A Gatekeeper and The Celestial Sovereign

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Issthfan

although our author here is young but writes better than alot of guys out there so i am giving 5 stars as encouragment the other novel is already awesome although i think writing 2 novels at the same time is hard and could lead to mistakes but i hope one will be on hold till the other is complete i wont read this till it reaches 100th chapter since i can read 70+ ch/d

6yr 14

LV 5

Morgan

I stumbled upon this by accident and it honestly is really good, keep it up. I'm expecting great things out of this novel. Hopefully it doesn't get dropped.

6yr 12

LV 5

gingerghostflewby

This is perhaps my favorite novel of this genre, in fact one of my favorite novel's in general. I love how you built up the mc and gave us a clear understanding of his personality at the start. I can't wait for the romance between him and CB to develop. This is a great story that really hooks the reader and attaches them to the characters and I highly recommend it.

6yr 9

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LV 11

GoldenKitsune

Really a good novel ...…......…............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

6yr 8

LV 3

Daoism4evr

This novel is so good!!!!! The fantasy aspect of it is so interesting, and all the characters are so well developed and relatable. I love Mao Lu, I want him as my best friend. The author has been so good at updating everyday so far. It's such an interesting read!!! I 100% recommend!!!!!

6yr 7

LV 4

Hewhoseekstruth

Hah... So much I want to say... I suppose I will start with the judgements first. Writing quality, given a five due to the fact that out of all the chapters so far, I've barely seen any mistake, and if I did see any, they were so minor I barely remembered them, your novel has done something the likes of Er Gen has done for me, along with some other famous books and recently a few other promising writers, you've allowed me to see the story. I liken stories to a painting, one made by a four year old, you'll know what the picture is about... vaguely, then you have your teenager, probably taken a few art classes, knows how to draw, dabbles in it, you'll know what they are painting, but you then shrug it off and probably forget about it soon afterwards. Then you have those who dedicate their lives to it, study it, grow with it, and then you can see the entire picture. That is how I read stories, and what you've painted what might not be a masterpiece, but it requires admiration, and seeing what you've done from your other story by reading the comments, you've grown. stability... tough one, I've only picked up your story today, but considering I found this in the daily updates category, I'll give you a five out of my heart, and hope when you resume your other story, you don't forget about this one. Story development, no brainer, it's a five, i've talked a bit on this with the writing quality, so this should be shorter. While the story may be rushed compared to bigger novels that take 200 chapters to even go through one stage, obviously both are geniuses in their own rights, and obviously this won't turn into a mega series. so the pacing is pretty on point, not too quickly, not too slow. character development, this is obviously where the spoiler's start coming in, so if you haven't read the book yet, I suggest you take this novel's rating at face value and read it. now obviously another five, there's a pattern here, isn't there? Anyways, Mao Lu, obviously, in the beginning, he seems perfect, too perfect, we learn he's gay (sorry boys, he's already taken, by someone much more perfect than you), that's acceptable, then we learn he's from a wealthy family, sorry, ex-wealthy family, he's just perfect, isn't he? well, he's got his own insecurities, he relies too much on himself, to the point where sometimes his friends need to go out of their way to help him. I'm also no doctor, but I'm pretty sure he's overworked, and fatigued, to the point in which he almost makes some bad decisions. obviously these are all things to overcome. Now, onto Chang Bo, obviously the MC in his own right, he's got it all, good talents, boosted by a system, enemies on all sides. Struck down and brought to the mortal world by a poison. this should be where he encounters a mortal who nurses him back to health, or a lucky encounter happens... He meets our lovable protagonist. Arrogant, on his last breath and sure of his demise, he curses him, spits on him, and our MC does nothing, but keeps calm, and heals him, and prepares to listen to his story. I've blabbed enough about the story so I'll get right to the end, Chang Bo is your typical rich kid, conceited due to his status, unable to make friends for the same reason, wary of all, and the MC melts his heart, slowly but surely, wouldn't be yaoi if it didn't happen. world background, five stars, easy to understand, given in tidbits, and left wanting for more... This was probably my shortest section. Now onto everything I want to say, you've worked hard, displayed talent, perseverence, and commitment, I applaud you, and shall be supporting you. This story is great, everything somebody is looking for when you say yaoi, I've left out a lot of what I truly wish to say, which could go past ten thousand words, but I must keep it short, I suppose I shall part with these words of wisdom, Mao Lu... I am so jealous...

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6yr 6

LV 13

Preet

hi i even didn't started to read the novel yet but i m giving five star and my vote to you because u have the courage to write about gay MC i know lot of people may hinder you or abuse you i want to let you know we are here to support you don't think about anything feel free write beautifully i m looking forward to your work and thanks once again

6yr 6

LV 10

Misty_Foxtail

Author is so awesome. Book is interesting, the plot is so unique and very fluffy =W=. Overall worth your shipping shrine so make space for 'em. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) no yaoi scenes tho it's for general(all ages) so no yaoi but still yaoi ya get ma drift?

6yr 6

LV 11

Allen0

A good novel. . ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. ........ ... ...... . . . . . . . . . . ..

6yr 6

LV 5

chvvyx

This novel is amazing, though updates can be a bit lacking due to authors busy life. Story and characters are developed beautifully and is on par with translationed novels!! Really like the fresh story plot and fluffy moments 😆😆 English is 💯, does not need editor at all (if author doesn’t use one) IT’S SUCH A GEM, PICK IT UP YOU WON’T REGRET IT!!!! <spoiler> <you have been warned. Reading any further than this results in a spoiler> It’s a bl story, fujoshis this is the novel for you!! Super cute love love love this novel >< ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜 ❣️💕💞💓💗💖💘💝 Bl haters or ppl against gay characters/lgbtq+ rights, please don’t read or attempt to put up a negative review, us fans will trash you 😡😡😡

6yr 5

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LV 5

Redrosess

Its a good story with nice plotline. The Main Character is likeable and have his own ideals which he lives by. Issues of LGBT was also addressed in this novel and the pains of coming out. I'm not really good at describing anyway, so far I like it.

6yr 5

LV 4

TEOFY

This is good. looking forward to the next chapters. yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah. . .God bless. . . .

6yr 4

LV 6

little_tortoise

Love this novel! The writing is top notch. The character development and world building are well done. Can’t wait to read more and see where this is going!

6yr 4

LV 12

mithun

This is first novel I read in bl category.most of time I didn't read which has gay mc.i feel gross when reading bl novels.i didn't know this novel have gay mc when I started reading. Surprisingly I actually enjoyed this novel. Unique mc with good moral standards which we cannot get most of novels(especially Chinese novels which full of racism blood thirsty and dark) . please keep the good work **: if u r going to write any r18*** scene please inform in title at lest I can skip the part.

6yr 3

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LV 3

Bjrex

This is the only story that keep me up from this site. Great story plotline and scene. Two thumbs and 5 stars for the author. Hoping for constant chapter release.

6yr 3

LV 5

Sheishey

Esto es muy interente, me encanto su trama como sus desarrollos son interesantes dan ganas de leer sin parar . sigue escribiendo por que tu historia muestra mucho .

6yr 3

LV 4

Centrie

Amazing novel with very good and detailed narration. I highly recommend, you should added this to your list. The author has an artistic writing that will help to easily understand the contents of story.

4yr 2

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LV 10

Wobster

This is a thrilling novel and I would recommend this to any person who enjoys fantasy novels! Not only is it a fantasy novel but it is definitely unique!! I personally have read many novels based around cultivation but never have I read one as creative as this, it really takes the character development of the MC in a whole different way. Also, not only the development but the actual title and storyline of the MC I have never even heard of!!! This personally is probably the best fantasy novel I have read yet and I hope to see more of it in the future!!!!!!

5yr 2

LV 3

GreenWritter

I love the plot line so far. the constant action is wonderful and you have done a spectacular job at developing your characters. I haven't binge read a book in forever.

5yr 2