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She was one of the people that have experienced a lack of love, affection, and attention from her parents.
She worked hard to gain those three words, she yearns for parental love but she later discovered it was all useless. Life had no meaning to her, the one that keeps her alive was her friend.
She and her friend got into a fight involving gangsters. That night was her last breath and so is the last breath of her friend.
She woke up, her eyes were blurry, she wasn't able to control her body, she tried to speak but cries came out of her mouth.
She tried to stand up but can't control her body. She thought she was rebirth but later think of her thought ridiculous and thought of everything was a dream. She fell asleep and it confirmed that she was rebirth!
A new start for her! New life, new people, new environment, and most importantly a new family.
Will she be able to have a good relationship with her parents this time?
How will she form a bond with them?
Do you think she'll adjust to this new environment?
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So far so good 😊 the world building needs some work but it’s ok I’ve seen worse. The grammar and structure of sentences needs some help but I don’t know if english is your first language if not then understandable why the grammar a little wonky. Your putting of commas and qutation needs some work as well. Overall this book have potential its a diamond in the rough and needs polishing to make it a good book thats unforgettable😗 Oh the synopsis also needs to give us a clear understanding of what we are going to read so I advise you to fix the synopsis to help the readers better understand what there going to read. The picture if you want to know is made by @Flower_poya (that’s her insta) so if you want her to make a cover there you go her info. I’ll give a 4.5 rating since I see a lot of potential for this book you just need some advice and guidance to get there😁 Ok im done ya’ll I hope you update more since do really like this story👍🏽