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It has been 7 years since the first dungeon appeared. A place where the known natural law is rendered useless. A place where many dangers lurk. A place filled with opportunities.
This is a story about Luis Lassiter, an ordinary young man that tries to live his ordinary life. He works an ordinary job, and he sometimes explores the dungeon. There is nothing of importance, only an ordinary life. That is until the young man gets something that changes his life forever.
With the skill [Enchantment] that he obtained, this is the story of that young man.
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There are only 9 chapters released as I am writing this but because the chapters are a pretty decent length, and there are currently no reviews I feel that its a pretty unappreciated novel. Here are my thoughts: - The character design is really good and you can believe these are actual interactions between people, The same thing with the fight scenes they are not only really well described but the characters act realistically during them and even grow from each battle and talk about their strengths and weaknesses to best act. - The strength growth is realistic, its slow but steady and well described, although we don't yet have an idea about the average strength of strong humans, its really well explained how society is still mostly normal. - Very minimal spelling errors, the story is read very smoothly and any spelling error is easily overlooked definitely written better than a lot of the stuff on this site :P - **(little spoilery)** Its also well explained how society largely adapted to the changes and I like that even though the event happened 7 years ago in the story humans didn't immediately adapt and instead slowly learned and explored this entirely new concept, and you can still see humans actively learning new things about it and talking it and at the same time still see large areas of "new land" mapped out and maintained for the general people, I think all of the world design is really well done.
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