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I am loving this story and waiting for more chapters. As a beginner author, you are good, but I think you need to improve your writing quality a little more. I am lovin it.
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Sorry if there are any mistakes, english is not my mother tongue. Otherwise I really like this story. I like that the LF is badass, her character (brittle but strong), that she has a loving family. I also like the LM, I find it has a well-developed personality. What I dislike that there are too many characters, personally I have not yet remembered all the names of the family. I also find that there is not enough villain at the height of the LF and the LM, even his uncle and his cousin I have the impression that they will quickly be resolved.