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Other than the horrible grammar and Engrish sentences, which only seem to get worse the longer it goes on, it isn't a terrible read. The end sucks. It just suddenly speeds up and then "the end", like they just got bored with writing it. Better than just abandoning it entirely at least, so, eh.
it wos perfect and thank you ππππππππ₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯².
Top marks for the authors works this one included. Honestly this author is almost as good as ein Lion but pumps out a lot more stuff haha xD as he is very skilled in making use of the narrative of other works and is only lacking slightly in building his own personas but given time.. this guy will go far!
Amazing πππ I love it. I love akikan new book. There are all amazing. Please π akikan make the To The Abandoned Sacred Beast. I love the anime, but the mc isn't good for me. I want you to make it, because the girls is hot. hahaha π
Gracias por tu dedicaciΓ³n, disfrute la lectura desde el capitulo 1 esta vez no te sucediΓ³ lo mismo que con raizer, aprendiste a llevar mucho mejor la historia sin ser obviamente repetitivo, Γ©xitos y espero tus nuevos proyectos.
Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.
A good fanfic Nothing exeptional but a good read If you got nothing else to read Give it a try
Simplemente una obra maestra este fanfic mis palabras no pueden describir toda la esencia de esta novela 100% recomendable esperando que el autor suba otras historias como esta para leerlas Si ven esto dejen un comentario para no olvidar esta obra
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Honestly, this is one of the worst protagonists I've ever read in my life, I regret wasting my time reading this, this good person thing is shit, it's better for him to simply be a good person, bad, normal or neutral, instead of this aberration that was made here.
Donβt waste your time reading it. MC thinks from his lower brain most of the time.
It's not Akikan's best work, but I like it and it's very entertaining. Maybe many people don't like it because the interactions are more superficial, but as far as I'm concerned it fulfills the objective of being entertaining and fun. Not all novels can be masterpieces. Thank you Akikan-san for your efforts, one of, if not the best fanfic writer I've ever seen in my life and I'm glad you keep working to bring us these beautiful works.
In short Holy Mother .πππππππππππππππππππππππ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... .... .....
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Author i love your all novel, but you make him like married woman but i hope you make him to have virgin girls like myuki.ok thanks for everything.
El personaje es insufrible, es una historia hentai y de coleccion de mujeres. El ultimo capΓtulo que leΓ es aΓΊn mas incoherente. Para el que quiera leerlo... deje sus neuronas de lado y disfrute.
This fanfic is just trash I like dxd fanfic vary much So write something like that please write from this anime world * miss Kobayashi's dragon maid *The Devil is a Part-Timer! *Oshi no ko *Food Wars *Tensura *Jujutsu Kaisen *Overload *Black Clover *In Another World With My Smart phone *The Eminence in Shadow *The Rising of the Shield Hero *misfit of demon king academy *Welcome to Demon School! Iruma-kun *Vermeil in Gold *Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation *Gushing over Magical Girls *Arifureta *GATE *KonoSuba *Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another world *Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic *Seraph of the End *The Vexations of a Shut-In Vampire Princess *Blood Lad *Farming Life in Another World *The Seven Deadly Sins *So I'm a Spider, So What? *Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor *I Was Reincarnated as the 7th Prince so I Can Take My Time Perfecting My Magical Ability *I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too *Tsukimichi -Moonlit Fantasy *My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me! *Villainess Level 99: I May Be the Hidden Boss but I'm Not the Demon Lord Romance anime *To Love-ru *Horimiya *Kaguya-sama: Love is War *Spy Classroom *Shikimori's Not Just a Cutie *Girlfriend, Girlfriend *Engage Kiss *Tomo-chan Is a Girl! *A Couple of Cuckoos *The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt *The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You *Hokkaido Gals Are Super Adorable! *The Angel Next Door Spoils Me Rotten *We Never Learn: BOKUBEN *In/Spectre *Banished From The Hero's Party, I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside *Masamune-kun's Revenge *Maoyu ~ Archenemy & Hero *ORESUKI Are you the only one who loves me? *Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World *Rent-a-Girlfriend *The Testament of Sister New Devil *Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle *The Detective Is Already Dead *Ladies versus Butlers *Mother of the Goddess' Dormitory *My Dress-Up Darling *Oh! My Goddess *Date A Live *The Quintessential Quintuplets *TONIKAWA: Over the Moon For You
This is a holy land for every member of the harem-sect to read and sing praises about. Akikan-san is a gentleman that understands the needs of 'gotta catch and love them all' And those who curse at mc... huh, patethic. You never understood the greatness of his ninja way. His compassion towards those poor widows, mothers, daugthers and wifes who need love. You curse at him, and yet wish to be on his shoes doing the same. 'Women would fall for him too easily'? Bullshit, mc takes the protagonist luck of every world he visits, coupled with and appearance copied from who knows how many gods that are known for their beauty and yet come with this bull*hit? Shameful display!
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Not enjoyable in the least. Mc got broken abilities like time control, gravity control, muzan regen, shiba tatsuya powers, breathing techniques, animal animal/ insect dna, every main characters power form failed knight, OFA powers, bakugo powers, and a lot more but author always finds some stupid reason to drag out fight or make me struggle agains building level opponents. Every chapter he preaches he wants to become a βgood personβ but sleeps with peopleβs wives. He always get talked into things because he wants to be a good person. Itβs like thatβs the only thing author can use to make minimal progress in the story. There is plenty more stuff I could tell about but I canβt bother. So if you like frustration and little to no satisfaction, this for you
Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Author i love this novel of your. Can you make him higher entity like Cthulhu etc.and make this a long novel. ..............................................................
Like any other akikan novel, it has a lot of info dumps after the starting few chapters.
Other than the horrible grammar and Engrish sentences, which only seem to get worse the longer it goes on, it isn't a terrible read. The end sucks. It just suddenly speeds up and then "the end", like they just got bored with writing it. Better than just abandoning it entirely at least, so, eh.
it wos perfect and thank you ππππππππ₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯²π₯².
Top marks for the authors works this one included. Honestly this author is almost as good as ein Lion but pumps out a lot more stuff haha xD as he is very skilled in making use of the narrative of other works and is only lacking slightly in building his own personas but given time.. this guy will go far!
Amazing πππ I love it. I love akikan new book. There are all amazing. Please π akikan make the To The Abandoned Sacred Beast. I love the anime, but the mc isn't good for me. I want you to make it, because the girls is hot. hahaha π
Gracias por tu dedicaciΓ³n, disfrute la lectura desde el capitulo 1 esta vez no te sucediΓ³ lo mismo que con raizer, aprendiste a llevar mucho mejor la historia sin ser obviamente repetitivo, Γ©xitos y espero tus nuevos proyectos.
Absolutely loved the story . As expected of akikkan . Though story ending is not author strong suite I can say that after reading all 6 of his novels through and till the end . And endings always being a little disappointing in his novels but if I have to say , The immersion and fun and thrill that author stories bring , do compensate for lacking ending . All in all I'm saying story was fantastic as always and I'm happy . Onces again thankyou for your fabulous work Akikkan.
A good fanfic Nothing exeptional but a good read If you got nothing else to read Give it a try
Simplemente una obra maestra este fanfic mis palabras no pueden describir toda la esencia de esta novela 100% recomendable esperando que el autor suba otras historias como esta para leerlas Si ven esto dejen un comentario para no olvidar esta obra
trash story trash everything ..............................................................................................................................
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Honestly, this is one of the worst protagonists I've ever read in my life, I regret wasting my time reading this, this good person thing is shit, it's better for him to simply be a good person, bad, normal or neutral, instead of this aberration that was made here.
Donβt waste your time reading it. MC thinks from his lower brain most of the time.
It's not Akikan's best work, but I like it and it's very entertaining. Maybe many people don't like it because the interactions are more superficial, but as far as I'm concerned it fulfills the objective of being entertaining and fun. Not all novels can be masterpieces. Thank you Akikan-san for your efforts, one of, if not the best fanfic writer I've ever seen in my life and I'm glad you keep working to bring us these beautiful works.
In short Holy Mother .πππππππππππππππππππππππ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... .... .....
Reveal Spoiler Author i love your all novel, but you make him like married woman but i hope you make him to have virgin girls like myuki.ok thanks for everything.
El personaje es insufrible, es una historia hentai y de coleccion de mujeres. El ultimo capΓtulo que leΓ es aΓΊn mas incoherente. Para el que quiera leerlo... deje sus neuronas de lado y disfrute.
This fanfic is just trash I like dxd fanfic vary much So write something like that please write from this anime world * miss Kobayashi's dragon maid *The Devil is a Part-Timer! *Oshi no ko *Food Wars *Tensura *Jujutsu Kaisen *Overload *Black Clover *In Another World With My Smart phone *The Eminence in Shadow *The Rising of the Shield Hero *misfit of demon king academy *Welcome to Demon School! Iruma-kun *Vermeil in Gold *Mushoku Tensei: Jobless Reincarnation *Gushing over Magical Girls *Arifureta *GATE *KonoSuba *Re:ZERO -Starting Life in Another world *Magi: The Labyrinth of Magic *Seraph of the End *The Vexations of a Shut-In Vampire Princess *Blood Lad *Farming Life in Another World *The Seven Deadly Sins *So I'm a Spider, So What? *Akashic Records of Bastard Magic Instructor *I Was Reincarnated as the 7th Prince so I Can Take My Time Perfecting My Magical Ability *I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too *Tsukimichi -Moonlit Fantasy *My Instant Death Ability is So Overpowered, No One in This Other World Stands a Chance Against Me! *Villainess Level 99: I May Be the Hidden Boss but I'm Not the Demon Lord Romance anime *To Love-ru *Horimiya *Kaguya-sama: Love is War *Spy Classroom *Shikimori's Not Just a Cutie *Girlfriend, Girlfriend *Engage Kiss *Tomo-chan Is a Girl! *A Couple of Cuckoos *The Genius Prince's Guide to Raising a Nation Out of Debt *The 100 Girlfriends Who Really, Really, Really, Really, Really Love You *Hokkaido Gals Are Super Adorable! *The Angel Next Door Spoils Me Rotten *We Never Learn: BOKUBEN *In/Spectre *Banished From The Hero's Party, I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside *Masamune-kun's Revenge *Maoyu ~ Archenemy & Hero *ORESUKI Are you the only one who loves me? *Our Last Crusade or the Rise of a New World *Rent-a-Girlfriend *The Testament of Sister New Devil *Undefeated Bahamut Chronicle *The Detective Is Already Dead *Ladies versus Butlers *Mother of the Goddess' Dormitory *My Dress-Up Darling *Oh! My Goddess *Date A Live *The Quintessential Quintuplets *TONIKAWA: Over the Moon For You
This is a holy land for every member of the harem-sect to read and sing praises about. Akikan-san is a gentleman that understands the needs of 'gotta catch and love them all' And those who curse at mc... huh, patethic. You never understood the greatness of his ninja way. His compassion towards those poor widows, mothers, daugthers and wifes who need love. You curse at him, and yet wish to be on his shoes doing the same. 'Women would fall for him too easily'? Bullshit, mc takes the protagonist luck of every world he visits, coupled with and appearance copied from who knows how many gods that are known for their beauty and yet come with this bull*hit? Shameful display!
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
Not enjoyable in the least. Mc got broken abilities like time control, gravity control, muzan regen, shiba tatsuya powers, breathing techniques, animal animal/ insect dna, every main characters power form failed knight, OFA powers, bakugo powers, and a lot more but author always finds some stupid reason to drag out fight or make me struggle agains building level opponents. Every chapter he preaches he wants to become a βgood personβ but sleeps with peopleβs wives. He always get talked into things because he wants to be a good person. Itβs like thatβs the only thing author can use to make minimal progress in the story. There is plenty more stuff I could tell about but I canβt bother. So if you like frustration and little to no satisfaction, this for you
Well Akikan san like I said, there's nothing bad about your story, but somehow the MC is getting more and more wrong. I feel like they're just people below the average of society, but given unreasonable powers, and made them hate the original main characters. I just feel MC Yuki is better, even though he stole Rias from Issei but it's not too dishonorable. but still, MC Haruka is better in my opinion.
Trash story, trash mc, trash character development, trash characters in general. MC is a complete idiot who the author makes a "genius" lowering the iq of the rest of the characters, he has it all granted (That orphan start was literally nothing), the women basically just throw themselves at him, just another garbage fanfic that nobody should read. Author has made a lot of fanfics and should have experience but always makes the same errors and even more. He tries to be a good character in an Apocalypse world by taking care of Bad guys when he should kill them. The main character of the shoes become dump and try to hurt mc but MC tries to save them since he wants to be a 'good' person. Its like those Iseki Japanese mc who are beta in every way but get girls because of plots otherwise they should have been dead. There are many plot hole and such like mc could threaten Politicians like those in higher ranks but did those politicians never think of killing him plus he says he is rich then if he knows that apocalypse is coming shouldn't he buy food using all his money cuz money is useless in an apocalyptic world. Don't waste ur time
Author i love this novel of your. Can you make him higher entity like Cthulhu etc.and make this a long novel. ..............................................................
Like any other akikan novel, it has a lot of info dumps after the starting few chapters.
A akikan fanfic never fails to not dissapoint you.