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Warhammer 40k : Space Marine Kayvaan
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Horus’s betrayal was a cataclysmic event that forever changed the fate of the Imperium of Mankind. After this tragedy, our protagonist wakes up in this world—inside the body of a Space Marine. By a twist of fate, he not only gains permission to create his own Space Marine Chapter but also discovers that his new body, once belonging to Kayvaan, comes with an incredible inheritance: control over three star systems. With his Chapter and newfound power, he must navigate the treacherous politics of the Imperium and the constant threats from xenos, Chaos, and heretics, all while carving out his legacy in this grimdark galaxy.
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The story premise is good. Execution needs work. Chapters need serious combing through to fix mistakes. Mistakes like calling the Adeptus Custodes , the imperial guard. Or calling space marine chapters , star marine corps. This might also just be a translation for all we know.
It's been a while since I read a story like this, the progression is satisfactory and it seems realistic enough I suppose. I believe this story is worth reading, it just depends on your taste. My only downside is that there are few chapters (22 at the time of writing this review).
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Read to chapter 40. After the nonsense about a normal human being a chapter master, can’t wear power amour and can only be a scout, it just doesn’t make sense to keep reading
While it is a really good concept the execution is bad, not to the point of the story begin impossible to read but simply really bad. It has some jarrin problems that go from getting cofused betwen the difference of galaxy and star sistem to saying the protagonist is weak but then flipping a space marine over him like a judo master. Making the story difficult to read if you care about good structure and logic between things said in the book. Overrall great if you want to read simply for the sake of it ,but if not there are better things out there. This isn't to say that if the autor rereads his story and rewrites some paraghraps it will become a story worthy of reading.
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I love everything Warhammer 40k, and the dynamic between Sub-Sector Governors and a Space Marine Chapter Master is a compelling concept. For such a story to truly resonate, the Chapter Master must possess a strong and pure gene seed
je dois dire qu'une des meilleures choses avec cette série c'est l'écriture des personnages qui est différent des autre fic warhammer ou il ne font que crier gloire a l'empereur et ont juste l'air d'idiot fanatique ici il y a de la nuance et on sait qu'il le dise seulement pour pas être tue par l'inquisition
This is but another story in which an earthling is put in warhammer 40k Where he wants to inject human rights into the imperium and doesn’t like fighting. The mc has been nerfed dramatically listen to this and see if it makes sense. The main character possesses the body of a space marine but do to a curse the body reverts to pre augmentation Now mc has amazing fighting abilities but no body to actually be strong. The main character although having his body reverted only has Internal injuries that doesn’t let him have any sort of modification FOR NO REASON WHATSOEVER. Author just wants to nerf mc so that he never fights on the front lines.