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Well i like the summary as it didn't say amything abt the storyline or even name of the MC so i strted reading out of curiosity....but i must say it is a good storyline n the characters introduced so far that i hav read r not bad but it cud hav been better but the only downside for me is that there r too many grammatical errors n some of the sentences r also constructed incorrectly so it creates a litthle confusion....otherwise i like the storyline....i cant say anymore as i hav recently only strted this novel n read only dozens of chapters so after a bit more maybe i can give a new review
I liked at first but now dropped you are giving more chapters to side characters than zaph and after making his face bad looking i lost all Intrest in story You are not Giving anything to MC of worth watching him 1= he is Bad fighter 2= he don’t even have a body due to curse 3=before he had above average face but Now you even made him Ugly 4=more than him we got the story about his friends He made in guild Atleast give him something So we can look forward to watch him I really liked if he at least had his face good looking but you made even that worse
God bless the cons. ........................................................................................................................
Have just started and the quality of writing is very poor. Writing upfront in intro or comments that there are some issues with grammar is not enough. Writers need to be serious about their work and just having imagination is not good enough. Some tips: 1. Review your work multiple times before you post it. You will correct most of the issues yourself. This is especially for those who claim to be non native speakers/ writers of the language but can still decently frame the sentences. 2. Get an editor if you are lazy.
Don't know whether the people that wrote reviews on this novel have very low standards, or if they have never read an actual good book. Writing Quality The writing quality in this book is terrible. So many gramatical errors that it actually confuses me how the author didn't find anything wrong with it when he proofread it (hopefully he did). The writing quality makes it seem like the author doesn't care enough to actually fix them. Stability of Updates No problems here. Story development I mean, the story development in this novel is pretty good. I like the pacing of the story and that it is not too fast paced nor too slow. Character Design I don't have any complaints with this section either, I think the characters are well written and have their own personalites and goals. World backround Nothing special in this category, the world isn't described well, it's the epitomy of "average". Some advice for the author in this category, try to describe the mc's surroundings more. It just feels like you couldn't care less about giving us a world that we can imagine. Conclusion Below average. Those two words sums up everything I think of this novel. Don't get me wrong, I am not intending on bashing the author, but c'mon dude, you could atleast make it seem like you care about your work. There's so many grammatical errors where it seems like it was written by a fifth grader. I don't get how there are so many 5 star reviews on this novel, this is nowhere near perfect, very far from it actually. But whatever floats your boat I guess.
First of all I really like your book. Even tough english isn’t my strong point and m not qualified enough to criticize you But i’ll really appreciate it if you could Do some proof-reading ..
The yakshas (Sanskrit: यक्ष yakṣa; Pali: yakkha) are a broad class of nature-spirits, usually benevolent, but sometimes mischievous or capricious, connected with water, fertility, trees, the forest, treasure and wilderness
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Not a fan of fantasy books but this synopsis .. .dang ! It got me hooked. Well, had to read it first before putting anything on the review section,as the all mighty author is too cunning to drag us to his chapters. .. Loved it. Waiting for more chappies. ..
The grammar makes the book borderline unreadable and takes away from the story. The story in itself seemed interesting but I can't make it past the second chapter
Una mierda, el abuelo lo retuvo y a los 18 alos es tan débil como la mierda, un niño que empezó a cultivar antes le puede ganar. Una mierda autor de mierda tu novela de mierda y vos SOS una mierda
Im going to say it....... this is good, reql good. Well done for overcoming the language barrier author. When you have time, go back to old episodes and recorrect. The potential here is spectacular.
This is a very exciting read, and it was very addicting to keep reading. The author did an amazing job with this story, and I could tell they worked very hard, so I really suggest reading this story
I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
This is a genuinely mind-grasping story! For anyone wondering they should read this or not, I can truly say that I've loved touching upon this.
Check out this novel! I really loved it! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
The battle system of this story is very unique and it is great seeing the progression of the Zeph's character but also his abilities which increases interest in the book.
With my review, you'll have ten. Then you can get your overall rating. Showing support here author! You have a very interesting plot in mind. With the old man rescuing and training the kid, you created a tinge of mystery with the boy's identity. I'm still in the initial chapters, and I'm looking forward for more. Great job with this author! Keep up the good work!
What an underrated story! Absolutely amazing. Its got above 50 chapters and the view count is surprisingly low. This book needs more recognition, like can we just talk about that banging first chapter!! Great work Author!
Wow! The narratives for this one is clear and easy to read. The MC has a unique persona the same with the other characters that's make them alive and enjoyable to read. The world background is written well. Overall this story is a great read plus it already has 70 plus chapters which is great for binge reading. Great Work author!
I'm actually really digging the story up to this point. Love the opening as a mysterious old man with some pretty wild powers apparently rescues a small child from a slaughter that claimed the lives of the child's parents. And then the child is trained in the old man's ways. Great stuff. Takes its time setting up the characters and the universe while slowly unveiling the greater plot. Writing is done well. Could use an edit here and there, but did not hamper my enjoyment of this at all. I see big things ahead for this author.
This novel was really inspiring! I only read few chapters and I am hooked! With few edits and finishing touches, this will leap higher with a realm higher. This really needs exposure and I hope the author will release more.
shameless review by author. Hello guys this novel is weak to strong mc journey novel. But don't worry not only we have mc but also other characters with their own background and story. You have to check one this out if you are fan of adventure and action series. I have given myself little less than 5 stars because honestly there are some typos in first 20 some chapters but this doesn't make any effect on your reading experience. Please give it a try and read till end to enjoy the story...... last but most important thing ..... HAPPY Reading:)
I like this book, it’s unique but still in a popular genre that is popular nowadays. I like the story development and the characters are likable.
Supporting you author....... .............................................................................. .....,.......................................................😊
DISGUSTING....................................................... .................................................. ...................................................... . ................................................ Kidding _ good job.
This book is a great find, character don't feel like they are forced to do stupid things for the sake of making the mc look good . The fact that there are multiple side stories of other main characters instead of switching POV every few chapters make them feel like they have their own lives outside that of the mc . And also author please answer this, what happened to his grandfather's katana, did he sell it or is it stored somewhere .
Well i like the summary as it didn't say amything abt the storyline or even name of the MC so i strted reading out of curiosity....but i must say it is a good storyline n the characters introduced so far that i hav read r not bad but it cud hav been better but the only downside for me is that there r too many grammatical errors n some of the sentences r also constructed incorrectly so it creates a litthle confusion....otherwise i like the storyline....i cant say anymore as i hav recently only strted this novel n read only dozens of chapters so after a bit more maybe i can give a new review
I liked at first but now dropped you are giving more chapters to side characters than zaph and after making his face bad looking i lost all Intrest in story You are not Giving anything to MC of worth watching him 1= he is Bad fighter 2= he don’t even have a body due to curse 3=before he had above average face but Now you even made him Ugly 4=more than him we got the story about his friends He made in guild Atleast give him something So we can look forward to watch him I really liked if he at least had his face good looking but you made even that worse
God bless the cons. ........................................................................................................................
Have just started and the quality of writing is very poor. Writing upfront in intro or comments that there are some issues with grammar is not enough. Writers need to be serious about their work and just having imagination is not good enough. Some tips: 1. Review your work multiple times before you post it. You will correct most of the issues yourself. This is especially for those who claim to be non native speakers/ writers of the language but can still decently frame the sentences. 2. Get an editor if you are lazy.
Don't know whether the people that wrote reviews on this novel have very low standards, or if they have never read an actual good book. Writing Quality The writing quality in this book is terrible. So many gramatical errors that it actually confuses me how the author didn't find anything wrong with it when he proofread it (hopefully he did). The writing quality makes it seem like the author doesn't care enough to actually fix them. Stability of Updates No problems here. Story development I mean, the story development in this novel is pretty good. I like the pacing of the story and that it is not too fast paced nor too slow. Character Design I don't have any complaints with this section either, I think the characters are well written and have their own personalites and goals. World backround Nothing special in this category, the world isn't described well, it's the epitomy of "average". Some advice for the author in this category, try to describe the mc's surroundings more. It just feels like you couldn't care less about giving us a world that we can imagine. Conclusion Below average. Those two words sums up everything I think of this novel. Don't get me wrong, I am not intending on bashing the author, but c'mon dude, you could atleast make it seem like you care about your work. There's so many grammatical errors where it seems like it was written by a fifth grader. I don't get how there are so many 5 star reviews on this novel, this is nowhere near perfect, very far from it actually. But whatever floats your boat I guess.
First of all I really like your book. Even tough english isn’t my strong point and m not qualified enough to criticize you But i’ll really appreciate it if you could Do some proof-reading ..
The yakshas (Sanskrit: यक्ष yakṣa; Pali: yakkha) are a broad class of nature-spirits, usually benevolent, but sometimes mischievous or capricious, connected with water, fertility, trees, the forest, treasure and wilderness
Reveal Spoiler Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
$115,500 Writing Contest, easy to enter. Join now, you can get paid by writing. DM me： Rebecca_661@outlook.com for more information or visit https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy (shorten URL to the contest page)
Not a fan of fantasy books but this synopsis .. .dang ! It got me hooked. Well, had to read it first before putting anything on the review section,as the all mighty author is too cunning to drag us to his chapters. .. Loved it. Waiting for more chappies. ..
The grammar makes the book borderline unreadable and takes away from the story. The story in itself seemed interesting but I can't make it past the second chapter
Una mierda, el abuelo lo retuvo y a los 18 alos es tan débil como la mierda, un niño que empezó a cultivar antes le puede ganar. Una mierda autor de mierda tu novela de mierda y vos SOS una mierda
Im going to say it....... this is good, reql good. Well done for overcoming the language barrier author. When you have time, go back to old episodes and recorrect. The potential here is spectacular.
This is a very exciting read, and it was very addicting to keep reading. The author did an amazing job with this story, and I could tell they worked very hard, so I really suggest reading this story
I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]
This is a genuinely mind-grasping story! For anyone wondering they should read this or not, I can truly say that I've loved touching upon this.
Check out this novel! I really loved it! :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
The battle system of this story is very unique and it is great seeing the progression of the Zeph's character but also his abilities which increases interest in the book.
With my review, you'll have ten. Then you can get your overall rating. Showing support here author! You have a very interesting plot in mind. With the old man rescuing and training the kid, you created a tinge of mystery with the boy's identity. I'm still in the initial chapters, and I'm looking forward for more. Great job with this author! Keep up the good work!
What an underrated story! Absolutely amazing. Its got above 50 chapters and the view count is surprisingly low. This book needs more recognition, like can we just talk about that banging first chapter!! Great work Author!
Wow! The narratives for this one is clear and easy to read. The MC has a unique persona the same with the other characters that's make them alive and enjoyable to read. The world background is written well. Overall this story is a great read plus it already has 70 plus chapters which is great for binge reading. Great Work author!
I'm actually really digging the story up to this point. Love the opening as a mysterious old man with some pretty wild powers apparently rescues a small child from a slaughter that claimed the lives of the child's parents. And then the child is trained in the old man's ways. Great stuff. Takes its time setting up the characters and the universe while slowly unveiling the greater plot. Writing is done well. Could use an edit here and there, but did not hamper my enjoyment of this at all. I see big things ahead for this author.
This novel was really inspiring! I only read few chapters and I am hooked! With few edits and finishing touches, this will leap higher with a realm higher. This really needs exposure and I hope the author will release more.
shameless review by author. Hello guys this novel is weak to strong mc journey novel. But don't worry not only we have mc but also other characters with their own background and story. You have to check one this out if you are fan of adventure and action series. I have given myself little less than 5 stars because honestly there are some typos in first 20 some chapters but this doesn't make any effect on your reading experience. Please give it a try and read till end to enjoy the story...... last but most important thing ..... HAPPY Reading:)
I like this book, it’s unique but still in a popular genre that is popular nowadays. I like the story development and the characters are likable.
Supporting you author....... .............................................................................. .....,.......................................................😊
DISGUSTING....................................................... .................................................. ...................................................... . ................................................ Kidding _ good job.
This book is a great find, character don't feel like they are forced to do stupid things for the sake of making the mc look good . The fact that there are multiple side stories of other main characters instead of switching POV every few chapters make them feel like they have their own lives outside that of the mc . And also author please answer this, what happened to his grandfather's katana, did he sell it or is it stored somewhere .