Reviews of Unwanted Love: The Pale of Moonlight by liyanpark1013 - Webnovel

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4.97

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liyanpark1013

It's not for me to review my own novel but I just want to give some points about this novel. This is the first time I made novel in 3rd POV so please bear with me. If there's some mistakes, don't hesitate to leave a comment and tell me so I could edit it right away. Also, this story I created was heavy drama but not all the time! I'll balance it out and put some fluff scenes so it's not a morbid story. Anyways, I relate this story from a true story but most of it are fictional. Thank you for passing by and add my novel to your library! Giving powerstone might support me! I love you all!

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NobleRemmy

I am really enjoying your book..I like how it's to the point. as well as the character's interactions. I am hooked! an awesome job there. I guess you just got yourself a fan 😊 👍 👍

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IshaMalala

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LaidaJessica

I need more! please update more! cant wait!

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KV_Cleo

Your story is so interesting! I love your plot as well as the characters. Please continue to update more 😍😍 can't wait for the next chapters 🥰🥰🥰🥰

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AJONAFXX

The story is beautiful and I still want to read more chapters. Is this a tragic ending? I hope not author!! I hope you update more chapters so I can readm more and more!!

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Darkswan

The story background is great and so are your characters, i love them, your writing skill is good too and so is the story outline, i hope to see more chaps from you soon, keep up the good wrk author.

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Draejon
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Hmm....good storyline...better update more chapters so I have plenty to read and find out more ............................................

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yoon_yoon5

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CrumbleKy

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RettiAma

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InDiMan

This story was good! it hooked my interest so keep up the good work! but the update please update more so it couldnt have any cliff hang! hope you could update

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caichii

I love your writing style. and the book is amazing. this is eventually a good one, keep up the good work! you're doing great! definitely a 10/10 for me!

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liyanpark1013

It's not for me to review my own novel but I just want to give some points about this novel. This is the first time I made novel in 3rd POV so please bear with me. If there's some mistakes, don't hesitate to leave a comment and tell me so I could edit it right away. Also, this story I created was heavy drama but not all the time! I'll balance it out and put some fluff scenes so it's not a morbid story. Anyways, I relate this story from a true story but most of it are fictional. Thank you for passing by and add my novel to your library! Giving powerstone might support me! I love you all!

3yr
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NobleRemmy

I am really enjoying your book..I like how it's to the point. as well as the character's interactions. I am hooked! an awesome job there. I guess you just got yourself a fan 😊 👍 👍

2yr
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IshaMalala

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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LaidaJessica

I need more! please update more! cant wait!

2yr
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KV_Cleo

Your story is so interesting! I love your plot as well as the characters. Please continue to update more 😍😍 can't wait for the next chapters 🥰🥰🥰🥰

3yr
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AJONAFXX

The story is beautiful and I still want to read more chapters. Is this a tragic ending? I hope not author!! I hope you update more chapters so I can readm more and more!!

3yr
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Darkswan

The story background is great and so are your characters, i love them, your writing skill is good too and so is the story outline, i hope to see more chaps from you soon, keep up the good wrk author.

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Draejon
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Hmm....good storyline...better update more chapters so I have plenty to read and find out more ............................................

3yr
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yoon_yoon5

love this novel! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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CrumbleKy

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RettiAma

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InDiMan

This story was good! it hooked my interest so keep up the good work! but the update please update more so it couldnt have any cliff hang! hope you could update

3yr
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caichii

I love your writing style. and the book is amazing. this is eventually a good one, keep up the good work! you're doing great! definitely a 10/10 for me!

3yr
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