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Lo único que no me gustó es el tiempo entre capítulos pero por lo demás esta todo bien, el mc esta progresando y te deja con la intriga de que pasara después espero que las otras reseñas no te hayan ofendido
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thanks for the chapters.... I guess even know odin didn't expect nessaj and terroblade would come huh[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving four stars for my shameless collection of exp ...........................................................................................................................................
You deserve 5 starts because of the tag no harem😌✌🏼Also this story is really good in my opinion soooo go read it please and thank you ...
This is just awful! The grammar is bad,the MC is a one year old who does push ups and exercises,gets in a shower by him self,and is left by himself,at one year old! The story is very boring and unrealistic even for a fan fic.
Due to shameless author giving 5 stars and that it needs an editor or something... .....................................................................................................................................................
... what can I say about this novel... 1. Grammar is ok but confusing as hell ( chapter 1 MC talks about how he liked to suck in high school) 2. Plot... This is a metaphysical rabbit burrow full of holes. 3. Character starts out a a 1 year old talking baby that has a daily workout routine of pushups, setups, and a 1km jog. I don’t normally write reviews but this novel made my brain bleed.
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖
Editing what's that? Character development who needs it ... actual logical depth to the story?... pfhhh... This novel has none of those after all why would a author ever try to make the novel readable after all novels arnt ment to be read they are ment to be a simple ego booster to yourself after all that's what this novel is clearly about
It's it's way too unrealistic making a 1 year old do basically anything he stopped a robbery for christ sakes and no one asks any questions as well as letting him see a dead corpse and that just what i read with all the grammar mistakes and me skipping throught it do to it not having any time skips and him being 1 yrs old and doing things a grown man would do with no questions asked
Well let's say you had a good idea..... Just that. What the **** is wrong with you 1 year old and talk like an ***** and no one finds it weird? Not even his mother ?
What the he'll kind of dialogue me is this story written in? Me: blah blah blah blah Them: blah blah blah blah blah blah Author: blah blah blah blah blah This is an id.iots writing style.
For readers - only recommended to reader who want to know the story or concept of it - read only u are open minded person - stay away if u are a perfectionist - don't read this if u are new to light novel For author - good idea n concept - improve language (can use apps to check grammar) - fix the common sense, what is normal and what is not (atleast explain why it is normal from the start) - what's more important is, ENJOY YOUR HOBBY AND WRITE AT YOUR WILL. - don't afraid to do mistake, keep write and improve Your sincerely, Wang Zi Han
The story is **** good theme but writer ruined it a child doing all that seriously moreover the plot is all worst and total waste of time ...
Fix your character then we can talk about the review. You should consider the age your MC, i don't know if you're trying to make him a genius to his parent but there's one thing for sure. ""It''s fùçkïng weird.""
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If there was a zero or minus, star rating Without a question I would have given it ... Wat the **** is the concept of a child knowing everything about MCU is so naive and writer make everything bland with no taste of writing...every interactions are so boring, messed up. Given u don't English that much but what **** is conversation so messed up...every plot easy
The author ****ed up the story after chapter 31 ... the mc defends himself and some other people and gets suspended from school for no reason, then he also gets punished by his mother for defending himself ... completely retarded ... i had high hopes for this ... and the author just had to go full retard...
such a nice concept but the story is all over the place, first problem is Grammar and it is a really really big problem, most of the time it's just some minor issues like 'he' or 'she' or something but in this story it's just god awful. There's also the plot which is just jumping from 1 place to the next constantly, no real pacing. Then the biggest and most cringy mistake a author ever makes, Toddler hero where nobody really questions a toddler talking like an ***** and making ***** decisions.
As a fellow writer, I understand that we have a long way to go if English is not our primary language. However, since I understand this point, this also means that there's plenty of room for improvement. Hey, my grammar is not perfect as well so I'll be frank and try to motivate you to do better as well. So writing quality is 3/5 Stability of Updates Readers like to read novels that have a stable release date. Make sure to work on that as well. 3/5 Story Development: To be honest, this is the first time I've seen a one-year-old do all those things and more. So I'll give you props for your imagination and award you with 4/5 Character Design: It's a bit wild and unorthodox, but it works so why not? 5/5 here for you. World Background The world building is nice and the first few chapters are hinting that something big is about to happen. Will look forward to everything once you are able to give stable releases 4/5 for this one. Overall Score 3;8 This novel is promising. If you can manage to get an editor it would slowly turn into something awesome. So I hope, that you will be able to get an editor for your work. No, make that, I hope that the two of us can find a good editor for our stories. Kudos and more power to you ;)
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Well this is a honest review ... Sure its not the best story in the world, but it is still entertaining to read ... Stability of updates and writing quality could use some work. But we readers dont know the authors living conditions so we cant say that his lazy and stuff like that. Nor can we say that he have to improve the writing quality, since no one is perfect from the start. Anyway those are the 2 mayor things that pull down the novel ...
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I liked it a good story and a good progress with the mc's abilities there is nothing wrong with it I don't know why the others are arguing and continue with the good work
Lo único que no me gustó es el tiempo entre capítulos pero por lo demás esta todo bien, el mc esta progresando y te deja con la intriga de que pasara después espero que las otras reseñas no te hayan ofendido
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thanks for the chapters.... I guess even know odin didn't expect nessaj and terroblade would come huh[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving four stars for my shameless collection of exp ...........................................................................................................................................
You deserve 5 starts because of the tag no harem😌✌🏼Also this story is really good in my opinion soooo go read it please and thank you ...
This is just awful! The grammar is bad,the MC is a one year old who does push ups and exercises,gets in a shower by him self,and is left by himself,at one year old! The story is very boring and unrealistic even for a fan fic.
Due to shameless author giving 5 stars and that it needs an editor or something... .....................................................................................................................................................
... what can I say about this novel... 1. Grammar is ok but confusing as hell ( chapter 1 MC talks about how he liked to suck in high school) 2. Plot... This is a metaphysical rabbit burrow full of holes. 3. Character starts out a a 1 year old talking baby that has a daily workout routine of pushups, setups, and a 1km jog. I don’t normally write reviews but this novel made my brain bleed.
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖
Editing what's that? Character development who needs it ... actual logical depth to the story?... pfhhh... This novel has none of those after all why would a author ever try to make the novel readable after all novels arnt ment to be read they are ment to be a simple ego booster to yourself after all that's what this novel is clearly about
It's it's way too unrealistic making a 1 year old do basically anything he stopped a robbery for christ sakes and no one asks any questions as well as letting him see a dead corpse and that just what i read with all the grammar mistakes and me skipping throught it do to it not having any time skips and him being 1 yrs old and doing things a grown man would do with no questions asked
Well let's say you had a good idea..... Just that. What the **** is wrong with you 1 year old and talk like an ***** and no one finds it weird? Not even his mother ?
What the he'll kind of dialogue me is this story written in? Me: blah blah blah blah Them: blah blah blah blah blah blah Author: blah blah blah blah blah This is an id.iots writing style.
For readers - only recommended to reader who want to know the story or concept of it - read only u are open minded person - stay away if u are a perfectionist - don't read this if u are new to light novel For author - good idea n concept - improve language (can use apps to check grammar) - fix the common sense, what is normal and what is not (atleast explain why it is normal from the start) - what's more important is, ENJOY YOUR HOBBY AND WRITE AT YOUR WILL. - don't afraid to do mistake, keep write and improve Your sincerely, Wang Zi Han
The story is **** good theme but writer ruined it a child doing all that seriously moreover the plot is all worst and total waste of time ...
Fix your character then we can talk about the review. You should consider the age your MC, i don't know if you're trying to make him a genius to his parent but there's one thing for sure. ""It''s fùçkïng weird.""
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Spoiler enthüllen If there was a zero or minus, star rating Without a question I would have given it ... Wat the **** is the concept of a child knowing everything about MCU is so naive and writer make everything bland with no taste of writing...every interactions are so boring, messed up. Given u don't English that much but what **** is conversation so messed up...every plot easy
The author ****ed up the story after chapter 31 ... the mc defends himself and some other people and gets suspended from school for no reason, then he also gets punished by his mother for defending himself ... completely retarded ... i had high hopes for this ... and the author just had to go full retard...
such a nice concept but the story is all over the place, first problem is Grammar and it is a really really big problem, most of the time it's just some minor issues like 'he' or 'she' or something but in this story it's just god awful. There's also the plot which is just jumping from 1 place to the next constantly, no real pacing. Then the biggest and most cringy mistake a author ever makes, Toddler hero where nobody really questions a toddler talking like an ***** and making ***** decisions.
As a fellow writer, I understand that we have a long way to go if English is not our primary language. However, since I understand this point, this also means that there's plenty of room for improvement. Hey, my grammar is not perfect as well so I'll be frank and try to motivate you to do better as well. So writing quality is 3/5 Stability of Updates Readers like to read novels that have a stable release date. Make sure to work on that as well. 3/5 Story Development: To be honest, this is the first time I've seen a one-year-old do all those things and more. So I'll give you props for your imagination and award you with 4/5 Character Design: It's a bit wild and unorthodox, but it works so why not? 5/5 here for you. World Background The world building is nice and the first few chapters are hinting that something big is about to happen. Will look forward to everything once you are able to give stable releases 4/5 for this one. Overall Score 3;8 This novel is promising. If you can manage to get an editor it would slowly turn into something awesome. So I hope, that you will be able to get an editor for your work. No, make that, I hope that the two of us can find a good editor for our stories. Kudos and more power to you ;)
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Well this is a honest review ... Sure its not the best story in the world, but it is still entertaining to read ... Stability of updates and writing quality could use some work. But we readers dont know the authors living conditions so we cant say that his lazy and stuff like that. Nor can we say that he have to improve the writing quality, since no one is perfect from the start. Anyway those are the 2 mayor things that pull down the novel ...
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I liked it a good story and a good progress with the mc's abilities there is nothing wrong with it I don't know why the others are arguing and continue with the good work