One piece: Journey with a system

Well, come on, the story is not the worst I’ve read, yet it made me quit even when the worst ones didn’t.   "But is the story that bad?" Well, no, but I have a list of my own reasons, which can also be yours. Reason 1- Mc marine I am not saying that being a marine is bad, by no means, I have read many good stories of marines, the problem is that the author skipped all that part and ran from him joining the Garp until he became a reserve admiral in two chapters. (I know this may be for hiding certain things, but this is also my third reason later.) Reason 2- Mc joins Luffy MC joins Luffy's crew when he meets him, I wasn't expecting that, ever, MC says it's for a while and because of a mission, but for me it still doesn't pay to be under someone, even more when you have the strength of an admiral and the luffy in this phase has at most the strength of the crocodile, what will he be doing there? Watching the story go on while having tea and writing your book, not my type, sorry. Reason 3-I hate mystery The author says that the MC has a whole reason to do what he does and a hidden personality, okay, but I hate mystery! When I start a story I think, the MC is me with a different personality, let's see what I'm going to do and see in third person. The problem when the author hides everything is that I can't do this anymore, I'm just a guy listening to someone else's story and the person is still prolonging the events when he tells me to create a “suspense”, it irritates me, knowing that he has hidden reasons irritates me, knowing that he has a hidden personality irritates me. Finally, author, I'm not writing this review to harm you, but for people like me who read the reviews before reading a story, I really wanted to read a review like that before I started reading, anyway ... good luck with your story, I will leave the criticism as a spoiler for only people like me to read.

The MC is naive and gives a Naruto vibe,which I particularly hate.I read 20 chapters and all he is doing is whining and getting angry at the things he can't control.Not even training for the three months he was considered a slave and instead of being vengeful and planning to blow Mary jeoise to the high heavens and making escape a priority he is like mix of Naruto and Luffy.My main problem with the MC is his lack of initiative in anything hell he could have directly stored his collar in storage space and quietly staged an escape with the others.I counted 3 times he was saved by luck and sacrifice of others.He wasted three months and in a single moment of anger undo the effort that the other spend on him indicating that he is a pig teammate who pulls others into their troubles.I don't believe any of the current admirals in any country will be as rash and brash as this one.

The story is well although we can a few mistakes here and there. The reason why it is 2 stars because of the plot. It seems too repetitive. If I wanted to see Luffy's adventure, I just watch the anime. Even his personality seems one dimensional. The writer should not skip the MC formative years because it is important to the character. Then what about Hancock did he just forget all of a sudden because that is stupid. He did spend a lot of time with girls during his time as a slave. Overall, this fanfic is a failure,

☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

THE mc Sun Reo reincarneted in One piece world in the form of a minx human hybrid as a tenryuubito slave With the potential to eat three types of devil fruit Being forced to eat the magnet fruit and slaving together With the boa sisters start to walk the path of a marine and having adventures alongside the strawhats. What will happen NEXT? What will be his NEXT fruits.? My vote is for enel fruit to combine With his magnet fruit bring a new level of power.