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Okie took this book on for a trial read and welp the 1st ch got me hooked. Omo...this too good. I mean the way the story has been narrated from the 1st POV is demn good and all and how the chapters keeps you hoping for more.
The way the story has been narrated by the Author from the 1st POV is really great. Sometimes it makes you eager but it also makes you excited.[img=update][img=recommend]
When I read the writing style from the first chapter, it felt kind of connecting. Like the author really knows how to write paragraphs. Sometimes, I get anxious but it also makes me excited so I kind of like that aspect too. Good going.
The story premise is good and the first chapter seemed interesting. I am curious to know who that other person is and how he got there on the island as well. Also, what happened to her? That's a mystery and cannot wait to find out. Apart from a few English errors the story flows well and the pacing is good. The book has potential to grow, so keep up the good work author! 😄
The first chapter was a little confusing but I realized it was the plot that warrants it to be like that, this is a great way to start a book. I can't wait to continue reading [img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=fp]
the pace of the story is a bit slow if say but it's not boring at all even with the slow pace and drag of suspense only adds to the overall enjoyment of the book but I honestly hope you'd start to update regularly [img=update]
Interesting story. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing serious. What I didnt understand is if the girl woke up with all her memories lost or she is losing them bit by bit. Overall a promising story with potential. Good job,keep writing.
This book is great for whiling away time has a great pace suspense and a great humor you get to laugh even in some serious scenes . I believe the first chapter completely draws you in [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp]
I like it. How she woke up and met her love. These could be said to be one of those good start. Author made it enjoyable and relaxing. Keep it up
Nice grammar, also the author has good grammar with minimal grammatical mistakes, i would recommend this to readers who likes romance, the attention to detail is also good.
The synopsis is interesting and keeps you hooked. The plotting has been planned beautifully. The words are easy to understand and appear as if you are watching a movie. Good job author. Keep it up...
Okie took this book on for a trial read and welp the 1st ch got me hooked. Omo...this too good. I mean the way the story has been narrated from the 1st POV is demn good and all and how the chapters keeps you hoping for more.
The way the story has been narrated by the Author from the 1st POV is really great. Sometimes it makes you eager but it also makes you excited.[img=update][img=recommend]
When I read the writing style from the first chapter, it felt kind of connecting. Like the author really knows how to write paragraphs. Sometimes, I get anxious but it also makes me excited so I kind of like that aspect too. Good going.
The story premise is good and the first chapter seemed interesting. I am curious to know who that other person is and how he got there on the island as well. Also, what happened to her? That's a mystery and cannot wait to find out. Apart from a few English errors the story flows well and the pacing is good. The book has potential to grow, so keep up the good work author! 😄
The first chapter was a little confusing but I realized it was the plot that warrants it to be like that, this is a great way to start a book. I can't wait to continue reading [img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=fp]
the pace of the story is a bit slow if say but it's not boring at all even with the slow pace and drag of suspense only adds to the overall enjoyment of the book but I honestly hope you'd start to update regularly [img=update]
Interesting story. There are a few grammatical errors but nothing serious. What I didnt understand is if the girl woke up with all her memories lost or she is losing them bit by bit. Overall a promising story with potential. Good job,keep writing.
This book is great for whiling away time has a great pace suspense and a great humor you get to laugh even in some serious scenes . I believe the first chapter completely draws you in [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp]
I like it. How she woke up and met her love. These could be said to be one of those good start. Author made it enjoyable and relaxing. Keep it up
Nice grammar, also the author has good grammar with minimal grammatical mistakes, i would recommend this to readers who likes romance, the attention to detail is also good.
The synopsis is interesting and keeps you hooked. The plotting has been planned beautifully. The words are easy to understand and appear as if you are watching a movie. Good job author. Keep it up...