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The story is excellent and very creative. I would recommend others read it. My only Gripe is the updated speed, which isn't bad, but it feels like we are left on a cliffhanger for long time.
in short here is my review and first it was good but later it got annoying and ridiculous
you know i absolutely loved the premise of this story, yet i am very disappointed with Cole's seeming lackadasicle manner and indifference to Jeremy parents legacy being trashed and spit upon. I guess that's what happens when the isekaid person believes himself to be different from the original character. this is leading to plotline holes and reader frustration. just because he is getting money and anything he needs from the system shouldn't mean reclamation be on a back burner. iIhope you will change the character arc. I mean he resonantes more with a character template rather than the original soul of Jeremy's. hope you do better going on
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This is well written, and enjoyable at times. But I feel like the main character just stumbles around at time. He also seems to go out of his way to get involved with things he doesn’t need to get involved with. I like the fact that he has plans, but then he’ll make a decision that kind of throw a lot of plants out of the window. This is a good story, if you like the marvel comics universe more than the cinematic. It does have in a lot of different characters that we normally don’t read in fanfic. I think if you enjoy a good character, who’s aligned more towards good and being a heroes than this is a story you would like. If you’re like me, and want someone who doesn’t care about others only focuses on his goals. This story may at times frustrate you.
This is one of the best Marvel fanfic I have ever read most of them are just painful to read the concept is great and unique just a few grammar problems.
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"No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad". "No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia". "No hay certeza en la carne sino en la muerte"
Pretty good but the events in the story are a little slow and somtimes too fast.
The story is really good nothing bad to say and consistent updates the story progress is fantastic and I'm eating this story up.
Honestly so I like what happening the story the character and more tho few things I had a problem with that slow Persona but overall it's great 👍
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The story is pretty great, it’s refreshing, well written. The background is great but my God this anger is absolutely useless. I would have thought that the system would have erased the anger of the pit but no and that causes only problems. The way that the mc follows is not good and it would only cause problems. I like his neutrality, I hope he never becomes a villain but he’s on the edge right now. Bruce Wayne was able to hold his public character without stumbling, but the mc only stumbled. This fight in Midtown was an example of the consequences of his lack of control, I hope that with the previous persona it will stop, I have the impression that the system controls his emotions. This anger is not natural. There is the problem with Kamar taj. You forget that they don’t care about anything that happens inside the planet and that is not a being that will destroy the planet itself like Dormamu, The Ancien One didn’t care about Loki or anything. I hope his York identity is never mixed up with mutants and vigilantism. Todd has succeeded in Dc as well as Clark, Bruce and others, Red Hood is on the edge of the villain, he could never have a civilian life if it comes out, could not own a company. Other than that, the story is really great, I advise to read it
10/10 I love reading this so far my only complaint is there are not enough chapters and they are not releasing fast enough I need more
it's a pretty good read with interesting premise. The author does need to work on his grammar and get an editor or proofreader, some paragraphs look as if lines were skipped, it also gets confusing to tell who's talking.
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I’d hoped you would start this story again after I read it the first time. Serious potential to be a big one
This story is a breath of fresh air. I would recommend that everyone reads it. I hope that the author keeps up the great work and keep a stable update speed.
It's great 👍 thanks for writing it. This is My first review so not really sure how this works. This is the filler so I can Post this. Like how are you supposed to get 140 words in one of these
I’m at chapter 11 and he hasn’ done anything slightly villainous yet. He’s just a slightly mean hero……
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I love this, mc's character's attitude really suits my taste. Maybe the drawbacks in this fanfic are the timings that confuse me and the updates are very unstable.
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For me, as far as the story goes, it was cool at the beginning but became lame later on. The writing quality is alright. Few mistakes here and there. I won't get into the details that make me think it gets lame since I feel like it's just because I came in with expectations. Needless to say, those expectations were met only in the beginning really. Then they weren't, and I got disappointed by where the story is heading. There's an audience for this. Unfortunately for me, it just isn't me.
The story is excellent and very creative. I would recommend others read it. My only Gripe is the updated speed, which isn't bad, but it feels like we are left on a cliffhanger for long time.
in short here is my review and first it was good but later it got annoying and ridiculous
you know i absolutely loved the premise of this story, yet i am very disappointed with Cole's seeming lackadasicle manner and indifference to Jeremy parents legacy being trashed and spit upon. I guess that's what happens when the isekaid person believes himself to be different from the original character. this is leading to plotline holes and reader frustration. just because he is getting money and anything he needs from the system shouldn't mean reclamation be on a back burner. iIhope you will change the character arc. I mean he resonantes more with a character template rather than the original soul of Jeremy's. hope you do better going on
Spoiler enthüllen This is well written, and enjoyable at times. But I feel like the main character just stumbles around at time. He also seems to go out of his way to get involved with things he doesn’t need to get involved with. I like the fact that he has plans, but then he’ll make a decision that kind of throw a lot of plants out of the window. This is a good story, if you like the marvel comics universe more than the cinematic. It does have in a lot of different characters that we normally don’t read in fanfic. I think if you enjoy a good character, who’s aligned more towards good and being a heroes than this is a story you would like. If you’re like me, and want someone who doesn’t care about others only focuses on his goals. This story may at times frustrate you.
This is one of the best Marvel fanfic I have ever read most of them are just painful to read the concept is great and unique just a few grammar problems.
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"No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad". "No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia". "No hay certeza en la carne sino en la muerte"
Pretty good but the events in the story are a little slow and somtimes too fast.
The story is really good nothing bad to say and consistent updates the story progress is fantastic and I'm eating this story up.
Honestly so I like what happening the story the character and more tho few things I had a problem with that slow Persona but overall it's great 👍
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The story is pretty great, it’s refreshing, well written. The background is great but my God this anger is absolutely useless. I would have thought that the system would have erased the anger of the pit but no and that causes only problems. The way that the mc follows is not good and it would only cause problems. I like his neutrality, I hope he never becomes a villain but he’s on the edge right now. Bruce Wayne was able to hold his public character without stumbling, but the mc only stumbled. This fight in Midtown was an example of the consequences of his lack of control, I hope that with the previous persona it will stop, I have the impression that the system controls his emotions. This anger is not natural. There is the problem with Kamar taj. You forget that they don’t care about anything that happens inside the planet and that is not a being that will destroy the planet itself like Dormamu, The Ancien One didn’t care about Loki or anything. I hope his York identity is never mixed up with mutants and vigilantism. Todd has succeeded in Dc as well as Clark, Bruce and others, Red Hood is on the edge of the villain, he could never have a civilian life if it comes out, could not own a company. Other than that, the story is really great, I advise to read it
10/10 I love reading this so far my only complaint is there are not enough chapters and they are not releasing fast enough I need more
it's a pretty good read with interesting premise. The author does need to work on his grammar and get an editor or proofreader, some paragraphs look as if lines were skipped, it also gets confusing to tell who's talking.
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I’d hoped you would start this story again after I read it the first time. Serious potential to be a big one
This story is a breath of fresh air. I would recommend that everyone reads it. I hope that the author keeps up the great work and keep a stable update speed.
It's great 👍 thanks for writing it. This is My first review so not really sure how this works. This is the filler so I can Post this. Like how are you supposed to get 140 words in one of these
I’m at chapter 11 and he hasn’ done anything slightly villainous yet. He’s just a slightly mean hero……
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I love this, mc's character's attitude really suits my taste. Maybe the drawbacks in this fanfic are the timings that confuse me and the updates are very unstable.
Love it ……………………………………………………………………. Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzsssssssszzz
For me, as far as the story goes, it was cool at the beginning but became lame later on. The writing quality is alright. Few mistakes here and there. I won't get into the details that make me think it gets lame since I feel like it's just because I came in with expectations. Needless to say, those expectations were met only in the beginning really. Then they weren't, and I got disappointed by where the story is heading. There's an audience for this. Unfortunately for me, it just isn't me.