Zayne Valhalla HOTD

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Hush19

For those who don’t know this is a re-write of the authors previous story. You’ve done a wonderful job putting this together - I genuinely enjoyed the previous story but you’ve taken it and refined perfectly so far. The MC is much more relatable and the story flows much better narratively. I like how we find out (you’ll understand this if you read the previous story - Bravos is my hint) as the MC finds out. Great job - would love to see this continue. This is at a level now where p-a-t-r-e-o-n (not sure if that word is forbidden) wouldn’t be a bad idea.

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Duxcs

I'm going to trust you, I hope you finish this one

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Illicitdrop_29

This is the author. Got logged out of my account and can’t get back in :(

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DaoistwwYBDC

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