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This is one of the best fanfic I Had read about Naruto it's truly great till now
The villians are very straightforward, and their strategy to defeat MC is simple and not diabolical enough.In the latest episode, obito uses the word elucidate in his conversation with Danzo 2 times. (Ch 69) It feels like an AI wrote this. and there is no character evolution the character have the same thinking and personality with just more tricks
Love the writing style and how the story is developing. I just hope you keep releasing more chapters
Konoha elder bashing fic, arrogant mc who could back it up, somewhat cliche and hints of Chinese, but at the same time it isn't Chinese. mid but there are no other who updates regularly, so deal with it
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well this a very good fic and the story too is quite nice and people say mc is arrogant and all but mc is someone who knows what a true uchiha clan is so why not be proud of that
Great book like the MC ruthlessness. Usually I don’t like systems but this is one of the few I like. Especially since it’s simple and not OP right from the bat. Uploads are also consistent always a plus in my book! Keep up the good work.
Pretty good story with a Smart MC. MC also takes subordinates and is willing to train them which is something other fanfics don’t do The System is also pretty good nothing to overpowered and is instead simple and easy to understand
Sigh, this is unreadable. For starters, the MC is a edgy twelve year old Kage level fighter who thinks of himself to be the smartest and openly opposes everyone. Next, everyone else has the mentality and planning skills of a 4 year old child. Not a single person in this fanfic is worthy of being called a 'ninja'I'll tell how ridiculous the situation is - The 3rd Great Ninja War has started. Konoha is said to be attacked by everyone. But instead of giving their all in battle, Konoha Elders are trying to get the MC killed and sacrificing hundreds of Uchiha while MC's father kills Root ninjas. What a war plan. Just wow. Oh, and all the village elders are shown to be the epitome of evil. Senju clan? Killed by the elders. Uchiha clan? they have the same plans for them.The characterization doesn't match their canon personalities. The dialogues of the Village Elders also sound to be like of little children rather than of experience war-hardened ninjas. Oh, and a major part of the battles looks to be written by Chatgpt. And for some reason, the author switched from normal way of writing to showing 5 PoV in a single battle. Anyways, story is not worth reading unless you are looking to read something that would amuse you by how bad it is. PS : If Author reads this review, I hope he takes it as a challenge to not repeat idiosyncrasies as the above in his next book and actually put some work into making the characters realistic.
So far i like it.The main character does the right thing from my point of view.And the original idea of patriotism infuriates me.What is the point of kowtowing before danzo and hiruzen if you know for sure that they definitely won’t wish you well.
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I don’ know why, but I fell in love with the story instantly. The writing feels so smooth and the transitions between scenes are great. Please update quickly
good fan fic what makes it even better is that the mc ain't licking sarutobi's a*se
dropping. i guess you know why. the previous story was good though..................................................., ..................................................
I love this novel so pls don't change anything about it. Updates are great the grammar is ok. The concept of the novel is very intriguing an very well done. I have this saved in my library. Keep on writing because your are a great writer.
Quite intriguing and interesting this book has been especially Uchiha Karan and the way how he has trained his soldiers and picked the right people to be General's as well Shadow Guards impressed by way the Shadow Guards were able to hold there own against Orochimaru overall enjoyed reading this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Meh, I don't really like this one. Boring as f. Usual op Mc, no context to Main character's power. No training arc or anything instant op. Way too boring. King's system? Lol name sucks
Feels like I've seen a lot if Uchiha army building novels around lately. Like the rest of them, I'm not surprised that this one also failed. This author also has one other light novel with Bleach powered protagonist in Naruto, that one is actually really great and would recommend it.
I really enjoyed this and I hope you continue writing. And ignore the Fool that give bad reviews. , , , , , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,....
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😁👍👍 It have a good story/plot and good translate/word.. I like that MC/Karan is powerful enough to fight with Kage level ninja.. Hope he can change many thing, like Uchiha massacre, etc (please kill Danzo quickly, he's the source of Uchiha downfall).. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍
Completed it.. I quite enjoyed it, unfortunately it is unfinished and there is no sign of the author after 3 months. Someone lemme know if the author is gonna continue but for now, I’ll be taking this out of my library.
This is one of the best fanfic I Had read about Naruto it's truly great till now
The villians are very straightforward, and their strategy to defeat MC is simple and not diabolical enough.In the latest episode, obito uses the word elucidate in his conversation with Danzo 2 times. (Ch 69) It feels like an AI wrote this. and there is no character evolution the character have the same thinking and personality with just more tricks
Love the writing style and how the story is developing. I just hope you keep releasing more chapters
Konoha elder bashing fic, arrogant mc who could back it up, somewhat cliche and hints of Chinese, but at the same time it isn't Chinese. mid but there are no other who updates regularly, so deal with it
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well this a very good fic and the story too is quite nice and people say mc is arrogant and all but mc is someone who knows what a true uchiha clan is so why not be proud of that
Great book like the MC ruthlessness. Usually I don’t like systems but this is one of the few I like. Especially since it’s simple and not OP right from the bat. Uploads are also consistent always a plus in my book! Keep up the good work.
Pretty good story with a Smart MC. MC also takes subordinates and is willing to train them which is something other fanfics don’t do The System is also pretty good nothing to overpowered and is instead simple and easy to understand
Sigh, this is unreadable. For starters, the MC is a edgy twelve year old Kage level fighter who thinks of himself to be the smartest and openly opposes everyone. Next, everyone else has the mentality and planning skills of a 4 year old child. Not a single person in this fanfic is worthy of being called a 'ninja'I'll tell how ridiculous the situation is - The 3rd Great Ninja War has started. Konoha is said to be attacked by everyone. But instead of giving their all in battle, Konoha Elders are trying to get the MC killed and sacrificing hundreds of Uchiha while MC's father kills Root ninjas. What a war plan. Just wow. Oh, and all the village elders are shown to be the epitome of evil. Senju clan? Killed by the elders. Uchiha clan? they have the same plans for them.The characterization doesn't match their canon personalities. The dialogues of the Village Elders also sound to be like of little children rather than of experience war-hardened ninjas. Oh, and a major part of the battles looks to be written by Chatgpt. And for some reason, the author switched from normal way of writing to showing 5 PoV in a single battle. Anyways, story is not worth reading unless you are looking to read something that would amuse you by how bad it is. PS : If Author reads this review, I hope he takes it as a challenge to not repeat idiosyncrasies as the above in his next book and actually put some work into making the characters realistic.
So far i like it.The main character does the right thing from my point of view.And the original idea of patriotism infuriates me.What is the point of kowtowing before danzo and hiruzen if you know for sure that they definitely won’t wish you well.
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I don’ know why, but I fell in love with the story instantly. The writing feels so smooth and the transitions between scenes are great. Please update quickly
good fan fic what makes it even better is that the mc ain't licking sarutobi's a*se
dropping. i guess you know why. the previous story was good though..................................................., ..................................................
I love this novel so pls don't change anything about it. Updates are great the grammar is ok. The concept of the novel is very intriguing an very well done. I have this saved in my library. Keep on writing because your are a great writer.
Quite intriguing and interesting this book has been especially Uchiha Karan and the way how he has trained his soldiers and picked the right people to be General's as well Shadow Guards impressed by way the Shadow Guards were able to hold there own against Orochimaru overall enjoyed reading this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Meh, I don't really like this one. Boring as f. Usual op Mc, no context to Main character's power. No training arc or anything instant op. Way too boring. King's system? Lol name sucks
Feels like I've seen a lot if Uchiha army building novels around lately. Like the rest of them, I'm not surprised that this one also failed. This author also has one other light novel with Bleach powered protagonist in Naruto, that one is actually really great and would recommend it.
I really enjoyed this and I hope you continue writing. And ignore the Fool that give bad reviews. , , , , , ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,......,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,....
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! 😁👍👍 It have a good story/plot and good translate/word.. I like that MC/Karan is powerful enough to fight with Kage level ninja.. Hope he can change many thing, like Uchiha massacre, etc (please kill Danzo quickly, he's the source of Uchiha downfall).. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍😍😍
Completed it.. I quite enjoyed it, unfortunately it is unfinished and there is no sign of the author after 3 months. Someone lemme know if the author is gonna continue but for now, I’ll be taking this out of my library.