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So there's no world background ... . Character design/development is good.. . writing quality/style is bad like horrible bad.... it's readable but you can't understand what's happening ...(like: my name as a person is ysmiley. After going to job I left the keys there & in the house I have some books left to read ) . story development is meh, nothing is explained why what happened or anything for that matter 🤔.
It's pretty interesting and I'm liking it so far. Keep up the amazing work can't wait to see more of it in the future.......................
I give this book a big Meh cause I have no idea what’s even happening in it. It’s just going from one thing to the next with no explanation or context, its just kinda like, this happened, then this and now where talking about something totally unrelated to the situation now back to the story but what is the story?
So there's no world background ... . Character design/development is good.. . writing quality/style is bad like horrible bad.... it's readable but you can't understand what's happening ...(like: my name as a person is ysmiley. After going to job I left the keys there & in the house I have some books left to read ) . story development is meh, nothing is explained why what happened or anything for that matter 🤔.
It's pretty interesting and I'm liking it so far. Keep up the amazing work can't wait to see more of it in the future.......................
I give this book a big Meh cause I have no idea what’s even happening in it. It’s just going from one thing to the next with no explanation or context, its just kinda like, this happened, then this and now where talking about something totally unrelated to the situation now back to the story but what is the story?