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What do you do when the first thing you remember after apparent reincarnation... are the steel bars of the prison coach, driving you off to an exile meant as just a fancy manner of execution?
Deprived of all the memories of this world and armed with nothing but high spirits, Theo found himself in the land where mythic-grade beasts reign supreme.
Thankfully, a reincarnation wouldn't be complete without a system! And what if his system... HAD SYSTEMS?!
"An SSS-Rank beast wants to kill me over some berries? Fine, let me drop a hundred tons worth of stone on its head!"
"Trains? Logistics? But do you know what a speeding train does to a body? Or hundreds of bodies, neatly stacked in formations for said trains to run over?!"
"It's not a waste of resources, it's a future-proof investment! And I'm too rich to run out of them anyway!"
Join in to follow Theo's path from nothing more than a monster's snack to the ruler of an industrial empire... an empire he built the proper way— from the ground up!
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Giving this a five star ⭐. The first chapter was enough to capture my attention and I'm not even into ml books but this...this got me hooked. The world building is already peak and the MC development is well described by the author, who knows what's his doing. The story is constantly updated and every damned chapter makes you anticipate the next. Definitely recommend this story and if you ever come across this story, it's a freaking gem 💎 💎 . Now!!, wtf are u waiting for, go read it!!
Awesome first few chaps! writing quality is great and I'm really liking the style. I have high hopes for this one! (I put 4 stars for background, update stability, character design, and story development as there's only a few chaps atm, but will update as time goes on. As of now, I'd say 4.5)
Going great so far with: - Stable update (though chapter length could be a bit more consistent).[img=update] - Excellent grammar (only one mistake in 25 chapters that i can find), simple sentence structure and simple vocabulary.[img=Your move] - Both characterization and world-building are quite limited considering the length of the novel so far.[img=Sigh] Looking forward to the progress our MC will be making after spending nearly 20chs trying to kill. Keep up the good work author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] p.s: What other games element are you planing to be added to the novel? (its ok if u dont want to spoil anything).
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It's a story with a lot of boring, meaningless, unnecessary monologues. My friend, decide first whether you are writing a poem or a story. This desire for poetic expression is like salt; if you add a little too much, it makes the food inedible. There's also some past life nonsense that breaks the immersion. The character died and was reborn, the event is over, why are you prolonging it? The reason for reading such stories is the person's desire to escape from reality. But you are spoiling the fun of those who want to forget reality even for a moment, don't do this. These are my recommendations, the subject is good, but unnecessary details and whining harm the story.