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one of the best novel I have read since I have quite liking to this type of novels its just damn good I highly recommend it to every one to read it
Ok so as of right now I have finally reach the latest chapter. Now this is an honest review of season 1 and 2 together. First and foremost, The Mc. Now if their is one thing I hate and see alot of in this supernatural genre or dark fantasy novel is that everyone is unique beside the mc, as the mc is too kind or just bland over all. Now I can't believe I am saying this but Merciless is by far one of the most coldest charcther I have seen on webnovel, the dude is just likeable and fun read. His power are insane too, bro is basically Alex Mercer, or Muzan on steroids. Or Ben ten without the Omnitrix, or Rimuru without ciel. But all in all Mc gets 8.4/10. If you like an Mc with unique powers as weird as Jojo bizarre adventure, Merciless is for you, his Shapshifting is just OD. Pacing. Ohhhh god, well this might be a hit or miss for you all, but give how thick and massive this world is especially how amazing the lore is, you come to ignore it. Although author when he does his time skip, is really good at it. They dont feel force or bland. It's just that it can be a massive no-no for you for most of the story if you pay too much to it. All in all in give the pacing 6.2/10. It's not great, horrible even but I see improvement, so for now I will low rating. Charcthers. One of it strongest factors, vwob has alot charcther, each chapter being 3-4 webnovel chapters long at least, it should have over a 100+ charcther by now and none of them are imitation of the others. It's hard even for me to pick which one I like cause all of them are unique in their own right. This is one of few novel that show side charcthers love. As such it gets 9.3/10 for me. World building. This wow, hehehe.... I'm someone that likes lore and world building and if it is one thing vwob doesn't lack it's lore. My god I can't begin to explain how amazing the lore is, the best way to describe it would be to put on the same light as a soul game in terms of lore. It's just that good, although this is just my opinion so I will give it a 9.9/10 All in all, this a top tier story, it's just pacing at first that was kind of turn off, and if your into op shit then this story is busted asf.
I really like Merciless as the main character. He's dark, powerful, and keeps you hooked with his ruthless nature. But this has slow pacing, like really slow, currently were I am it's fixed, and normal, but the author is new so I made it slide. But man it has insane world building, and the fight are detailed asf, especially given how long each chapter is.
I liked the novel but at least if it wasn't a mix of romance and Dark romance. Other than that it's very good 👌😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Wow! Just wow!! I honestly don't know what to say, I have read a lot of op books that turn out to be absolute waste of time, but this was a unique experience on its own. Merciless is a very interesting character, he is true to his name, the power system is insane like I thought MTW vampires were op, nah current Victor doesn't a chance even to the weakest progenitor in this verse, honestly this story is amazing slight warning though it mostly lore and action and the action is god tier given the unique power system, but I will say this, I came for the smut (none as yet) but stayed for the story.
This story has a good concept and world building as well as some interesting characters. The biggest issue is the writing quality and just the slow development that occurs due to the writing. The author, at least for the majority of volume 1, is constantly info dumping during dialogue. This makes what would usually be a very interesting story a massive slog to read through. I want to enjoy this and read it but the constant unnecessary info dumps or the massive paragraphs of the MC repeating his motive that we already know every chapter is very annoying. Another thing that set me off was when the character just randomly decided to use a bunch of money to mess with the church. This action was then praised by his butler but to me this just seemed super petty and unimportant to the people he is trying to mess with. Overall: Again the world is very interesting and it is very clear that the author is very proud of it. The issue is he wants to show off as much of the world as soon as possible which is ruining the pacing of the story in the beginning puts me and probably others as well off of the novel.
Pretty good novel. Vampires in this novel are truly EXTREMELY powerful. tho i will say this. This novel does bombard with a lot of info and has big paragraphs of pure info dump so depending on if u like proper explanation of powers or just small mention it may be hit or miss for you. This novel is already multiverse level with just sub 40 chapters. Tho its done pretty well. it does explain how things work out so overall it is very gud.
This is pure GOLD!!! I can't stretch enough on how much, I am loving this novel. The world introduction and power explanation are amazing, Gives the general idea without spoiling too much. The first chapters don't feel like info dumps, The author seems to have a clear idea on what he wants, and a clear path, he wants to characters to go. Hope this gold doesn't get dropped like all the good novels. Excited for the future of this novel, it has a lot of potential, best of luck Author!
This novel gives a unique view on vampires with amazing world background that is mixed with many different mythology’s and stories. And although it is updated slowly when each new chapter comes out I feel like it’s worth it. With this Chaotic and infectious main character. I hope this novel goes far
Love the story so far, can only wait for more chapters ! Love the way you choose a male butler over the overly used ''maid''. Please continue to write the story and please keep going in the same way it is.
I can't stress this enough, im a huge fan of The World of Darkness, my entire childhood, in a nutshell, is Wod, come on if you haven't played Bloodlines then you are missing out on peak vampire storytelling. Honestly, I took a lot of motivation from it to make this original, which is more complex vampire-wise in terms of details, oh it's a harem but doesn't expect every character to be female like in other stories, like my god I hate setups like that, we need balanced brotherly love as well, and yes Mc is an avid believer of gender equality.
Making this review based of volume 1 alone. I give this book 4 to 4.5 stars. i personally do like this novel quite a lot but the dialogs between character do need improvement. You will notice that characters speak quite a lot to be consider to be a healthy conversation between two characters. 70 to 80 percent of the time the dialogs are glorified info dumps for readers but just learn how to pa* through crucial information and it will be fine. mc is pretty good, he is batsht cruel and very cunning to say the least and given the sneak peak we got for what's gonna happen in volume 2 and 3, i can say mc will become strong really fast so if u like op mc then you will like this. but do keep in mind, when i say op mc i mean in a very loose sense coz you will know just how vast the world is very early on (chapter 17-18) so in the grand scheme of things, he is not stupidly strong or anything. all most all the characters can pretty much obliterate mc is a normal one vs one fight were to happen as mc himself is only 2 days old since becoming a vampire so yea, he has a lot to grow and has really obnoxiously strong abilities which used correctly will put him in the upmost strongest character in all of stories as whole (that is if author does continue with the story which i am not taking any guarantee for haha). the vampires in this world are pure evil and so is mc, so if don't like setting like those, please do yourself a favor and not read it its not for the kind souls out their. (read the extra chapters for more details). the world and how vast this novel verse is explained in details while author has kept a lot of information hidden for later date but with what's told. I will give you a general gist for what i understood personally. mc lives in a universe which has 16-d (aka 16 layers of 'bigger infinity' then previous ones) so in general vs battle terminology, his base universe is a 1-b structure on its own. And there are infinite number of universes inside one omniverse (yes that one from marvel). And there are infinite number of omniverses inside one 'seed' (yes a seed of any fruit for imagination) and there are infinite seeds inside a single fruit. Now there are uncountable infinite number of fruits that are connected to the 'tree of knowledge' (imagine any universal tree which is structurally so 'large' that you cannot even possibly count the sheer amount of fruits that tree has). So what i am saying is, this verse is maive. And i thought the author of 'instant death' was high on drugs but this author here just make him look like a pleb. So anyway with a world so vast and mc having boundless potential all i can say is i expect mc to grow to probably the strongest if not one of the strongest mc known in any novel ever. overall i like it and do recommend it to anyone who got even slightest bit interested while reading the review. and hopefully this series will continue and not get dropped or deleted.
one of the best novel I have read since I have quite liking to this type of novels its just damn good I highly recommend it to every one to read it
Ok so as of right now I have finally reach the latest chapter. Now this is an honest review of season 1 and 2 together. First and foremost, The Mc. Now if their is one thing I hate and see alot of in this supernatural genre or dark fantasy novel is that everyone is unique beside the mc, as the mc is too kind or just bland over all. Now I can't believe I am saying this but Merciless is by far one of the most coldest charcther I have seen on webnovel, the dude is just likeable and fun read. His power are insane too, bro is basically Alex Mercer, or Muzan on steroids. Or Ben ten without the Omnitrix, or Rimuru without ciel. But all in all Mc gets 8.4/10. If you like an Mc with unique powers as weird as Jojo bizarre adventure, Merciless is for you, his Shapshifting is just OD. Pacing. Ohhhh god, well this might be a hit or miss for you all, but give how thick and massive this world is especially how amazing the lore is, you come to ignore it. Although author when he does his time skip, is really good at it. They dont feel force or bland. It's just that it can be a massive no-no for you for most of the story if you pay too much to it. All in all in give the pacing 6.2/10. It's not great, horrible even but I see improvement, so for now I will low rating. Charcthers. One of it strongest factors, vwob has alot charcther, each chapter being 3-4 webnovel chapters long at least, it should have over a 100+ charcther by now and none of them are imitation of the others. It's hard even for me to pick which one I like cause all of them are unique in their own right. This is one of few novel that show side charcthers love. As such it gets 9.3/10 for me. World building. This wow, hehehe.... I'm someone that likes lore and world building and if it is one thing vwob doesn't lack it's lore. My god I can't begin to explain how amazing the lore is, the best way to describe it would be to put on the same light as a soul game in terms of lore. It's just that good, although this is just my opinion so I will give it a 9.9/10 All in all, this a top tier story, it's just pacing at first that was kind of turn off, and if your into op shit then this story is busted asf.
I really like Merciless as the main character. He's dark, powerful, and keeps you hooked with his ruthless nature. But this has slow pacing, like really slow, currently were I am it's fixed, and normal, but the author is new so I made it slide. But man it has insane world building, and the fight are detailed asf, especially given how long each chapter is.
I liked the novel but at least if it wasn't a mix of romance and Dark romance. Other than that it's very good 👌😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
Wow! Just wow!! I honestly don't know what to say, I have read a lot of op books that turn out to be absolute waste of time, but this was a unique experience on its own. Merciless is a very interesting character, he is true to his name, the power system is insane like I thought MTW vampires were op, nah current Victor doesn't a chance even to the weakest progenitor in this verse, honestly this story is amazing slight warning though it mostly lore and action and the action is god tier given the unique power system, but I will say this, I came for the smut (none as yet) but stayed for the story.
This story has a good concept and world building as well as some interesting characters. The biggest issue is the writing quality and just the slow development that occurs due to the writing. The author, at least for the majority of volume 1, is constantly info dumping during dialogue. This makes what would usually be a very interesting story a massive slog to read through. I want to enjoy this and read it but the constant unnecessary info dumps or the massive paragraphs of the MC repeating his motive that we already know every chapter is very annoying. Another thing that set me off was when the character just randomly decided to use a bunch of money to mess with the church. This action was then praised by his butler but to me this just seemed super petty and unimportant to the people he is trying to mess with. Overall: Again the world is very interesting and it is very clear that the author is very proud of it. The issue is he wants to show off as much of the world as soon as possible which is ruining the pacing of the story in the beginning puts me and probably others as well off of the novel.
Pretty good novel. Vampires in this novel are truly EXTREMELY powerful. tho i will say this. This novel does bombard with a lot of info and has big paragraphs of pure info dump so depending on if u like proper explanation of powers or just small mention it may be hit or miss for you. This novel is already multiverse level with just sub 40 chapters. Tho its done pretty well. it does explain how things work out so overall it is very gud.
This is pure GOLD!!! I can't stretch enough on how much, I am loving this novel. The world introduction and power explanation are amazing, Gives the general idea without spoiling too much. The first chapters don't feel like info dumps, The author seems to have a clear idea on what he wants, and a clear path, he wants to characters to go. Hope this gold doesn't get dropped like all the good novels. Excited for the future of this novel, it has a lot of potential, best of luck Author!
This novel gives a unique view on vampires with amazing world background that is mixed with many different mythology’s and stories. And although it is updated slowly when each new chapter comes out I feel like it’s worth it. With this Chaotic and infectious main character. I hope this novel goes far
Love the story so far, can only wait for more chapters ! Love the way you choose a male butler over the overly used ''maid''. Please continue to write the story and please keep going in the same way it is.
I can't stress this enough, im a huge fan of The World of Darkness, my entire childhood, in a nutshell, is Wod, come on if you haven't played Bloodlines then you are missing out on peak vampire storytelling. Honestly, I took a lot of motivation from it to make this original, which is more complex vampire-wise in terms of details, oh it's a harem but doesn't expect every character to be female like in other stories, like my god I hate setups like that, we need balanced brotherly love as well, and yes Mc is an avid believer of gender equality.
Making this review based of volume 1 alone. I give this book 4 to 4.5 stars. i personally do like this novel quite a lot but the dialogs between character do need improvement. You will notice that characters speak quite a lot to be consider to be a healthy conversation between two characters. 70 to 80 percent of the time the dialogs are glorified info dumps for readers but just learn how to pa* through crucial information and it will be fine. mc is pretty good, he is batsht cruel and very cunning to say the least and given the sneak peak we got for what's gonna happen in volume 2 and 3, i can say mc will become strong really fast so if u like op mc then you will like this. but do keep in mind, when i say op mc i mean in a very loose sense coz you will know just how vast the world is very early on (chapter 17-18) so in the grand scheme of things, he is not stupidly strong or anything. all most all the characters can pretty much obliterate mc is a normal one vs one fight were to happen as mc himself is only 2 days old since becoming a vampire so yea, he has a lot to grow and has really obnoxiously strong abilities which used correctly will put him in the upmost strongest character in all of stories as whole (that is if author does continue with the story which i am not taking any guarantee for haha). the vampires in this world are pure evil and so is mc, so if don't like setting like those, please do yourself a favor and not read it its not for the kind souls out their. (read the extra chapters for more details). the world and how vast this novel verse is explained in details while author has kept a lot of information hidden for later date but with what's told. I will give you a general gist for what i understood personally. mc lives in a universe which has 16-d (aka 16 layers of 'bigger infinity' then previous ones) so in general vs battle terminology, his base universe is a 1-b structure on its own. And there are infinite number of universes inside one omniverse (yes that one from marvel). And there are infinite number of omniverses inside one 'seed' (yes a seed of any fruit for imagination) and there are infinite seeds inside a single fruit. Now there are uncountable infinite number of fruits that are connected to the 'tree of knowledge' (imagine any universal tree which is structurally so 'large' that you cannot even possibly count the sheer amount of fruits that tree has). So what i am saying is, this verse is maive. And i thought the author of 'instant death' was high on drugs but this author here just make him look like a pleb. So anyway with a world so vast and mc having boundless potential all i can say is i expect mc to grow to probably the strongest if not one of the strongest mc known in any novel ever. overall i like it and do recommend it to anyone who got even slightest bit interested while reading the review. and hopefully this series will continue and not get dropped or deleted.