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Still waiting for the end. Maybe it would have been better to make each section a full story. Love the story line, but lose interest over the length of time!
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Le daría 5 estrellas pero es verdad que no actualiza muy seguido y en lo personal lo prefiero, pasa seguido que quieren apurarse en ciertos temas y terminan bajando la calidad de la obra.
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hola, primero que nada muchas gracias por una buena novela ligera!! segundo y es mas mi opinion sobre lo que lei tienes una muy buena historia en general pero igual es el problema porque tienes una buena historia que no la desarrollas un poco mas apresuras mucho los eventos o las conquistar de potter sin dar un diseño a los personajes de su harem ni mucho menos aclara en que estan, no me molesta lo de macho alfa pero al menos dale un nombre o mas desarrollo a sus mujeres y no solo una mas del lote. bueno era eso espero te sirva mi humilde opinion y te sea de ayuda muy buena NL sigue asi [img=recomendar]
Anyone know any ho fics like this one, can somebody help me, thanks[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Started off with an interesting idea then immediately went downhill. By chapter 9 he’s already op and basically just being handed abilities non stop. Then by chapter 12 he’s basically turned into the most important noble in wizarding Britain. The dumbles bashing is way too over the top and doesn’t make sense. I couldn’t get past the constant gifts Harry kept getting, theres basically no stakes The flirting isn’t good either, it’s hard to read. I tried to skip where he went back to school but it just kept going. I have no idea why this is rated high, the grammar isn’t even good. Probably just cause it’s a harem.
HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM
Автор а будет ли продолжения данного фанфики ? Хотелось бы продолжить читать твою историю ( рандомные слова . Сталогмит , сталоктид , аллигатор , Сейлор Мун , ванпачмен , краб красный дьявол , абрикос и конечно же розовый тираннозавр в костюме леди баг
This is a great book and would recommend it to anyone. It really provides a different perspective of the wizarding world, I have never seen before.
This is a great story that I would recommend to anyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Totally loved it! The Characters have different personalities which makes it more interesting. World building is absolutely amazing. [img=update]
Pretty good FF about Harry Potter World. Keep up the good work, you can do it just nicely if you keep updating it more often! Also, romance is interesting.
Has potential but this isnt a Harry Potter story but just has the charcter names and locations from Harry Potter. Barely any spells from canon.. just says “shoots lightning from wand” etc. Story takes 45chapters to get to the World Cup fight and Athe story starts during that summer so you can tell that this story gets draggggggggggggggged out and becomes boring. Countless details are omitted or forgotten like he loses his wand and then later gets it back but we were never told how.... another girl walked in on his threesome and he sees her the next day and acts awkward but we didnt even know that or the reaction. Honestly i dont even know if the author knows Harry Potter at all but has only read fanfics
About 50 chapters in and loving the direction the authors going with this. The dynamic between Harry and Sirius is a nice sight to see with the author capturing how Sirius acts perfectly and Harry now becoming a chad. Looking forward to reading more, keep up the great work.
Gran historia, tiene un excelente desarrollo e integra más detalle de la vida de los personajes importantes. Además no se apresura en terminar la historia sino que agrega más detalle a la historia que conocemos. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really loved this novel but i'm starting change my mind. first of all im 60 chap in and last 10chap potter is been total a** hole. maybe some you like what he did those ppl but not me, im still giving this chance and hoping after thise two there is no more
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Uh, change in name, i like it. By the way, very good novel, of all the fanfics of HP out there pretty easily top 10 or 5, recomendable
This is the best HP fanfiction i have ever read. the complexity You added to the noble houses was unique and very creative, You did a good job and if you drop this i will be mad since its great.
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I gave it a 3 in writing quality because the author cant get the age of harry right at all. One second hes 18 and the next chapter hes 14. Update stability is a 3 just cause he went on a 20 day long break before his most recent 2 chapters. Story development is phenomenal so an obvious 5 Character design is a 4 since its a fanfic and the characters are already made by jk The world background is a 5 because he expanded wayyyy more on the plot than the original story
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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All I got Say is this novel is amazing and I had hella fun reading it, just Keep on doing what you’re doing, and I can’t wait to read more.
DROPPED! Its been over 2 years since an update and the story doesn't have an ending. I am more than willing to give it a different review if we ever get more chapters.
Still waiting for the end. Maybe it would have been better to make each section a full story. Love the story line, but lose interest over the length of time!
You should add more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Le daría 5 estrellas pero es verdad que no actualiza muy seguido y en lo personal lo prefiero, pasa seguido que quieren apurarse en ciertos temas y terminan bajando la calidad de la obra.
Reveal Spoiler hola, primero que nada muchas gracias por una buena novela ligera!! segundo y es mas mi opinion sobre lo que lei tienes una muy buena historia en general pero igual es el problema porque tienes una buena historia que no la desarrollas un poco mas apresuras mucho los eventos o las conquistar de potter sin dar un diseño a los personajes de su harem ni mucho menos aclara en que estan, no me molesta lo de macho alfa pero al menos dale un nombre o mas desarrollo a sus mujeres y no solo una mas del lote. bueno era eso espero te sirva mi humilde opinion y te sea de ayuda muy buena NL sigue asi [img=recomendar]
Anyone know any ho fics like this one, can somebody help me, thanks[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Started off with an interesting idea then immediately went downhill. By chapter 9 he’s already op and basically just being handed abilities non stop. Then by chapter 12 he’s basically turned into the most important noble in wizarding Britain. The dumbles bashing is way too over the top and doesn’t make sense. I couldn’t get past the constant gifts Harry kept getting, theres basically no stakes The flirting isn’t good either, it’s hard to read. I tried to skip where he went back to school but it just kept going. I have no idea why this is rated high, the grammar isn’t even good. Probably just cause it’s a harem.
HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM. HAREM.HAREM.HAREM.HAREM
Автор а будет ли продолжения данного фанфики ? Хотелось бы продолжить читать твою историю ( рандомные слова . Сталогмит , сталоктид , аллигатор , Сейлор Мун , ванпачмен , краб красный дьявол , абрикос и конечно же розовый тираннозавр в костюме леди баг
This is a great book and would recommend it to anyone. It really provides a different perspective of the wizarding world, I have never seen before.
This is a great story that I would recommend to anyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Totally loved it! The Characters have different personalities which makes it more interesting. World building is absolutely amazing. [img=update]
Pretty good FF about Harry Potter World. Keep up the good work, you can do it just nicely if you keep updating it more often! Also, romance is interesting.
Has potential but this isnt a Harry Potter story but just has the charcter names and locations from Harry Potter. Barely any spells from canon.. just says “shoots lightning from wand” etc. Story takes 45chapters to get to the World Cup fight and Athe story starts during that summer so you can tell that this story gets draggggggggggggggged out and becomes boring. Countless details are omitted or forgotten like he loses his wand and then later gets it back but we were never told how.... another girl walked in on his threesome and he sees her the next day and acts awkward but we didnt even know that or the reaction. Honestly i dont even know if the author knows Harry Potter at all but has only read fanfics
About 50 chapters in and loving the direction the authors going with this. The dynamic between Harry and Sirius is a nice sight to see with the author capturing how Sirius acts perfectly and Harry now becoming a chad. Looking forward to reading more, keep up the great work.
Gran historia, tiene un excelente desarrollo e integra más detalle de la vida de los personajes importantes. Además no se apresura en terminar la historia sino que agrega más detalle a la historia que conocemos. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I really loved this novel but i'm starting change my mind. first of all im 60 chap in and last 10chap potter is been total a** hole. maybe some you like what he did those ppl but not me, im still giving this chance and hoping after thise two there is no more
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Aaaaaàzzzzzðdddddddrddtttffggvvvvvv hhhggggggvvvffffffffffffftffdddssscccxxxyyyyyyhnǹ?¡Knightsbridge gggfffgfffffgg gaff. Brother has become increasingly difficult times
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Uh, change in name, i like it. By the way, very good novel, of all the fanfics of HP out there pretty easily top 10 or 5, recomendable
This is the best HP fanfiction i have ever read. the complexity You added to the noble houses was unique and very creative, You did a good job and if you drop this i will be mad since its great.
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I gave it a 3 in writing quality because the author cant get the age of harry right at all. One second hes 18 and the next chapter hes 14. Update stability is a 3 just cause he went on a 20 day long break before his most recent 2 chapters. Story development is phenomenal so an obvious 5 Character design is a 4 since its a fanfic and the characters are already made by jk The world background is a 5 because he expanded wayyyy more on the plot than the original story
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Reveal Spoiler All I got Say is this novel is amazing and I had hella fun reading it, just Keep on doing what you’re doing, and I can’t wait to read more.
DROPPED! Its been over 2 years since an update and the story doesn't have an ending. I am more than willing to give it a different review if we ever get more chapters.