Wish: Into the world of Percy Jackson

So this is my honest review- Writing style is good and honestly i find itreally okay. as i as reading chinese translations it was really good when i started the novel and i had high hopes for this novel.. but as this is a pj fic and i love the pj verse , i started to judge this harshly.. honesty first problem started when the first romantic relationship started. it started from mc suddenly kissing the fl because he was too happy. and to make things worse thwy were 11 yo' and the author made the scene like a sensual kissing session with details... ( thats if you forget the fact that mc is 20 in his mind) its too much for me to read 11 yo's senaual kissing from the get to go.. and it really feels like mc is a pedo.. the author said something like bcz the mc is in a body of a kid hes practically a kid too. but what about his memories of living 20 years in previous life? where are his logical reasons and ethical mindset? even he was in a kids body and has a kids brain, i refused to believe 20 years of memories and ethics that made him would juat disappear.. the mc doesnt even hesitate to start a relationship! and its with a sudden kiss!! and he discriminate against luke too much for my liking and then the harem thingy.. honestly i like harems.. i really think fanfics with harems good as , there are too many waifus and i dont wanna loose anyone. but this mc is just pathetic trash!! he use a coinflip and make the fl SWEAR ON THE RIVER OF STYX that she would listen to any request from him if he win. and he doesnt elaborate what kind of wish he would be making, and he was sure to win the coin flip too.. to remind you, she is a 11 yo!.. hes just trash imo.. she would be forced to accept anyone in his harem after this and she will have NO choice because she swears it on the styx... honestly 11 yo french kissing and talking about s@x isnt interesting , it just feels ped0 if this was any other novel i wouldve just quit but im writing this bcz its a pj fic and im telling you again i really hate the mc! hes trash!! sorry for my harsh opinion but i judge pj and hp fics hardly oh and i really think writing is good and its without any major mistakes.. if author fixed the character of the mc and that shitty harem scenario , this fic coudve been a great one i can really see the potential ... at least wait till theyre teen or smthin author!! (if you fix the early romance [you know what early means] and the trashy harem scenerio[i know you can do better author] it wouodve been great) (there are some cringy spell things too but they are not things we cant endure) Good luck! no hate( i hate ur mc tho!!!)