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in my opinion its just not fulfilling to read about a toddler/baby that is already op. its just simply not immersive or fun to read.. the character itself was already sketchy coming from that clan he has.. but everything else just adds up to one of the lamest mcs ive read from a wish fulfilment novel
I am sorry bro but this is way to much boring and ridiculous. If you are making a fanfic just make it worth reading, I know it's a fanfic and anything could happen in it but this is way too much ridiculous stuff.
Just OMG if you want the last spoil Just read if not go read thIs beautiful novel because he is just mind blowing the end 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯 So here the thing The systeme is not a systeme
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there is nothing about this story that I can say its good. romance? very bad. slice of life and relationship development? almost nonexistent. comedy? not much. power-ups and fights? done poorly, why give Mc so many things where he can't even use them? the story is more of wish fulfillment from the author's side, and its not really thought through. for example, Mc went through so many things, yet not once was even the name of hiruzen mentioned. or most of the major characters? the characters were so badly built, that even Guy, GUY, never said Youth! now you understand the situation!
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This book is very good, but i feel that the MC is way too overpowered. If you write a book next time. Please let the story progress a bit slower but overall, it is a very terrific book to read.
author San without a doubt I am enjoying Ur work, but well u change story every next chapter like she used sharingan in chunnin written exams but in next chapter u say she will never awaken it . there were many such plotholes. if u can correct such mistakes in plot then it would be nice
First off, I enjoyed this FF until chapter 43. Yes, the MC is extremely OP and yes, he was nerfed for some time, but those things didn't really bother me, because the story was still enjoyable. but then came the fight against pain. When he first fought against obito, his mastery over space for example, was superior to obitos, because obito only used a dijutsu. But then he was unable to stop Pains attacks because pains space mastery was higher thanks to the rinnegan?? And the whole time he didn't sense Nagato?? and why was Pain so strong? and why was the MC so stupid? The following fight against Madara and Kaguya felt rushed and not really thought through and I started to skip parts of the chapters. I won't rate the xianxia novel stuff because at that point I already lost interest completely
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ok id just like to start off by saying yes i know this is novel is 2 years old but id like to write this review anyways for the people who are thinking of reading this so they know what they are getting into. firstly the mc is op maybe a little too op actually what am i saying this dude is so overpowered its annoying with the whole like limiter and how because he has this limiter know everythings gonna go super sanic and go 100x faster because "your using your abilitys at their max" secondly its a harem... do i need to say anything else i have read so many of these shitty harem fan-fics and while im not saying the novel is shitty so dont get me wrong there im trying to say the whole harem thing is shitty i dont wanna read like some r-18 shit on how these teenagers are having *** and how compared to the other girls "kaguya is more challenging" id like to say even though how i have talked about this may make this novel seems alot worse but we all have our own opinions i personally did not like this but i encourage you to atleast read a few chapters just to get a feel for it.
All I can say pure bull**** I tolerate too much but i guess he is just a kid he cant even beat danzo starting from that chapter I already give up sorry i know he will kill danzo soon but it just so fucking uselss especially the system and he just downgraded his training by acting low key but what can I do this what typical novel nowadays hayssttt thanks for the early chapter though. I cannot tolerate it anymore he doesn't even have a goal there are many plot holes in the first chapters like how did he even get there. How the **** he acts like he know or knowledgable in technique if he reincarnated or still have a mind of a kid just go **** yourself.
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It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a damn harem novel The author had to ruin it!!!!
It was a fun story to read. The story was essentially a good power fantasy, without all that much characterization. The characters were mostly two dimensional. However, the experience of the main character gaining and enjoying ever more power was entertaining. It's the equivalent of junk food that tastes good.
One of The best stories I’ve read so far. It is so interesting and fool of life that it captivated me to the end. The only part that i dint like was the jump From the lower plane to a totally unrelated and oh so powerful plane. But still the story was amazing . Keep up the good work and thank you for writing this. It gave me strength and a peace of mind in this time of sickness and death we are living now. Plus its a good distraction. 🙌👏
............ ..................Great ❤......................................................................................................
i very much dislike stereotypical S rank 1 year old kids in system novels. I really tried to read this story, but it feels like there's no real point in reading a story where a 1 year old can kill anyone in the story.
Fucking Awesome Story. Shame it ended but it was fucking amazing. The story development was top-notch. Character progression was not too slow or too fast. The end was incredible with a Awesome Plot-twist
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Fascinating, simply fascinating. To be honest i'm not really a fan of Naruto so when he story started there i just had to deal with it for the time being, but when he moved from the Narutoverse to the others i really really REALLY started to enjoy it.
It is literally different story made by creative mind the twist and turn are really good entertaining must read......... I think at lasr author should made later part have some more chapters
Was not expecting that but damn couldn’t you add at least another sex scene. A a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a aQ. A. A a a a a. A a a a s d a a d s a s d. A did a Anne a a a ahndkxls. A a a a
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Y mira me voy por el mc tu historia se volvió odiosa, y antes que nada no me importo que lo hayas hecho OP es más me divertido, la cosa aqui es que hallas hecho un OP inútil y poco a poco se volvió odiosa y hasta me obligue a seguir leyendo para ver si cambiaba pero no, además de los fallos argumentales que no son agujeritos si no que son ollos en la trama de las historias y poco a poco se volvió estupida Lo único a destacar de la historia es tu caligrafía me gustó bastante
I really loved the story but if you had made the whole thing more detailed it would have a lot better. . .
Stupid fucking limiter my ass. Its a good story until that part. If you dont want your mc too be OP just let him climb his way from bottom to top.
The ending was too lackluster, plus I don't like harems, becouse characters are often forgoten, that's why i think it's better to have the protagonist and the heroine, period.
A wholesome story with a wholesome ending and funny ending.Weird it is for me to make a review for something that ended 9 months ago and just discovered it yesterday. Thats was a great source of entertainment.
el concepto es bueno la velocidad de avance es decente pero me hace morirme de las iras como el MC es super poderoso pero contra cada enemigo se limita es como tengo nivel 100 mi enemigo es nivel 20 pero no voy a usar mi poder voy a pelear durante 10 capítulos a pesar de poder matarlo instantáneamente :( :/
in my opinion its just not fulfilling to read about a toddler/baby that is already op. its just simply not immersive or fun to read.. the character itself was already sketchy coming from that clan he has.. but everything else just adds up to one of the lamest mcs ive read from a wish fulfilment novel
I am sorry bro but this is way to much boring and ridiculous. If you are making a fanfic just make it worth reading, I know it's a fanfic and anything could happen in it but this is way too much ridiculous stuff.
Just OMG if you want the last spoil Just read if not go read thIs beautiful novel because he is just mind blowing the end 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯 So here the thing The systeme is not a systeme
Spoiler enthüllen there is nothing about this story that I can say its good. romance? very bad. slice of life and relationship development? almost nonexistent. comedy? not much. power-ups and fights? done poorly, why give Mc so many things where he can't even use them? the story is more of wish fulfillment from the author's side, and its not really thought through. for example, Mc went through so many things, yet not once was even the name of hiruzen mentioned. or most of the major characters? the characters were so badly built, that even Guy, GUY, never said Youth! now you understand the situation!
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This book is very good, but i feel that the MC is way too overpowered. If you write a book next time. Please let the story progress a bit slower but overall, it is a very terrific book to read.
author San without a doubt I am enjoying Ur work, but well u change story every next chapter like she used sharingan in chunnin written exams but in next chapter u say she will never awaken it . there were many such plotholes. if u can correct such mistakes in plot then it would be nice
First off, I enjoyed this FF until chapter 43. Yes, the MC is extremely OP and yes, he was nerfed for some time, but those things didn't really bother me, because the story was still enjoyable. but then came the fight against pain. When he first fought against obito, his mastery over space for example, was superior to obitos, because obito only used a dijutsu. But then he was unable to stop Pains attacks because pains space mastery was higher thanks to the rinnegan?? And the whole time he didn't sense Nagato?? and why was Pain so strong? and why was the MC so stupid? The following fight against Madara and Kaguya felt rushed and not really thought through and I started to skip parts of the chapters. I won't rate the xianxia novel stuff because at that point I already lost interest completely
Spoiler enthüllen ok id just like to start off by saying yes i know this is novel is 2 years old but id like to write this review anyways for the people who are thinking of reading this so they know what they are getting into. firstly the mc is op maybe a little too op actually what am i saying this dude is so overpowered its annoying with the whole like limiter and how because he has this limiter know everythings gonna go super sanic and go 100x faster because "your using your abilitys at their max" secondly its a harem... do i need to say anything else i have read so many of these shitty harem fan-fics and while im not saying the novel is shitty so dont get me wrong there im trying to say the whole harem thing is shitty i dont wanna read like some r-18 shit on how these teenagers are having *** and how compared to the other girls "kaguya is more challenging" id like to say even though how i have talked about this may make this novel seems alot worse but we all have our own opinions i personally did not like this but i encourage you to atleast read a few chapters just to get a feel for it.
All I can say pure bull**** I tolerate too much but i guess he is just a kid he cant even beat danzo starting from that chapter I already give up sorry i know he will kill danzo soon but it just so fucking uselss especially the system and he just downgraded his training by acting low key but what can I do this what typical novel nowadays hayssttt thanks for the early chapter though. I cannot tolerate it anymore he doesn't even have a goal there are many plot holes in the first chapters like how did he even get there. How the **** he acts like he know or knowledgable in technique if he reincarnated or still have a mind of a kid just go **** yourself.
👀💙️Thanks for the Book💙👀 👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕👍👏✌➕
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Spoiler enthüllen It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a harem novel It's a damn harem novel The author had to ruin it!!!!
It was a fun story to read. The story was essentially a good power fantasy, without all that much characterization. The characters were mostly two dimensional. However, the experience of the main character gaining and enjoying ever more power was entertaining. It's the equivalent of junk food that tastes good.
One of The best stories I’ve read so far. It is so interesting and fool of life that it captivated me to the end. The only part that i dint like was the jump From the lower plane to a totally unrelated and oh so powerful plane. But still the story was amazing . Keep up the good work and thank you for writing this. It gave me strength and a peace of mind in this time of sickness and death we are living now. Plus its a good distraction. 🙌👏
............ ..................Great ❤......................................................................................................
i very much dislike stereotypical S rank 1 year old kids in system novels. I really tried to read this story, but it feels like there's no real point in reading a story where a 1 year old can kill anyone in the story.
Fucking Awesome Story. Shame it ended but it was fucking amazing. The story development was top-notch. Character progression was not too slow or too fast. The end was incredible with a Awesome Plot-twist
Spoiler enthüllen Fascinating, simply fascinating. To be honest i'm not really a fan of Naruto so when he story started there i just had to deal with it for the time being, but when he moved from the Narutoverse to the others i really really REALLY started to enjoy it.
It is literally different story made by creative mind the twist and turn are really good entertaining must read......... I think at lasr author should made later part have some more chapters
Was not expecting that but damn couldn’t you add at least another sex scene. A a a a a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a aQ. A. A a a a a. A a a a s d a a d s a s d. A did a Anne a a a ahndkxls. A a a a
Spoiler enthüllen Y mira me voy por el mc tu historia se volvió odiosa, y antes que nada no me importo que lo hayas hecho OP es más me divertido, la cosa aqui es que hallas hecho un OP inútil y poco a poco se volvió odiosa y hasta me obligue a seguir leyendo para ver si cambiaba pero no, además de los fallos argumentales que no son agujeritos si no que son ollos en la trama de las historias y poco a poco se volvió estupida Lo único a destacar de la historia es tu caligrafía me gustó bastante
I really loved the story but if you had made the whole thing more detailed it would have a lot better. . .
Stupid fucking limiter my ass. Its a good story until that part. If you dont want your mc too be OP just let him climb his way from bottom to top.
The ending was too lackluster, plus I don't like harems, becouse characters are often forgoten, that's why i think it's better to have the protagonist and the heroine, period.
A wholesome story with a wholesome ending and funny ending.Weird it is for me to make a review for something that ended 9 months ago and just discovered it yesterday. Thats was a great source of entertainment.
el concepto es bueno la velocidad de avance es decente pero me hace morirme de las iras como el MC es super poderoso pero contra cada enemigo se limita es como tengo nivel 100 mi enemigo es nivel 20 pero no voy a usar mi poder voy a pelear durante 10 capítulos a pesar de poder matarlo instantáneamente :( :/