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Ok read the whole thing. Pretty good the early premis was quite fun, the story stayed mostly stable till close to the end even with the rank inflation that always shows up n these stories. The author did “finish” the book but considering all the loose ends it’s more like wrote a ending to the book. Techincally. Guess it could be set for a sequel, but unless that happens I had to take a star off of the story for the unsatisfying way it ended. Not much better than a “ well we are out of time so let’s end this with a he crushed he big boss and they lived happily ever after the end.” And no that’s not the actual ending…. Though it is close.
I like this webnovel not because it's kind of generic into/basic plot line. but because the way the author writes it. there is no consistent petty misunderstandings or the FML getting kidnapped every other chapter. yes the MC does run into problems. there are fights, face slapping and kidnappings. but after it gets resolved you get time to see the characters develop in their roles, relationships and their family. anyway the only reason I put 4 stars on translation is due to the constant gender swapping of she/he that kind of thing. it's a little more annoying when you are just meeting a character or it's been a while since you've seen them.
this novel is so well translated . the best in recent days . i have been searching for something new and found this novel .❤️❤️
(ignore the star rating I hate the way webnovel rates books) this book is just a good time. I've always enjoyed the trope a of adorable character A being unconditionally backed be scary strong character B and that's basically what this is. it's great. BUT 1 I don't like the daughter's mother/MC supposed wife. she seems intentionally unlikeable and sometimes makes life harder for not only the MC but also their daughter AND herself. simply because of a decision she made on her own and now blames the MC for. it's infuriating.
wow translator have thick skin huh? imagine only 14 chapters free. u were just copy pasting it.
It's unfortunate, I wanted to like it, but the translation quality is horrible. Either everyone has three different names or random new characters pop out with no background and fade to black just as quickly. Also the cute daughter turns into a son many times. Read to chpt 44, enjoy the stones and get an editor or at a minimum put up a half hearted effort towards the translation.
i commend the author's guts for only giving 14 free chapters for a rip off novel. a copy paste of godly stay-home dad novel.
Translation quality: 0 Chinese names, Chinese phrases, Chinese words. The story is chinese Supremacy [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
for the first time i read a novel about an immortal emperor being reborn but got addicted to it is this a translated mtl novel ??
The entire novel is cliche. It’s basically paint by numbers, to the point that there’s absolutely no entertainment in reading it if you’ve ever read an “immortal is reborn on earth” novel. The FL starts out particularly obnoxious. She had a one night stand with the MC, then disappeared off to America and completely ditched him for five years. Then she has the audacity to blame him for not being a father to their daughter. Seriously, the hell is wrong with authors who write that garbage? On top of that, the sheer number of misunderstandings caused by the MC’s absolute refusal to ever say anything at all (because the five directions heavenly emperor never explains himself) makes for extremely forced plots and pointless drama. Then there’s a bunch of dropped plot threads holding everything together in one big tangled skein of yarn. Overall, don’t waste coins on this garbage. There are much better novels in the same vein that have actually been completed, not just hastily wrapped up because the author got bored.
Ok read the whole thing. Pretty good the early premis was quite fun, the story stayed mostly stable till close to the end even with the rank inflation that always shows up n these stories. The author did “finish” the book but considering all the loose ends it’s more like wrote a ending to the book. Techincally. Guess it could be set for a sequel, but unless that happens I had to take a star off of the story for the unsatisfying way it ended. Not much better than a “ well we are out of time so let’s end this with a he crushed he big boss and they lived happily ever after the end.” And no that’s not the actual ending…. Though it is close.
I like this webnovel not because it's kind of generic into/basic plot line. but because the way the author writes it. there is no consistent petty misunderstandings or the FML getting kidnapped every other chapter. yes the MC does run into problems. there are fights, face slapping and kidnappings. but after it gets resolved you get time to see the characters develop in their roles, relationships and their family. anyway the only reason I put 4 stars on translation is due to the constant gender swapping of she/he that kind of thing. it's a little more annoying when you are just meeting a character or it's been a while since you've seen them.
this novel is so well translated . the best in recent days . i have been searching for something new and found this novel .❤️❤️
(ignore the star rating I hate the way webnovel rates books) this book is just a good time. I've always enjoyed the trope a of adorable character A being unconditionally backed be scary strong character B and that's basically what this is. it's great. BUT 1 I don't like the daughter's mother/MC supposed wife. she seems intentionally unlikeable and sometimes makes life harder for not only the MC but also their daughter AND herself. simply because of a decision she made on her own and now blames the MC for. it's infuriating.
wow translator have thick skin huh? imagine only 14 chapters free. u were just copy pasting it.
It's unfortunate, I wanted to like it, but the translation quality is horrible. Either everyone has three different names or random new characters pop out with no background and fade to black just as quickly. Also the cute daughter turns into a son many times. Read to chpt 44, enjoy the stones and get an editor or at a minimum put up a half hearted effort towards the translation.
i commend the author's guts for only giving 14 free chapters for a rip off novel. a copy paste of godly stay-home dad novel.
Translation quality: 0 Chinese names, Chinese phrases, Chinese words. The story is chinese Supremacy [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
for the first time i read a novel about an immortal emperor being reborn but got addicted to it is this a translated mtl novel ??
The entire novel is cliche. It’s basically paint by numbers, to the point that there’s absolutely no entertainment in reading it if you’ve ever read an “immortal is reborn on earth” novel. The FL starts out particularly obnoxious. She had a one night stand with the MC, then disappeared off to America and completely ditched him for five years. Then she has the audacity to blame him for not being a father to their daughter. Seriously, the hell is wrong with authors who write that garbage? On top of that, the sheer number of misunderstandings caused by the MC’s absolute refusal to ever say anything at all (because the five directions heavenly emperor never explains himself) makes for extremely forced plots and pointless drama. Then there’s a bunch of dropped plot threads holding everything together in one big tangled skein of yarn. Overall, don’t waste coins on this garbage. There are much better novels in the same vein that have actually been completed, not just hastily wrapped up because the author got bored.