not feel correct at all. It felt forced and their personality didn’t feel like they meshed together at all. Yes they have stuff in common but that’s not enough, she shouldn’t have fallen for him like how she did. That’s my only gripe with this book. It was perfect and yes the author can do what they want, but if the MC does end up with who she currently likes then I honestly don’t know if I can handle reading more which makes me beyond sad because I love the book so much. Anyways that’s just my personal Review and Opinion, if you disagree then that’s not a bad thing. Don’t hate.
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A good fanfiction. Character development is very good. Also story is Carrying out very well with the original Harry Potter world. A bit confusions in mc emotional troma. Overall liked it worth reading.
I see the girl I want to see in Chris. The heavy but good aura girl. Beautiful towards friends but evil towards the dislikeables! Of course she is a muggle born, so I thought that it would a plain story who would accompany Harry all over the journey but turns out she is after malingo! Like a total new plot and some always aching your mind to read. Like I actually completed the 200chp within 2 day! One should read it. Will enjoy! And author is the best😍
Spoiler enthüllen I gotta say I love where this story is heading it’s very unique and I’m proud to say I binged read all 300 chapters😂(me keeping myself company throughout the virus outbreak). Although there are grammar errors it doesn’t bother me as much as reading comments repeatedly pointing it out. Looking forward to future chapters.
I am pretty sure that Rita Seeker is that cockroach. If I remember correctly from the movie.................................................
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Buenísima la historia, con muchisimas ganas de ver cómo sigue la historia. Y bueno no hay mucho que decir estoy escribiéndo para llenar los caracteres and I from Argentinian, If you did not understand anything by being written in Spanish, I am sorry.
its good nove i recomend this fanfic to those who like harry potter, its a bit slow but it is well writen , ITS FUCKING amazing read it :))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MY STORY HERE IS REAL AND GENUINE. My name is Adams Vienna and i am here to testify about Great Mother who brought back my man to me when he broke up with me because of another woman who he met at his place of work. Great Mother is a very powerful, real and unique woman with special powers. I tried to get help from many places and sources to bring back my man but nothing worked but when i contacted Great Mother, she made me smile again by bringing my man back to me with her special powers.. If you are experiencing any problems in your marriage, relationship, and you have any similar problem to this, contact this Great Woman now she will help you. Here is her website: Ourgreatmother1.com and here is her email address: Greatmotherofsolutiontemple1@yahoo.com and you can also contact her now on her own Whatsapp number: +17025514367 You can either contact her on her website, email or her whatsapp number. Thank you Great Mother.
This is a great fanfiction and there is some story lines from the original and they are supposed to be there. Loads of changes due to the main character and figuring out how all would react with original villains and adding in old characters that were only mentioned with speaking parts is difficult to do if you do not know the novels at all. As a Harry Potter fan, I approve of this fanfic. It is going to turn into an original "legends" (star wars) type of novel in the future. I can't wait to see what will happen AFTER Hogwarts.
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Great re-mix and fan-fic for Harry Potter, I love the character you added into the story, especially Chris and her love interest. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to seeing your the original you plan on writing. - From one fellow writer to another.
I gonna say the same thing i told in an another fanfiction Trollers(as in haters, complaint writers and the ones who haven't written a novel ) please write your own fanfiction would ya. With out copying any of the original material it's called a novel bakas not a fanfiction . The ones who have complaints write your own fanfiction and read the comments given by the trollers let's see how long u can work with a breakdown or run out of juice to write On to (all the) author san's Write!!!!!! if you stop a lot of people with no skill (me mostly )to write would be sad and won't be able to imagine how they would do in the fanfiction they are reading The world background it's hp which has a lot of plot holes which is found by ur dear fanfiction writers Peace out
Really addicting and super captive book to read. I’m pulled in and I’ll read for hours at a time without realising how much time has passed. A great twist on the wizardry story we all love.
Bland, boring and unoriginal. If you want to reread the books but from the perspective of a background/extra student who doesnt manage to alter the original plot whatsoever then you will love reading this.
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The only thing I have a slight problem with is the hiccups in the grammar, but it's tolerable compared to others. And on any other note this is amazing, I haven't enjoyed a story this much in a while.
I love everything about this book and I am reading this for the second time because I can’t get enough 😁. I would recommend it to other readers to read this book.
The book follows a muggleborn witch who is the chosen protector of hogwarts that the founders had chosen. Malgino, her arch enemy, is trying to steal the founders’s keys which Chris is in possession of. Her magic is sometimes to much and she rages and kills. During the triwizard tournament she saves Cedric and Harry. She has an amazing impact on the story. And the book goes all the way up to her 6th year and Harry’s 7th year. It’s good the author skipped the first year and made Chris in ginny’s year cause the sorcerers stone is overdone. Anyway give the book a try it’s hecka awesome 🥳
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I really like your story. I wish there were more of that apply logic in Harry Potter. I mean I love the series but there are a lot of red flags when you analyze it deeply. Your story keeps me entertained in my bored life
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Hope Harry and Chris are gonna be together otherwise I wasted my time😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔💔 I mean even if you'll add some new characters, their love story (Chris and Harry) moved to this from the beginning, and now Chris gonna choose some newcomer after all. Really??? This is unfair, even the storyline with Jason did not look very worked out. Artificially. Only Harry could fell in love with Chris, because they have had a lot together. It’s like beckoning the entire book with a delicious candy, and in the end, replace the candy with a pooр. Sorry if it was too rude. And also sorry for my mistakes. (I use google translate to read this fanfic, I know only russian)
I love this. Please please make more. This was so good I started crying. It was so good.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💗💗💗💗💗💗
Spoiler enthüllen I really love this story. I feel it keeps true to the original while at the same time being original to the author’s ideas. Keep it up!! 😁😁
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The grammar, structure, pacing, character development, and originality are all on about a middle school level. Its a commendable first shot at writing and the sheer number of releases is something to be proud of. But it’s just not to the writing proficiency level which I enjoy reading.
The main character here is a girl. She's smart and logical and knows when to act when needed. She isn't very fond of Ron's childish insults and his constant belief in rumors about harry. As much as I see she doesn't have a ship, she's merely close friends with the characters (for now I guess). The story isn't all that bad, and the character here isn't very over reactive to everyone's bs.
This is by far one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics you’re going to find. It’s not something entirely different and does follow the main story plot, however, the author does a very good job at making the story their own with original characters thrown into the mix which change the plot. The author clearly understands and knows the world of Harry Potter well and it is an amazing story if you enjoyed the Books. Now the bad- I binge read the entire story up to chapter 295 or so and I have to say, up until chapter 250 I couldn’t take my eyes off the book. It made you feel as if you were reading a real Harry Potter book with its own plot. Sadly around 250 the romance made me lose some of my motivation to continue reading. Without spoiling to much, basically the romance was perfect, it had its ups and downs and even if they didn’t end up together in the end, it was still perfectly executed. Until around chapter 250 when the author decided to change the love interest of the main character and the entire story crashed for me. The first love interest was perfect and the author had an amazing romance subplot going for them which they could have taken in so many ways. But they decided to have the MC fall for someone who doesn’t fit them at all. They said “The MC having feelings for him just felt obvious for me.” But for me and a lot of other people it did not feel correct at all. It felt forced and their personality didn’t feel like they meshed together at all. Yes they have stuff in common but that’s not enough, she shouldn’t have fallen for him like how she did. That’s my only gripe with this book. It was perfect and yes the author can do what they want, but if the MC does end up with who she currently likes then I honestly don’t know if I can handle reading more which makes me beyond sad because I love the book so much. Anyways that’s just my personal Review and Opinion, if you disagree then that’s not a bad thing. Don’t hate.
Spoiler enthüllen A good fanfiction. Character development is very good. Also story is Carrying out very well with the original Harry Potter world. A bit confusions in mc emotional troma. Overall liked it worth reading.
I see the girl I want to see in Chris. The heavy but good aura girl. Beautiful towards friends but evil towards the dislikeables! Of course she is a muggle born, so I thought that it would a plain story who would accompany Harry all over the journey but turns out she is after malingo! Like a total new plot and some always aching your mind to read. Like I actually completed the 200chp within 2 day! One should read it. Will enjoy! And author is the best😍
Spoiler enthüllen I gotta say I love where this story is heading it’s very unique and I’m proud to say I binged read all 300 chapters😂(me keeping myself company throughout the virus outbreak). Although there are grammar errors it doesn’t bother me as much as reading comments repeatedly pointing it out. Looking forward to future chapters.
I am pretty sure that Rita Seeker is that cockroach. If I remember correctly from the movie.................................................
Spoiler enthüllen ******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Buenísima la historia, con muchisimas ganas de ver cómo sigue la historia. Y bueno no hay mucho que decir estoy escribiéndo para llenar los caracteres and I from Argentinian, If you did not understand anything by being written in Spanish, I am sorry.
its good nove i recomend this fanfic to those who like harry potter, its a bit slow but it is well writen , ITS FUCKING amazing read it :))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MY STORY HERE IS REAL AND GENUINE. My name is Adams Vienna and i am here to testify about Great Mother who brought back my man to me when he broke up with me because of another woman who he met at his place of work. Great Mother is a very powerful, real and unique woman with special powers. I tried to get help from many places and sources to bring back my man but nothing worked but when i contacted Great Mother, she made me smile again by bringing my man back to me with her special powers.. If you are experiencing any problems in your marriage, relationship, and you have any similar problem to this, contact this Great Woman now she will help you. Here is her website: Ourgreatmother1.com and here is her email address: Greatmotherofsolutiontemple1@yahoo.com and you can also contact her now on her own Whatsapp number: +17025514367 You can either contact her on her website, email or her whatsapp number. Thank you Great Mother.
This is a great fanfiction and there is some story lines from the original and they are supposed to be there. Loads of changes due to the main character and figuring out how all would react with original villains and adding in old characters that were only mentioned with speaking parts is difficult to do if you do not know the novels at all. As a Harry Potter fan, I approve of this fanfic. It is going to turn into an original "legends" (star wars) type of novel in the future. I can't wait to see what will happen AFTER Hogwarts.
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Great re-mix and fan-fic for Harry Potter, I love the character you added into the story, especially Chris and her love interest. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to seeing your the original you plan on writing. - From one fellow writer to another.
I gonna say the same thing i told in an another fanfiction Trollers(as in haters, complaint writers and the ones who haven't written a novel ) please write your own fanfiction would ya. With out copying any of the original material it's called a novel bakas not a fanfiction . The ones who have complaints write your own fanfiction and read the comments given by the trollers let's see how long u can work with a breakdown or run out of juice to write On to (all the) author san's Write!!!!!! if you stop a lot of people with no skill (me mostly )to write would be sad and won't be able to imagine how they would do in the fanfiction they are reading The world background it's hp which has a lot of plot holes which is found by ur dear fanfiction writers Peace out
Really addicting and super captive book to read. I’m pulled in and I’ll read for hours at a time without realising how much time has passed. A great twist on the wizardry story we all love.
Bland, boring and unoriginal. If you want to reread the books but from the perspective of a background/extra student who doesnt manage to alter the original plot whatsoever then you will love reading this.