A Different Kind Of Journey

my low review is because of the following 1.first it starts with a confusing, vague, fight seen 2.no intro for the characters 3.there is nothing written make an clear image of the background or the situation. 4.only internal dialogue and interaction between the characters takes lot of effort to form a clear picture. 5. when too many dialogue with no clear image in my head.. i tend to skip the paragraph and if you miss one or two things things get even more confusing. 6.i dont know how to fix if things are written in this way because i am no writer but i think in the start info dump even tough is very bad but i think it was necessary here. 7.my heart pains due to good english and good length of the chapters and a good plot but the above reasons ruined it for me ... best of luck

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Nothing much to say,its a good fanfic, i hope you continue it, and get a lot of readers, change it up anyway you like, be bold, oh and i suggest you speed up the romance, people like stuff they didnt get to experience in the anime 🍺🐼