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Time.Travel()

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Autor: Onch

4.61 (15 Bewertungen)

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Zusammenfassung

John Thomson is a regular college student, the kind of average person you cross on the street every day.
Or at least that’s what most people assume, because he’s far from what’s considered “normal”.

After all, a normal person isn’t regularly dragged into life-threatening tribulations involving fantastic creatures, otherworldly beings and people with logic-defying superpowers. Not to mention that he seems to have a knack for sticking his nose into the nefarious plans of secret societies and ancient cults.

But John’s life wasn’t always such a mess: Everything began when he accidentally invented a way to rewind time…


Weekly Schedule: At least a ~3.5k words chapter every Wednesday and Friday.

Thoughts are surrounded by '*' as a workaround for no italics.

Patreon link: https://www.patreon.com/Onch

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TastyRice

A very good novel indeed. It is one of my current favourites as of now. The development holds one to read on. Also, along with the charackter development, this novel became many times better. The only thing I can't really understand is why he won't just repeat one day long enough to actually understand his rewind app and optimize it e.g. stopping time. That way, he wouldn't have to worry about losing again.

5yr
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NorthernWind

I like it. This novel has most of its viewers on royal road it seems. The novel is interesting although I don't get why no one has used bombs or anything so far, they pretty much just sling spells even when its not all that optimal. The character has an interesting power and I'm pretty sure a split personality disorder. From what I've seen it may just be his soul teleporting back in time when you think about it. It would sort of explain why his regeneration gets stronger and he has thousands of chanting voices in his head.

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MrSir
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I really enjoy this story, what sets it apart from the others is how the MC really struggles and the pain he goes through. What I find interesting about it is the fact that the MC cannot really die, however, as a result, he can go crazy and I am looking forward to seeing how it develops as well as when he will find his nemesis that can counter his one true ability. MC has also shown some growth and has become more driven. What I would like to see is the MC acting instead of reacting all the time. I sense this will change soon. All in all the writing is good, the premise unique and the world interesting. Looking forward to more chapters Mr. Author.

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abacaxi

should be in the top 15 easily for the quality presented, I wonder how this story is particularly unknown.................................................................................................................

5yr
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Monarchblood

The story's okay just waiting for more chaps To avoid becoming disappointed when the novels suddenly get dropped or there's no reply from author after novels get to a good part😢 But keep up the good work👍

6yr
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4yr
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BoredKing

This story is honestly amazing. Its about a guy who gets the ability to rewind time (only 24 hrs) and gets dragged into a world of magic. Due to his time power he can't use mana so he has to rely on gadgets he makes to survive after passing off the rulers of the magical world on Earth. I suck at reviewing so I'll just recommend you give the first couple chapters a read (it does start out a little slow but it picks up once he learns more about the magic world).

4yr
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anatomie

A lot of people are going to be in the same boat as you are in the first place and you have to be able to be a good person and be a good person and be a good person and be a good person and be a part time person to help with your family life in a way that's really good person to you but not a lot more people who have been involved with you than your parents or children in your area for years to be with them in a very good person who has been a great person for you for the first couple months in a row because it has to have the same level and respect to be the same people that have the most and the most likely

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5yr
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Intellectualdust

Keep up the good work Onch. I am reading it daily for a few months and like the action parts, somehow it visualize really well. Thanks. I recommend everyone.

5yr
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Reynerio1996

is cool!...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
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drefond

Writing Quality: Good, to understand clearly what is going on Stability of Updates: good Story Development: too fast, uncreative and several rule breaks ... 50 ~ 60 chapters he faces a demon (lord of the flies) who is very powerful incarnated in the body of a dragon who is very powerful, and protagonist without being able to use any special power (he can not use magic does not have a strong body, back in time) kills him, and the protagonist says that the power to turn back in time is not invincible but he is never defeated, and after that event he stops using power extensively equal to how he used it so far ... forcing " mistakes "in it. Character Design: are good, but do not develop and are only to leverage the story forward or make it more convenient for the protagonist, such as the girl who lied, she is apprehensive to several chapters behind (about 20 ~ 30 ), to arrive at the progonista and become a slave dedector of lies, and the half-dragon? slave attack force and causing "problems" to the protagonist solve World Background; big, immense and interesting but poorly presented, badly planned and the reactions of the world as a whole were bad, but the arrogance of the "noble" was very well made and was very believable. basically the work is bad, but because the author did not have the patience to develop the characters and the world and the ideas of the author are good but poorly executed, the author needs to plan better there are 2 good works that are good examples of how to do this: the same mistake but not as big as this: Steampunk Apocalypse and this one that does it very well and when you arrive in the current chapter and look back to feel the evolution of power and personality: Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

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Nightcoffe

I like the story alot and I hope u keep going don't drop this story also love the long chapter... the writing is good the story build is good

6yr
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Bloodilicious

This story is a hidden gem! I love the different style of the story compared to a whole lot other stories I read. I'm surprised that this story have so few readers as it seems compared to other stories. Mostly since I feel that the quality that the author provides is really good. I sincerely recommend this! 😁

6yr
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25788hf

i love this story. i just hope the author updates it more frequently. at least 4c/w instead of 2/w. but still, i love this story. well, that's all i want to say, and quidian is fuc*ing testing my patience with the 140character limit.

6yr
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DeJeL
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*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: Remember, most on this site like chapters to have 1k-2.5k words each, but since your story is done so well, I doubt that most people will complain.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good story thus far, You seem to choose the POV changes well and can keep a reader that thought that a story that is not isekai probably won't be worth reading enthralled.;,;. Your Character design works well and you have all the world background you need thus far.;,;. Personal Feedback: WOW, Just wow... I really enjoyed the first five chapters, and can barely wait to get back to reading this book, hope you keep writing until the end.;,;.

6yr
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