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1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)
Not gonna lie was very funny and an intriguing read so far, looking forward and hoping you continue as it has great potential. Really hope you watch the anime or read the manga, it’s great.
great fanfic!!! this fanfic has great potential, in my opinion. Now we come to the grammar quality. Fortunately the grammar quality is not that bad. Every now and then there is a grammar mistake but it is readable. In order to avoid these grammar mistakes you could use grammmarly. It proof reads your text!!! But you dont have to as it is still readable. Keep up the good work, author!
Choji is the love interest. Repulsive. ............................................................................................................
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)
Not gonna lie was very funny and an intriguing read so far, looking forward and hoping you continue as it has great potential. Really hope you watch the anime or read the manga, it’s great.
great fanfic!!! this fanfic has great potential, in my opinion. Now we come to the grammar quality. Fortunately the grammar quality is not that bad. Every now and then there is a grammar mistake but it is readable. In order to avoid these grammar mistakes you could use grammmarly. It proof reads your text!!! But you dont have to as it is still readable. Keep up the good work, author!
Choji is the love interest. Repulsive. ............................................................................................................