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*Smack*
Di- Woah, holy mother of creations
"Yes?" the beautiful human asked.
Anger rising once more, I almost screeched maniacally, "almost," "You just ran and shoved your smelly, ugly body into me, whomever you are."
Looking flabbergasted, the boy raised his arms smelling it almost naturally, looked back at me with an angry scowl and growled out, getting in my face, a "no" and had the audacity to use my own words against me, saying, "you just ran and shoved your smelly little ugly body into me, whomever you are"
Face getting red with shame almost believing his words, I ground out a "no! I'm not smelly or ugly like you, and you ran into me, so you say sorry to me right this second."
Not even looking at me he goes, "yea sure whatever" brushing past me, his shoulders bumped into mine nearly sending me into the wall, which in the end supported my flailing arms as I held on for dear life before I went banging my head into it.
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wow,this is beautiful , honestly,I love this book, the grammar was good ,the plot is beautiful and it's a really interesting book ,I highly recommend
The charater development is great you can really visulize the MC and comedy is on point! It is a very enjoyable story. Great job, keep writing!
Very unique and good, something you can do in your fun time. I enjoyed reading this because of the description and thoughts of the characters and the good link ups on the plot, it is something that is unforgettable
I like how the author constantly switches around from one character's perspective to another! It can get confusing, but it's still easy to read. Romance usually always provides me with a great ride. That rule also applies to this story! Thank you author for providing us with this work, please keep working hard!! ^^
Romance and Elements of surprise! this story is my new guilty pleasure. for real, I love it and I hope the author keeps going higher aan higher [img=exp]
I was confused with the change of perspective on the first few seconds and had to re-read again to understand what just happen. Especially when that dream where she almost died, I thought it was a real event
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There's a few technical grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major that would impact the overall quality of the story. It has a really good flow going in the storyline. I would definitely say to keep up the good work!
Good pacing, would love to know where it would read. Keep up the good work. ..... . .. ... .... ..... ........ Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee. ... .... ....
Wow I was really intrigued with your synopsis so I was really looking forward to the first chapter. Hands down it was really interesting, I was confused at first with her putting her socks on and died. I thought she was getting Isekai'd 😂 That scene made me laugh who would die by putting their socks on haha. Great comedic scenes, Love how your very descriptive and expressive with your words choice. As I read chapter it gives me the expression that I'm currently watching in play inside my head. There's some grammatical and typo errors here and there but that doesn't mean it can affect your unique plot. Keep working on those parts and I assure you that you're novel will definitely shines. Waiting for more chapters! Keep up the great work Author! [img=update][img=recommend]