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Ken kishi was going home from work when he heard a loud noise and then darkness
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So far it's great it's so hard to find a story like this and for it to be good too. Can I make naruto smart or something and could you go to bleach and one piece that would be so cool.
I don't get it what the people think when give this novel wannabe 5 star,the structure is a mess, you will confuse between the mc monologue or dialogue between the characters, MC too OP in nonsense manner he is the OP baby in NarutoVerse, till this point the story is meh, you don't believe me? Try read it for the first 3 chapters and voila a headache. Although i appreciate your passion to write something , atleast you need the basics knowledge for it man,1 Star for your passion.
5 starrrr for the effort and bravery.. Ill review once Im finished reading it.😄 DingdongDingdongDingdongDingdongDingdongDingdongDingdong O **** iam a trash reviewer now....
Where you sleeping when you wrote this?! Or were you using your legs? It's horrible mate, I lose neurons just with each chapter I read, and I read them all...
unlimited wishes in naruto world, makes for a boring concept. grammar is bad and the one thing content wise i can't get over is his height he wished to be 165cm(about 5 feet 4 in). who wishes to be 165 as a guy? this is wish fulfillment literally.
The grammatical errors almost make it completely impossible to read and the story is quite poorly written as well. Now, don't come at me saying "You can't do it better yourself", because I am not interested in writing although I believe I could produce something better than this. Sorry Author, the concept is kind of okay I guess, but you wouldn't be able to make much more than 60 chapters because everything would become extremely repetitive due to our MC literally being a god.
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Muito bom a novel recomendo à todos a acompanhar, não vão se arrepender. ........................................................................................
Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad. Its bad.
Bro.. Plss add more chapters.. Its good.. Yeah and pless keep up d good work.. 😇... The grammer needs to be a little better.. Yeahh.. And i hope you take ou mc in Soul land 4... Hihii.. It would b fun..
I'll be honest, it's not the best. The premise is really good but I think the author went a little overboard. The MC became a god basically as soon as he was born so there was no chance for any conflict from the start, which would be fine if there was something else to pull readers in like comedy or romance but there doesn't seem to be much of either. As of writing this review there are 7 chapters, near the end the MC starts to build a harem but it feels really forced and rushed which makes the romance feel flat. The MC basically proposes to someone in the same chapter he meets them. The dialogue is very confusing sometimes and it's kind of hard to tell who exactly is speaking to who. Another issue I have with the way it's written is the way that, for the earlier chapters, most of the chapter is taken up by the author listing all of the MC's abilities. I don't want to be too negative so I'll start to speak about what I like. I love isekai stories so as I said the premise was really interesting to me. I think the umlimited wishes thing could have worked if the author put some limits on what he could wish for and when. The author mentions travelling to other anime worlds which I would have loved to read about since it would be interesting if the MC brought together characters from different worlds. Overall, like I said at the start, it's not the best but you can see that the author cares about the anime they're writing about which is very nice to see. They more than likely wrote this because they're passionate about Naruto and wanted to share that with others.
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This **** is garbage. You never know who is talking or when they are talking and it has no development since he can just wish for whatever he wants. There is nothing intriguing about this since he doesnt have to work for anything.
Only one word can describe this: UNREADABLE! Were you even trying when you wrote? At least put some interest in your work... Well, whatever. Good luck with the next story.
TOO MANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!! FIX IT PLEASE.. AND PLEASE DON'T INCLUDE IN YOUR CHAPTERS ALL OF THE RINNEGAN PATHS OVER AND OVER AGAIN.. IT JUST TAKES TOO MUCH CHARACTERS AND SPACE.. OR ARE YOU DOING IT ON PURPOSE SO THAT YOU MET THE MINIMUM WORD REQUIREMENTS?